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February 1, 2025 at 10:30 am #196644
Oh dear!
Don’t worry, you’re in no trouble at all. I’m sure that can get confusing.
š¶ I'm still dancing to the music in the garden that was so much brighter then...š¶
February 1, 2025 at 10:30 am #196645Haha. You have no idea.
ugh.
I didn’t fully edit it.
good grief.
I’m glad Joseph is no longer in this book.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:31 am #196646Oh no⦠oh no⦠Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! š¢
And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads.šI love the title and the verse at the beginning too. Iām excited to see what happens next⦠š¬
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
February 1, 2025 at 10:32 am #196647You know what, I was just thinking about something.
wasn’t the first time we “met” when I helped you figure out how to add a signature quote?
(random thought.)
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:34 am #196648That was you? I can’t remember if you were the one who helped me…it may have been that though.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, “I like this girl!” Scottish…your firey debate with Power…your writings…
š¶ I'm still dancing to the music in the garden that was so much brighter then...š¶
February 1, 2025 at 10:36 am #196649Oh no⦠oh no⦠Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! š¢
Oh this is perfect!!! I had no idea anyone liked them yet!! *evil grin*
And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads. š*Indignant sniff*
There wasn’t going to be a third and fourth book in the first place.
There wasn’t going to be a second one for that matter.ĀBut they wouldn’t shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more through this series. Anyhow, after a lot of prayer, here we are.I love the title and the verse at the beginning too. Iām excited to see what happens next⦠š¬
Thank you so much!!! These two last books are my favorites I think.
oh, btw, if the protection squad shows up, i swear I’ll barricade myself in the house with Leon and Julian at gunpoint.
So don’t even think about it.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:38 am #196650I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, āI like this girl!ā Scottishā¦your firey debate with Powerā¦your writingsā¦
Haha! That’s great!
Wait….. what debate with Power? I don’t recall one….. what was it about?
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:43 am #196652Okay, I mostly like Julian to be honest. I donāt know much about Leon yet, but Iāll probably grow to like him too.
There wasnāt going to be a third and fourth book in the first place. There wasnāt going to be a second one for that matter.Ā But they wouldnāt shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more through this series. Anyhow, after a lot of prayer, here we are.
Thatās really interesting. Glad you ended up writing more (though Iām not sure if I will be after this book! š)
These two last books are my favorites I think.
Good to know!
oh, btw, if the protection squad shows up, i swear Iāll barricade myself in the house with Leon and Julian at gunpoint.
Whatāwhat? I didnāt even⦠I didnāt even say anything! You canāt do that!
Whose house are you even in??"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
February 1, 2025 at 10:47 am #196654Really? Julian is pretty great. I may like Leon better. Not sure though. They make a fun pair because they are opposites.
The protection squad comment was just a little heads up, lest thoughts of such deeds should cross thy mind.
Now I sound like PowerFires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:51 am #196656Wow, you really do sound like Power. š
Good, I canāt wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
February 1, 2025 at 10:54 am #196657Good, I canāt wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.
they would both be insulted by that.
lolololol.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:55 am #196658Thatās fair. Lol
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
February 1, 2025 at 10:55 am #196659Well, he was talking about gross things brothers do to their sisters…and you were like, “N-O. My brothers doĀ notĀ do that. They’re trained to be gentlemen.”
I thought a real fight was going on (Power insulted your Scottish heritage) until some amends were made between you two. *whew* It was greatly relieving.
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February 1, 2025 at 10:56 am #196660š
what do you think of the mood board for the book?
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
February 1, 2025 at 10:56 am #196661I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Really? So, what did you think about me and how I was like?
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