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Lol I get it! How much to share…
XD I’d love to hear it!
@freedomwriter76
The baby for sure! 😭 thanks for the warning, for some reason screaming does get me so that’s good to know. I can skip those scenes though.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
@mineealizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 @joy-calle aww thx!!!
imma tag @whalekeeper too just in case lol
SO First off I just really wanted to share the adorableness that is child Ara and November XD.
I don’t really have scenes written ( 😭 )
But I do know what they’re like and can imagine them in my head playing and just…ugh they’re sooo adorable!
So first off-how they meet.
I mentioned before that November is basically brainwashed (technically by both parents and Eder) and his sister is told he’s dead.
His flame is recessed, (which causes problems in the future for him) and he doesn’t remember anything after the brainwashing….
He’s a five year old who wakes up with his father, in the woods, traveling.
And this is the only life he knows right now. Because it’s all he remembers. Being all you remember and being so young, I feel like his mind would try to “fill in the gaps” for him, whereas an adult mind would be more like “Wait…this isn’t right.”
He asks questions, being the curious boy he is, but gets no answers. All he knows is his father, and traveling until they reach A’Grend.
By the time they do, he’s already learned who his father is as a person: demanding of perfection, cold, calculating, etc.
And who he is as a son: A mess-up.
They reach A’Grend, and as is the process, must be held within the castle until they are allowed citizenship. (Actually they’re only given citizenship because it was the Light One’s will for November to be there 😉)
November is who he is, as the brainwashing was unable to change his personality: The adorable, roly poly, kinda clumsy but silly and immensely loving boy he’s always been.
A light in the dark.
But he’s become very shy since now, his father is all he knows…
Before, he at least had a sister who adored his company, and didn’t treat him like a constant mess up.
After gaining citizenship, the two are introduced to the Royal Family, and it’s here that November First meets Ara (agh it’s so cute)
So Ara….gah my heart.
Little Ara, was a firecracker. Kinda like Lyn, but not on the showmanship side of things.
She was just…full of energy, spark, adventure!
Full of life. And she stood for what she believed no matter what, and let her emotions lead her (sometimes into trouble)
When she meets this new pair in A’Grend, she immediately spots November and deems him her newest friend.
But the boy is extremely shy, especially because he doesn’t want to disappoint his father.
Not that this stops her, because after introducing herself, very bouncily, might I add, Ara grabs the boys little hand while the adults are distracted, and suddenly rushes off, dragging him behind her.
Later she learns his name, and this is actually where the nickname Ara is born…
(Because of November’s tiny stutter!! MY HEART)
is The two end up being found, and scolded…
But November finds that the scolding from his father, while it still hurts, isn’t quite as bad when she’s around.
Especially when she decides to Uhh….
Kinda take over after she decides Riven is being very unfair XD
And from there…their friendship spiraled.
But for November, it was basically love at first sight, him hiding behind his dad’s legs, and then spotting this extremely bright, smiling girl with brown pigtails and matching eyes who just…scoops him away to have an adventure.
It’s so cute y’all 😭
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebOh my the nickname Ara came from his stutter?! 😭😭😭😭 so cute!
XDXD That whole thing is beyond adorable 🥰🥰🤩
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
Oh! So note- I imagine them as children like Ara would take him on her “adventures” like when kids play pretend, so they’d play pirates and her bed would the pirate ship and she’d be wearing an eye patch and just all sorts of cute things, and then they have swings on the Great Tree in the garden.
But also…November gets into trouble a lot because of Ara’s adventures, and while Ara sometimes gets into trouble too, we all know that Rivne’s punishments are cruel…and while maybe not “physical” they are made to break November.
But he doesn’t tell little Ara about them because he doesn’t want her to be sad…. 😭
for instance… I mentioned this in one of my drafts, one time when they were kids they dug holes in his backyard searching for “buried treasure”….
Riven made him refill all of the holes…by himself….
It was already midnight, and it took until 3 AM.
……He was 7
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@mineralizedwritings Yw!!!! ❤️❤️❤️ Oh yeah, totally understand. I’ve skipped parts in movies before XD
@godlyfantasy12. OH. MY. WORD!!!!!!! AHHHHH, THAT IS THE MOST ADORABLE THING EVER!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍AND NO, NOVEMBER, THE BABY!!!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
(at least I already got your permission to go after Riven…XD)
OH. MY. GOSH.
THAT IS SO PRECIOUS AND ADORABLE AND JUST AHHHHHHHHH 😍😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Her nickname came from his stutter?! OH MY WORD SOOOOOO SWEET!!!!!!! AHHHH
AND NOOOOO!!! NOVEMBER!!!!!! THE SWEET BABYY!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
(……Can I go after Riven too??? XD)
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*Hugs poor baby*
😭😭🥰🥰
NOVEMBER YOU’RE WORTH SO MUCH MORE THAN THAT ;(
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Question for y’all: how and when did you get into writing?
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Those are the people I saw were on here. If I missed anyone please tag them for me. 😉
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@sarafini
@whalekeeper is another one 😉Ooh, great question!!!
Welll…I’ve been writing probably since I was 6 or 7, but I didn’t start taking writing seriously until about…oh…3-4 years ago. I was writing a Fanfic that combined one character from the Super Mario Series, Sonic the Hedgehog characters, and my aunt’s book characters (she’s the one who first inspired me to write, lol! XD). It was the most random, crazy thing, but it was also my first step to learning how to write a long book, and everyone enjoyed it.
I came up with one of my American Revolution books a little before that, I believe, and after writing the fanfic (which I have never finished…😂) I started writing it because writing was suddenly fun to me.
My writing just took off from there, and it slowly became something I wanted to spread the Gospel through as well, not just something for me to have fun. 🙂
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@freedomwriter76
Love that! 😍 I’m sure all of our stories are different which makes this cool! I’ll post mine in a little bit. 😜 I think I have talked a little bit about it but it’s kind of a long story and a little complicated so I need to spend time writing it (and I don’t have a ton of time rn lol).
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@sarafini
Thanks! Yeah, this will be really interesting!!! Ooh, can’t wait! 😀
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Here y’all go (complicated but interesting probably lol) 1st I’m a huge AIO fan and I heard about a fan script contest back in November 2019 but it was too late to send it in so I just kept it for myself. I started writing more and more. Soon 2020 happened and with it came boredom. Lol. My older sister told me she started writing novels at my age (I was 13 I think) after she heard about my script writing. That inspired me to try an AIO fan fic novel. I had hoped to publish it back then until I heard about a little thing called copyright. I was getting bored of it after awhile anyway. I could never get passed 2 or 3 chapters and had probably 3 different ideas but got bored. Then I met Anna Lane back in the fall of 2020 and we started talking. By Spring that year we knew each other really well and had the other’s phone number. I forget how it was brought up but she told me about her series and I got motivation to start one of my own. Meanwhile my cousin was reading The Hunger Games and gave me a brief explanation of the plot. I liked the Olympic part and had wanted to do something involving mind control and Paradise Lie was born on November 26, 2021. I still remember it because it was the day after Thanksgiving and my cousins and aunt were over for the weekend. The rest is history! I mainly write because my mom told me I have a gift, I love doing it and I want to touch someone’s heart (outside family/friends ).
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THEY ARE SO CUTE STAWP
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@sarafini
I’ve always loved writing but didn’t start doing it seriously until around two years ago. I also didn’t always write to honor God, but after I became a Christian that all changed. Now sharing the gospel is my first and foremost goal in everything I write.
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