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Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!
So wait, are the only people at that place students? I don’t see much mention of villagers during that winter season. If there were villagers, did they move into the University as well?
Is their inn connected to the University? Because in that deep of snow… amid a blizzard, it wouldn’t be a great idea to cross over streets to get inside another building.
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