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I promise it was completely coincidental.
this time.
Well, you’ve already got a Roland for my dad, and a Julian and Adrian for two of his brothers. If you manage to get the names of his other three brothers in there, then I’m going to be suspicious. (You however did get what was almost the name of the 5th brother, Quinton)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
hah!! That’s great! This is going to be so funny if I do!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God