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February 25, 2023 at 3:10 pm #134585
I’m doing good! Yesterday was my birthday, so….
I got some paints and a canvas, as well as a sketchpad. I like art 😊
Good!
Happy birthday!!! 🥳
That’s so cool!!
I also started a chat with some other online friends about a fanfiction idea the three of us liked.
Awesome!! 😀
Sadly I do have to get off now….but hopefully I’ll catch you on some other time!
Oh ok. Sorry it took me so long to reply. I got distracted. 🤦🏻♀️😂
See ya later!! 😀
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 25, 2023 at 3:42 pm #134589February 25, 2023 at 3:44 pm #134590Cool. So you prefer building-type games over combat\story mode stuff?
I play pretty much only Hollow Knight, which is a beautiful metroidvania. And Super Smash Bros. With five little siblings and my dad, it gets pretty crazy. 😜
Aaaand I recently tried a more horror style game. Which of course, I don’t let my siblings watch.
Ooooh HaPpY BiRtHdaY!!!
“Everything is a mountain”
February 26, 2023 at 8:08 pm #134719Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lightoverdarkness6. Here it is…🤐🤐🤐
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He pulled his arm back, shield in hand, and brought it forward again, hitting the Hydra soldier in the chest.
The man cursed and stumbled.
Steve ducked, holding his shield in front of him in both hands, and dove forward straight into the man’s stomach, knocking both of them to the ground. Steve flipped over and jumped to his feet, shield in hand.
They’d defeated so many. But there were so many more.
Steve twisted his arm, hitting another one with the shield, slamming the man to the ground. He tapped his earpiece communicator. “How’s everyone doing?”
“We’re doing fine, Steve,” Natasha said through the communicator, “and I think we may almost be done with this.”
Tony laughed. “You think!? Viola needs to give up already. She’s done for. We’ve won.”
Steve chuckled. “Seems like you have some optimism today, Tony.”
A thud sounded, followed by the sound of moving wheels…creaking, turning.
A small Hydra tank rolled forward, making sounds, preparing to fire.
Everyone’s voices rang in his ear through his earpiece. “Steve!” They screamed.
He could move…but he wouldn’t be able to get out of the way in time. He’d still be hit.
Steve clenched his shield tighter in his hands.
If now was his time to go, then he’d take it like a warrior.
“Steve!”
He turned, but he couldn’t see who had spoken before he felt someone grab him around the waist and throw him to the ground.
The tank fired.
Steve groaned as his head hit the ground with a thud, sending pain.
A bomb sounded, and the tank erupted into flames.
Steve rolled over.
Heard a soft groan.
He got onto his hands and knees…and stopped.
“Alex!” He screamed, crawling over to Alex, who laid right beside where he had been, breathing heavy, blood seeping from a wound on her chest.
The tank had hit her.
Steve looked up, staring at Tony, who had blown up the tank. “Tony! Get Bruce over here!”
Tony nodded, mask down, face pale, and took off into the air.
Steve faced Alex again, falling to his backside beside her. “Alex…come on,” he stroked her black hair, “stay with me.”
Alex smiled softly. “I’m so tired…it hurts, Steve…so much.”
“I know…I know. Just stay with me. Come on…you can stay awake.”
Alex slowly shook her head, flinching with the effort.
Steve wiped blood from her cheek. “No…stay still. Don’t move.”
“It’s okay, Steve…it’s okay. I had to rescue you…I had to save you…it was the least I could do.”
“Come on, Alex…you’re going to make it. Tony’s getting Bruce. You’ll be fine.”
Alex smiled even more. “It’s okay, Steve…it will be okay.”
Steve shook his head, forcing a smile. “Come on, Alex, stay positive…you’re going to make it.”
Alex shook her head again. “…No. I’m not. But it will be okay…it’s okay Steve…I realized that I’m not my abilities…I’m just…Alex, and I-I’ve realized that’s enough. I’m happy…I’m satisfied…I’m ready. I’m not scared…”
Steve shook his head again, even fiercer.
She was going to make it. She was going to be fine. She was going to live. She was going to be fine in just a few days. She’d be back to her usual, happy, optimistic self in no time at all.
“You’ll be fine…”
“It’s okay Steve…it’s my time to go. I’m so tired…it hurts so much…but I’m not scared, Steve. I’m not.”
“Alex, don’t do this…”
“It’s going to be okay. I promise you, everything will be okay.”
Tears trickled down Steve’s cheeks, mixing with sweat and blood, blurring his vision. “Alex…you’re going to make it. It’s going to be okay.”
“It’s time Steve…”
“No! No…you’re not going anywhere. Come on, Alex, stay focused on me. Don’t go to sleep.” Steve squeezed her hand; smiled. “Just keep your eyes on me.”
Alex smiled, squeezing his hand, tight, each breath becoming more heaved. “Steve…it’s okay. I swear to you, it’s going to be okay. Take care of Ryo for me…please.”
“You’ll be taking care of him yourself…you’ll make it, Alex. Tony and Bruce are on their way.”
“Take care of Ryo for me, Steve. It’s time for me to go…”
Steve brushed hair out of her face, more tears falling. “Alex…please…don’t do this to me…”
“I have to. It’s too late. It’s time for me to go. But Steve…”
Steve closed his eyes, trying to force back tears…fighting back tears.
