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    hybridlore
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      @ellette-giselle

      KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. 🤔

      “What? What did I do?” *in very innocent voice.*

      Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑

      “I like good strong words that mean something!"

      #198975
      Ellette Giselle
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        @hybridlore

        KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

         

        Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑

         

        *indignant sniff*

         

         

        No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

        #198996
        Keilah H.
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          @ellette-giselle

          the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name)

          I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

          Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country hasn’t outlawed Christianity) might get you out of having to do it though.

          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

          #198997
          Keilah H.
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            Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD

            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

            #198999
            Ellette Giselle
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              @keilah-h

              I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.

              Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.

               

              lso, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD

              Hmmmm.

               

              Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?

               

               

              No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

              #199000
              Keilah H.
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                @ellette-giselle

                Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.

                true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.

                Ehh, just

                 

                Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?

                hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?

                "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                #199003
                Keilah H.
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                  KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

                  I hope not, this is like the only “social media” I use outside of using youtube posts to share my fan art sometimes.

                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                  #199004
                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @keilah-h

                    Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.

                     

                    Maybe page 14?

                    I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.

                    No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                    #199028
                    Linus Smallprint
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!

                      Yup. I couldn’t get into my account for a while, so I emailed you feedback on the latest two sections. I don’t know if you saw that. But I’m back now! Maybe I should code up a new website…

                      Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                      #199039
                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @linus-smallprint

                        Yes, I got it.

                        Not sure if you got my reply….

                        No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                        #199044
                        Keilah H.
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                          @linus-smallprint I’d join if you did that!

                          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                          #199045
                          Keilah H.
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                            If it ever came to that, someone should go through and save the most important topics (book and art critiques, active roleplays, etc) so that we can just pick up right where we left off.

                            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                            #199050
                            Keilah H.
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                              @ellette-giselle all righty, I’ll look!

                              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                              #199053
                              Keilah H.
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                                @ellette-giselle The White Knight incident was also very interesting! I went back and read through the whole thing.

                                "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                                #199054
                                Liberty
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  YES!!! Help please! I’m dying under all this writing! *gasp* *head rolls off…*

                                  I’m so behind again. Maybe you could wait a day or two for me to catch up?

                                   

                                  Oh yes. I understand what you said to me about Leon’s past.

                                   

                                  "He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon

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