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Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Thank you!!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow
And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
I will! So far there’s not much… but we just started the story. Don’t worry, I’ll let you know. Right now I’m just chaffing because it’s not Tuesday.
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
Awesome, thanks!!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last time…
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @theshadow @anyone-else"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
ugh!
it’s making me request access again.
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
Lesson learned… I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
YAHOO!!!! I LOVE this book SO MUCH!!!
You are amazing girl!!!
Oh man, I am getting so sucked into the story! Wow! Rare that a book gets me like this! WAY TO GO!
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
Thanks!! I’m so so glad you like it!! 😊 I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Of course! Yes, prayer is the best thing. He really will speak through you.
idk about the account. My computer is flipping out today.
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
@ellette-giselle (I know you’re away, so don’t feel obligated to respond to this until you get back) @theshadow @whalekeeper @koshka @raxforge
Sorry these are late, it slipped my mind until last night. Without further ado, here are chapters seven and eight (also known as the underground church chapters).
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-zMrzq00iV3Dl0rNRM11Es_dJGZWv-3pF2haGGc5x4o/edit
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
Some things I’d really like to hear from y’all are scene ideas. I’m planning to go back and extend a lot of the earlier chapters (at least 1-6) because I didn’t have the same word count goal for them as I do now. So if you have any ideas for scenes that would fit into those (or future scenes) I would love to hear them. So far I have a chapter outline that goes up to 20, and I’m currently at 16, so the rest of the book still has lots of space.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
no!!! I can’t access this without my laptop!! 😭😭😭😭
I’ll let you know what I think the minute I get home!!
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
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