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You’re so welcome!! Aww, thank you!! You are too! ❤️❤️❤️
Yw!!!! 💖❤️💗 Aww, thanks girl!!!
Sure! I’m about to eat dinner, but I can talk for a few minutes! If I suddenly disappear, I went to eat dinner, cuz my dad likes to eat fast 🙂 lol
Totally understand! 😀
Hmm…so whats your fantasy book about? The one with Jared? 😀
Ooh, fun!!! I don’t talk about it a lot…XD
It has 4 MC’s:
Michael, the prince, who isn’t interested in becoming King
Josephine, a peasant girl who is unsure of what the future holds
Alden, King Darvian’s (Michael’s father) retainer, and a former slave of Acheron’s but was freed from his bondage
Jared, Acheron’s personal slave, who doesn’t realize what he’s worth and doesn’t realize that he can be freed
It’s a semi-allegorical novel, with God being represented by a being called The Light. (an allegorical figure for Jesus has not been created yet, but I want to have one 😉) and The Dark is the enemy, with Acheron as a human representation of darkness
The plot is still being figured out, but there will be adventure and romance (Michael and Josephine as a couple! 😍) and have no fear, for Jared is eventually freed from his bondage to Acheron
The plot is still almost non-existent 😂
But Darvian may die, Michael has to become king and fight Acheron, and Acheron may rule for a short time (especially if it becomes multiple books…🤐🤐🤐) because the people are convinced that he knows what’s right for them and trust him (and maybe that’s where my Jesus figure could come in…ooh, I’m coming up with ideas while talking about this XD) and WANT him to rule over them to “free” them
but yeah…I don’t have a whole lot figured out for it yet. 😂
I focus more on my Historical-Fiction novels, lol, but I still have the idea and may try to do it one day 😀
I haven’t completely decided on the exact/main themes, but it will definitely have themes like sacrifice, how everyone has a purpose/destiny, love, freedom/bondage, forgiveness, redemption, salvation, and probably even more XD
I just love themes in stories. 😂
Now, I have a question for you!
Other than the villain (aka Vance! XD) who is your least favorite character in your main WIP??? 😏
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That was a lot to type XDXDXD
@freedomwriter76 Nice board! I’m halfway finished on the one I’m making. I’m still looking for pictures of the charrie I’m making it for.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
@lightoverdarkness6 Ok, that’s cool!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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I’m just randomly wondering if anyone else here has ever tried having the bot voice on Word read your book to you. I’m doing it rn to help me edit, see if all sentences flow naturally, etc. and it’s a different experience 😂 Mainly because this book is so emotional and it’s weird to hear it read by a voice with absolutely no feeling. But I do it to force myself to edit because unless something reads it to me, I might not ever read it. XD
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Oh no. XD *memories of hearing siri tell me a story*
No, I haven’t done that yet. XD But I might have to now…if only for laughter.
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19@joy-calle
Lol 😂 That’s hilarious!
I used Google Docs, so I’m not sure if it’d be able to read it to me, but if it could, I’d love to see it try to pronounce some things. XD
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
@joy-calle LOL I’ve done that before. Word totally butchered my character names. My iPad did better, but only because I found I could teach it how to pronounce the names.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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@joy-calle OH. MY. GOSH. YES!!!! 😂😂😂😂 I’ve done that before, and you’re right, IT FEELS SO WEIRD!!!!!! XD
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How was church?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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@mineralizedwritings Hi Min!!! ❤️❤️❤️🙋♀️ How are you doing this fine afternoon? 🥰
Ahhh, I didn’t go to Church today 😅 I went with my fam to see my Nana and Papa (Grandparents, whatever someone calls them 🥰) today. 💖 So yeah, we did that. XD❤️ It was great getting to see them though! We try to do it every other weekend and we hadn’t seen them in a while, but our Saturday was packed, so we went today instead 😅❤️ But yeah! 🥰
How was your church service?
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Rather tired and sad, but that’s nothing new lol. Maybe because it’s cloudy out. Or because I’m bored, that’ll do it sometimes. I’m in the state called “blah” XD when you don’t know what to do with your time because your kinda tired but too unmotivated to do anything useful XD. I have been packing for my mom and I’s trip, we leave tomorrow.
Also did some art yesterday, Kaine and Everly, it’s my new pfp.
Sounds like fun!
Church was good, it was basically about how not one of us is righteous, and how sinful we are in comparison to God’s perfection.
How are you doing? 💗💗(I mean besides getting to be with your grandparents)
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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I guess you could say I’ve also been writing? The kind where you just think and don’t wright anything down 😭🤣🤣
There’s a whole bunch of chaos at the end of book three, and there’s a scene where Tauren and Lesli have to fake being Maylee’s parents in order to keep her safe because of one of the antagonists… just yeah. The whole thing is a chaotic mess.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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@mineralizedwritings Aww, I’m sorry you’re feeling that way, Min. But I do understand that feeling. I felt like that a lot a few months back, and I still get that way sometimes, so I do understand the “blah” state. I’m still praying for you. ❤️
YES, I MEANT TO SAY…I LOVE THE PFP!!!! They’re just so cute and I just…I’m…in LOVE!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Ooh, good sermon topic! 😉
I’m doing pretty well, thanks for asking!!! 💖💖💖 A little sore from pulling a muscle yesterday, 😅, but doing well!!! ❤️
I’m currently trying to start/write a Reuben scene for the sequel novel…😏
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@mineralizedwritings I do that all the time…😅😂😭
My best friend was once like, “Writing!? Wait, do I have to actually write to be a writer!?” Lol XD It happens to us all!!! XDXDXD
Woah…that is chaos! 😅 But I suppose it should be expected in Novels…XD Especially dystopian! 😂 It sounds like a pretty cool idea tho…🥰😍
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