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February 1, 2025 at 10:30 am #196644
Oh dear!
Don’t worry, you’re in no trouble at all. I’m sure that can get confusing.
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 10:30 am #196645Haha. You have no idea.
ugh.
I didn’t fully edit it.
good grief.
I’m glad Joseph is no longer in this book.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:31 am #196646Oh no… oh no… Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! 😢
And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads.😉I love the title and the verse at the beginning too. I’m excited to see what happens next… 😬
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 1, 2025 at 10:32 am #196647You know what, I was just thinking about something.
wasn’t the first time we “met” when I helped you figure out how to add a signature quote?
(random thought.)
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:34 am #196648That was you? I can’t remember if you were the one who helped me…it may have been that though.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, “I like this girl!” Scottish…your firey debate with Power…your writings…
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 10:36 am #196649Oh no… oh no… Ellette, what are you going to do to them?? My poor Leon and Julian!! 😢
Oh this is perfect!!! I had no idea anyone liked them yet!! *evil grin*
And we totally called that they were going to be the next leads. 😉*Indignant sniff*
There wasn’t going to be a third and fourth book in the first place.
There wasn’t going to be a second one for that matter.But they wouldn’t shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more through this series. Anyhow, after a lot of prayer, here we are.I love the title and the verse at the beginning too. I’m excited to see what happens next… 😬
Thank you so much!!! These two last books are my favorites I think.
oh, btw, if the protection squad shows up, i swear I’ll barricade myself in the house with Leon and Julian at gunpoint.
So don’t even think about it.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:38 am #196650I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, “I like this girl!” Scottish…your firey debate with Power…your writings…
Haha! That’s great!
Wait….. what debate with Power? I don’t recall one….. what was it about?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:43 am #196652Okay, I mostly like Julian to be honest. I don’t know much about Leon yet, but I’ll probably grow to like him too.
There wasn’t going to be a third and fourth book in the first place. There wasn’t going to be a second one for that matter. But they wouldn’t shut up and let me move on. I believe that God wanted to say some more through this series. Anyhow, after a lot of prayer, here we are.
That’s really interesting. Glad you ended up writing more (though I’m not sure if I will be after this book! 😭)
These two last books are my favorites I think.
Good to know!
oh, btw, if the protection squad shows up, i swear I’ll barricade myself in the house with Leon and Julian at gunpoint.
What—what? I didn’t even… I didn’t even say anything! You can’t do that!
Whose house are you even in??"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 1, 2025 at 10:47 am #196654Really? Julian is pretty great. I may like Leon better. Not sure though. They make a fun pair because they are opposites.
The protection squad comment was just a little heads up, lest thoughts of such deeds should cross thy mind.
Now I sound like PowerNo half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:51 am #196656Wow, you really do sound like Power. 😅
Good, I can’t wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 1, 2025 at 10:54 am #196657Good, I can’t wait to get to know them better since right now their personalities kind of blend together.
they would both be insulted by that.
lolololol.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:55 am #196658That’s fair. Lol
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 1, 2025 at 10:55 am #196659Well, he was talking about gross things brothers do to their sisters…and you were like, “N-O. My brothers do not do that. They’re trained to be gentlemen.”
I thought a real fight was going on (Power insulted your Scottish heritage) until some amends were made between you two. *whew* It was greatly relieving.
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 10:56 am #196660😅
what do you think of the mood board for the book?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 1, 2025 at 10:56 am #196661I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Really? So, what did you think about me and how I was like?
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
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