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March 4, 2025 at 12:03 pm #198973
KP is breaking on my phone. I got emailed for that but when I clicked on it, it did not show your post. Now I’m on my laptop, and somehow it shows it now. đ¤
âWhat? What did I do?â *in very innocent voice.*
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. đ
âI like good strong words that mean something!"
March 4, 2025 at 12:06 pm #198975KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. đ
*indignant sniff*
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
March 4, 2025 at 1:32 pm #198996the womenâs draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my authorâs name)
I don’t know if that’ll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You can’t exactly change your author name to a man’s….and even if you did, they’d probably try to draft “him” lol.
Pleading medical or religious exemption (if the country hasn’t outlawed Christianity) might get you out of having to do it though.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 1:33 pm #198997Also, your recent chapters were great! It’s good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I can’t help but wonder if you’re setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down later…….Knowing you XD
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 1:39 pm #198999I donât know if thatâll be helpful (if you mean drafting for war). You canât exactly change your author name to a manâsâŚ.and even if you did, theyâd probably try to draft âhimâ lol.
Oh not to a man’s! Just not my name so that I’ll be untrackable. An alias.
lso, your recent chapters were great! Itâs good to see that more and more of the empire is turning to God, but I canât help but wonder if youâre setting them up with nice things only to have it all come crashing down laterâŚâŚ.Knowing you XD
Hmmmm.
Any thoughts on this whole “White Knight” business?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
March 4, 2025 at 1:41 pm #199000Oh not to a manâs! Just not my name so that Iâll be untrackable. An alias.
true, but even if you change it to another female name they might still be after you.
Ehh, just
Any thoughts on this whole âWhite Knightâ business?
hmm? I must’ve missed that chapter (happens sometimes), how far back is it so I can read through it?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 1:43 pm #199003KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
I hope not, this is like the only “social media” I use outside of using youtube posts to share my fan art sometimes.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 1:43 pm #199004Not sure. It’s been going on ever since they hit the new town.
Maybe page 14?
I’ll have to look if you can’t find it.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
March 4, 2025 at 3:04 pm #199028KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
Yup. I couldn’t get into my account for a while, so I emailed you feedback on the latest two sections. I don’t know if you saw that. But I’m back now! Maybe I should code up a new website…
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
March 4, 2025 at 5:23 pm #199039Yes, I got it.
Not sure if you got my reply….
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
March 4, 2025 at 6:21 pm #199044@linus-smallprint Iâd join if you did that!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 6:36 pm #199045If it ever came to that, someone should go through and save the most important topics (book and art critiques, active roleplays, etc) so that we can just pick up right where we left off.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 6:56 pm #199050@ellette-giselle all righty, I’ll look!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 7:52 pm #199053@ellette-giselle The White Knight incident was also very interesting! I went back and read through the whole thing.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
March 4, 2025 at 8:12 pm #199054YES!!! Help please! I’m dying under all this writing! *gasp* *head rolls off…*
I’m so behind again. Maybe you could wait a day or two for me to catch up?
Oh yes. I understand what you said to me about Leon’s past.
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