Home Page › Forums › Fiction Writing › Critiques › Novel Critique Requests › The Color of Hope
- This topic has 146 replies, 10 voices, and was last updated 8 hours, 39 minutes ago by
Keilah H..
-
AuthorPosts
-
January 30, 2025 at 4:29 pm #196518
Thanks!! So glad you like it! š And hey, if you have tips, I know youāre the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
January 30, 2025 at 4:29 pm #196519Thank you!!
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
January 30, 2025 at 4:30 pm #196520@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow
And yāall, youāre able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didnāt need super precise, line-by-line edits since Iām going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
January 31, 2025 at 7:33 am #196559I will! So far there’s not much… but we just started the story. Don’t worry, I’ll let you know. Right now I’m just chaffing because it’s not Tuesday.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
January 31, 2025 at 11:05 am #196574Awesome, thanks!!
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
February 4, 2025 at 10:50 am #196946Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last timeā¦
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @theshadow @anyone-elseThe KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
February 4, 2025 at 11:35 am #196951ugh!
it’s making me request access again.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 4, 2025 at 12:03 pm #196963Lesson learnedā¦ I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
February 4, 2025 at 12:23 pm #196970YAHOO!!!! I LOVE this book SO MUCH!!!
You are amazing girl!!!
Oh man, I am getting so sucked into the story! Wow! Rare that a book gets me like this! WAY TO GO!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 4, 2025 at 2:01 pm #197005Thanks!! Iām so so glad you like it!! š Ā I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
February 4, 2025 at 2:12 pm #197007Of course! Yes, prayer is the best thing. He really will speak through you.
idk about the account. My computer is flipping out today.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
February 4, 2025 at 3:03 pm #197012February 12, 2025 at 9:51 am #197640@ellette-giselle (I know youāre away, so donāt feel obligated to respond to this until you get back) @theshadow @whalekeeper @koshka @raxforge
Sorry these are late, it slipped my mind until last night. Without further ado, here are chapters seven and eight (also known as the underground church chapters).
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-zMrzq00iV3Dl0rNRM11Es_dJGZWv-3pF2haGGc5x4o/edit
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
February 12, 2025 at 10:09 am #197641Some things Iād really like to hear from yāall are scene ideas. Iām planning to go back and extend a lot of the earlier chapters (at least 1-6) because I didnāt have the same word count goal for them as I do now. So if you have any ideas for scenes that would fit into those (or future scenes) I would love to hear them. So far I have a chapter outline that goes up to 20, and Iām currently at 16, so the rest of the book still has lots of space.
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
February 12, 2025 at 11:05 am #197643no!!! I canāt access this without my laptop!! šššš
Iāll let you know what I think the minute I get home!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
-
AuthorPosts
- You must be logged in to reply to this topic.