The tears won.
“Alex, please…”
“…Thank you, Steve…for everything.”
And there was a soft breath, final and fleeting.
Rushed footsteps sounded.
Steve didn’t open his eyes…unable to and afraid to look.
“Steve…”
He slowly opened his eyes and turned, his blue eyes meeting Natasha’s green.
More footsteps sounded, and the rest of the Avengers surrounded him.
Natasha crouched down beside Steve. Pressed her ear to Alex’s chest.
Steve closed his eyes. Clenched his fists.
“Steve.”
He looked up, meeting Natasha’s eyes again.
Natasha’s eyes filled with tears. She brushed blonde hair out of Steve’s eyes. “I’m so sorry Steve…but she’s gone.”
Steve’s gaze fell. His eyes closed. He slid lower to the ground. Laid his head on Alex’s chest, still holding her limp hand.
And cried.
I promise, it is NOT IN VAIN!!! A villain comes to the good side because of this, I swear!!! 😭❤️
February 26, 2023 at 8:13 pm #134722@freedomwriter76
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! ALEX!!!!!!!!!!!! STEVE!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 WHY!?!
Girl…you always write the best death scenes 😭😭😅.
Oh…okay…that’s good! But still…Alex 😭😭😭😭
#HugRikerSquad
February 26, 2023 at 8:15 pm #134723@freedomwriter76
….
I was wondering why Alex’s picture wasn’t in your fan fic number 4 character board…
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#HugRikerSquad
February 26, 2023 at 9:33 pm #134729@freedomwriter76
AGH ALEX *sobs*
Poor Steve! *sadness*
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 27, 2023 at 11:56 am #134742@freedomwriter76
Who would I kill? LOL
Ok so none of the charries you know…
I had an idea awhile back for a dystopin kinda war story thingy…
basically you have a girl and a guy who have been sent on a suicide mission together. The boy is already sick, although it isn’t showing. So although he isn’t happy about it it doesn’t change his fate and he’s rather spend his life fighting than dyeing of sickness. The somehow complete the mission without dyeing, but um… he’s still sick 😭😭😭 so they are super happy to make it out together but he ends up dyeing. It’s awful;l. I know. And he has gorgeous black curls. Wow that’s depressing. XDXD anyways, that’s the idea I’ve had. But tbh, there’d have to be a better message. I could figure that out sometime if I decide to right it.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
February 27, 2023 at 12:38 pm #134743@freedomwriter76 Alex! Steve! Agggh you write the most impressive death scenes!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 27, 2023 at 12:39 pm #134744@whalekeeper Yep, mostly peaceful games. I watch my brother play Super Smash Bros with my cousins whenever we’re at their house. He says he actually doesn’t know how to play too well and usually just plain smashing buttons and hoping he doesn’t fling his guy off a cliff….
Funny enough, if it hadn’t been for that game, I wouldn’t be using a couple of its characters in my fanfics. Not that I know the backstories of most of them.
My brother has this “horror” game he likes on Roblox which isn’t actually that scary. I’ve watched him play it before, and he says it’s startling but not terrifying, and he’s gotten used to it.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 27, 2023 at 2:03 pm #134758Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! ALEX!!!!!!!!!!!! STEVE!!!!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 WHY!?!
I know…I know…the poor sweethearts. 😭❤️ Trust me…it makes me sad too…😭😭😭
Girl…you always write the best death scenes 😭😭😅.
Thanks!!! ❤️
I think.😭😅🤣
Oh…okay…that’s good! But still…Alex 😭😭😭😭
Yeah…yeah…I know…it doesn’t make it feel less sad…😭😭😭
I was wondering why Alex’s picture wasn’t in your fan fic number 4 character board…
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AGH ALEX *sobs*
Poor Steve! *sadness*
I know…😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️
Alex! Steve! Agggh you write the most impressive death scenes!!
IKR!?!? 😭😭😭😭 Aww, thanks!!! ❤️❤️❤️
Never realized I could write them so well…until I started writing them…😅🤣😭
February 27, 2023 at 2:04 pm #134759Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Who would I kill? LOL
🤷🏻♀️ Idk…🤣
basically you have a girl and a guy who have been sent on a suicide mission together. The boy is already sick, although it isn’t showing. So although he isn’t happy about it it doesn’t change his fate and he’s rather spend his life fighting than dyeing of sickness. The somehow complete the mission without dyeing, but um… he’s still sick 😭😭😭 so they are super happy to make it out together but he ends up dyeing. It’s awful;l. I know. And he has gorgeous black curls. Wow that’s depressing. XDXD anyways, that’s the idea I’ve had. But tbh, there’d have to be a better message. I could figure that out sometime if I decide to right it.
Wow…that IS sad…😭😭❤️❤️ really interesting tho…and you could totally put in a good message in it…😉❤️
February 27, 2023 at 5:35 pm #134819@freedomwriter76 You’re welcome.
Mostof my death scenes are a character sacrificing himself. Is it the same for you?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 27, 2023 at 5:57 pm #134821@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @esther-c @whalekeeper Anybody on? I am!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
February 27, 2023 at 6:46 pm #134833@freedomwriter76
Wow that was good. Is alex one of your oc’s? or somebody who dies in the movies? I’m so clueless XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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