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    hybridlore
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      @whalekeeper

      Thanks!! So glad you like it! šŸ˜ And hey, if you have tips, I know youā€™re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.

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      #196519
      hybridlore
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        @theshadow

        Thank you!!

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        #196520
        hybridlore
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          @ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow

          And yā€™all, youā€™re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didnā€™t need super precise, line-by-line edits since Iā€™m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.

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          #196559
          Ellette Giselle
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            @hybridlore

            I will! So far there’s not much… but we just started the story. Don’t worry, I’ll let you know. Right now I’m just chaffing because it’s not Tuesday.

            No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

            #196574
            hybridlore
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              @ellette-giselle

              Awesome, thanks!!

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              #196946
              hybridlore
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                Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last timeā€¦

                https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit


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                #196951
                Ellette Giselle
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                  @hybridlore

                  ugh!

                  it’s making me request access again.

                  No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                  #196963
                  hybridlore
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                    @ellette-giselle

                    Lesson learnedā€¦ I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?

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                    #196970
                    Ellette Giselle
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                      @hybridlore

                      YAHOO!!!! I LOVE this book SO MUCH!!!

                      You are amazing girl!!!

                       

                      Oh man, I am getting so sucked into the story! Wow! Rare that a book gets me like this! WAY TO GO!

                      No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                      #197005
                      hybridlore
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                        @ellette-giselle

                        Thanks!! Iā€™m so so glad you like it!! šŸ˜Š Ā I have been praying over it for a while, that God would help me have the right words and ideas. Thank you so much for your encouragement!

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                        Ellette Giselle
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                          @hybridlore

                          Of course! Yes, prayer is the best thing. He really will speak through you.

                           

                          idk about the account. My computer is flipping out today.

                          No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                          #197012
                          TheShadow
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                            @hybridlore

                            Yess!! Will look at these later

                            ā€œOur house is full of ducks!!!!ā€

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                            hybridlore
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                              @ellette-giselle (I know youā€™re away, so donā€™t feel obligated to respond to this until you get back) @theshadow @whalekeeper @koshka @raxforge

                              Sorry these are late, it slipped my mind until last night. Without further ado, here are chapters seven and eight (also known as the underground church chapters).

                              https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-zMrzq00iV3Dl0rNRM11Es_dJGZWv-3pF2haGGc5x4o/edit

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                              hybridlore
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                                Some things Iā€™d really like to hear from yā€™all are scene ideas. Iā€™m planning to go back and extend a lot of the earlier chapters (at least 1-6) because I didnā€™t have the same word count goal for them as I do now. So if you have any ideas for scenes that would fit into those (or future scenes) I would love to hear them. So far I have a chapter outline that goes up to 20, and Iā€™m currently at 16, so the rest of the book still has lots of space.

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                                #197643
                                Ellette Giselle
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                                  @hybridlore

                                  no!!! I canā€™t access this without my laptop!! šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ˜­

                                  Iā€™ll let you know what I think the minute I get home!!

                                  No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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