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October 11, 2024 at 4:47 pm #187427
Just a player, I haven’t actually been a player really… only ever DMed.
I go by many names, Andrew, Andy, Mandrew, but you may call me... BATMAN!!!
October 12, 2024 at 2:31 pm #187461We saw them over here in Kansas!!!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
October 13, 2024 at 5:41 pm #187489@calyhuge finished my mansion castle thingy!
Now you’ve given me ideas and I’m gonna build a library next to it……lol
but anyway
two of my modded soldier entities decided to photobombWell, actually, one did, the other doesn’t exactly have a choice cause he’s tied up to the side of the house. He was jumping too much and I was sure he’d get over the fence because he jumps like a goat.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 13, 2024 at 5:47 pm #187490Here is a full view of the island with my mansion/castle thingy and minecart track, from the front.
The one guy still wasn’t interested in getting out of my picture.
There’s a cage in the lower corner for a mob I caught, but it got out and died.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 13, 2024 at 5:48 pm #187491The back view (so sorry if you’re annoyed at me for spamming!!)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 13, 2024 at 5:50 pm #187492A bridge to the mainland; you can also see the cross pool. I put a cherry tree next to it.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 13, 2024 at 6:44 pm #187495We saw them over here in Kansas!!!
Oh, awesome! My mom got a lot of good pictures of the sky but my phone didn’t take them that well. Lol.
"Great winds of a derecho, you're a scary bird!"
October 14, 2024 at 8:22 am #187530@keilah-h Noice stoof ye got there
I’d be a real ssssssshame if sssssssomeone were to–
I ❤️ Debating Theology
I ❤️ Family Heritage
I ❤️ MedievalsOctober 14, 2024 at 4:02 pm #187563@calyhuge AHAHAHAHAHA
truth be told, that very thing kept happening. My soldiers (like the guys in the image, I have a bunch more but they were in the house) would shoot down the mobs running about at night, but every time they did that to a creeper it’d explode, and more often than not, the fence suffered because of it. At this point I put down a command block that teleports all the creepers into a covered lava pit so that I don’t have to go through that again.
I’m not good with commands but I know how to teleport stuff lol
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 18, 2024 at 12:27 pm #187820@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @theshadow @esther-c @keilah-h @raxforge @whalekeeper @koshka @grcr
I decided to drop a scene from one of my books. Just wanted to see what y’all thought about it.
~*~
It was dark, and Jonathan couldn’t see. He was lying on something hard, and he could sense the space was cramped. Above he could hear muffled voices.
“Where is he? What have you done with him?”
“Done with who?”
“The boy. Where is the boy?”
“I don’t know. I haven’t seen him since dinner.”
“They’re hiding him. I’m sure of it.”
“No, I don’t know what you’re talking about!”
“You better start talking quickly.”
“It was me. I did it.”
“What did you do with him?”
“I didn’t want you to have him. If you were going to get him, then I thought it better no one did.”
“Where. Is. He.”
“Dead. I did him in myself so you wouldn’t get another death weapon.”
“Fanatic rebel I recon… even I’m a little surprised,”Then, a gunshot.
Jonathan gasped. He tried to scramble up and run, but his head hit against something. Reaching up, his hands met wood. Nonononono! Let me out! Someone help me!
The floor was sinking and Jonathan scrambled to get away, trying to get higher. All at once, he slipped at fell. Jonathan gasped, and for a brief moment he wondered where he was going to land. The next moment, everything went dark.“Jonathan, no matter what happens, I promise I’ll never forget you. Someday, I’ll find you again. I promise.”
“How?”
“I don’t know… but I will. Jonathan, do you remember what the V means?”
“Victory.”
“And Victory means the overcoming of an enemy and achieving the objective in a struggle against all odds and difficulties. I will find you.”Jonathan opened his eyes and found he was lying on the cement. Slowly, he stood. Across from him he made out a figure in the dim light. Jonathan stared, trying to see the man’s face. A beam of light shown on him, and Jonathan gasped.
His brother looked exactly the same, except he was taller, and he was in uniform. He smiled and raised his fingers in a V.
At that moment, an explosion rocked the ground. Jonathan stumbled and fell to one knee. Red light flashed about him, and he smelled fire. looking up, Jonathan saw his brother was on his hands and knees. He was struggling to his feet now, wiping blood off his face. Jonathan scrambled up and raced toward him. There was another explosion, and then gunfire. Jonathan saw his brother turn, stagger, and crumple to the ground.
“No!” he screamed.
At that moment, another explosion went off and the ground collapsed. Jonathan twisted, trying to grab a hold of something. With a cry he fell.
Jonathan hit the ground hard and his eyes flew open. He thrashed about and sat up. He was on the dorm floor, tangled in his sheet.
Around him, the even breathing of his teammates filled the room. Jonathan fell back and lay on the floor, sobbing or breath. He squeezed his eyes tightly shut. It was just a dream! Nothing but a nightmare! It isn’t real. They’re all dead. They’re gone.Tears slipped down Jonathan’s face and his shoulders shook. He curled up on the floor and wept silently for all that he had lost.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
October 18, 2024 at 10:01 pm #187834Hello, poking my head out of the void to say I hope everyone is doing well and that your creative projects are flowing smoothly ^.^
I was active years ago and have been feeling nostalgic over the past few days haha. Glad to see the forums still alive and kicking!
You can pronounce it however you want.
October 23, 2024 at 7:40 pm #188178Pov you just notice that you created a new character with a name that nobody you know irl has but literally meet someone with that name a few months later
😑😑
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
October 23, 2024 at 8:46 pm #188179@esther-c lol
My character names are usually pretty unique, but I often source them from people I know or other characters with similar names, and change a letter or two. Or I name them a word that relates to their personality or stick two words that sound good together (that works better for fantasy stories than modern or contemporary ones)
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
October 23, 2024 at 11:32 pm #188183@esther-c @theducktator @kosha
its so sad, I have talked with you three once… And never again…. I mean I got to know you a little… But I think so far with my about a month being on here I have bonded with others more.
So if I could get to talk with you guys more that would be great!!!! I dont know what we could talk about… Maybe about our WIPS maybe our fav books? But I’m going to start with my denomination! I am a Catholic! how about you guys?
THANKS! Talk to you guys soon! (Hopefully…)
Spookay month!
October 24, 2024 at 11:45 am #188204Loved that snippet! I like how the reader is just as confused as Jonathan, I kinda felt like I was reading an anime lol.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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