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September 16, 2024 at 3:10 pm #185887
@theducktator it was you who said hot dogs are tacos?
I can honestly see that lol
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 16, 2024 at 4:41 pm #185892*rushes into the Kingdom of Pen*
@ellette-giselle @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @koshka @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @anyone-else-I’m-missing-idk*drops possible snippet of a possible scene for Leon/Riker’s 3rd book and disappears back into the shadows*
His kids could, and would, continue to grow up.
Life would fly by like a whirlwind, and time would pass.
He’d make mistakes. He’d apologize. He’d laugh and he’d cry. He’d grow even as his kids grew.
He’d depend on God to help him do his best.
A small house, Iris in his arms, kids running in and out the back door, smiling, laughing, giggling, Micah sound asleep in his crib. Peace, comfort, stability—a wife that could be who God called her to be, kids who would grow up knowing that no matter what they did, it would never change the fact that God, Iris, and Riker would love them even to the end.
They would never know the pain of having a father that didn’t love them. They would never know the pain of losing their childhood far too soon.
The cycles of shame and pain and abuse had finally, fully ended.
Maybe the pain would forever remain. Maybe he would still wake up with nightmares from time to time. Maybe he’d still suffer from flashbacks. Maybe he would still bear the scars. Maybe he would forever ache from the hole in his heart where a good earthly father was meant to be. Maybe he would still have to battle generational curses that had held his family captive for decades.
Maybe he’d never fully heal.
But how wonderful it was to finally know that God was strong enough to carry even Riker’s most broken pieces.
“I can’t even begin to imagine how much pain was still in Germany…but God showed you so much and taught you even more…why do you not desire to go back?”
Riker met Iris’ curious, questioning gaze. He pressed a gentle kiss to her lips, interlaced his fingers with hers, pressed his forehead against her forehead, and drew her nearer to himself, dropping his voice to a soft whisper. “…I’m home.”
#BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior
September 16, 2024 at 4:52 pm #185893*Gasp*
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Maybe he’d never fully heal.
But how wonderful it was to finally know that God was strong enough to carry even Riker’s most broken pieces.
This is quoting material.
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the GorkSeptember 16, 2024 at 5:42 pm #185897*grabs a tissue and dabs eyes* beautiful just beautiful
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)September 16, 2024 at 6:15 pm #185898im tearing up!! Oh my goodness!! This is beautiful!!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
September 17, 2024 at 1:42 pm #185926@freed_and_redeemed That was amazing!!
I’m glad he gets a happy ending. The family’s all together and he knows God loves him.
lol my music playlist played military taps right as I typed this, oddly perfect
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 17, 2024 at 3:31 pm #185934@keilah-h @koshka @rae @ellette-giselle
Thank y’all so much💜
*hands out tissues to all who need them*
and that is oddly perfect, heh
#BeardedSteveRogersIsSuperior
September 17, 2024 at 10:00 pm #185955Hey, should we bring the Topic of the Week back?
I know Kathleen probably doesn’t have time to run it anymore, but can we create our own Topic of the Week?
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)September 17, 2024 at 10:51 pm #185960YES!!!
The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.
September 18, 2024 at 2:55 pm #185981Random question: What would you do if you found out you only had a week to live?
The squirrels are collecting more nuts than usual this winter. I've already lost 3 relatives.
September 18, 2024 at 5:33 pm #185982I have done nothing but teleport bread for seven days.
–me on the last day of my life by this reckoning
it worked for one of my characters…….Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 18, 2024 at 5:35 pm #185983ok but in all seriousness I would do all the things I never got to do.
like teleporting breadno I’m kidding, stuff like read a book or watch a movie people say I’d like but I never got around to seeing, draw some, finish that story I’ve been writing, stuff like that.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 18, 2024 at 5:41 pm #185985@freed_and_redeemed I know, it was.
@theducktator YOUR SIGNATURE BRUHHHHHHHthat’s too funny.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 18, 2024 at 5:48 pm #185986ooh btw kinda random but has anyone else played either of the World of Goo games? They have AMAZING soundtracks. I have the playlists of both if you wanna give ’em a listen!
h ttps://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLzzhJ04LHCalXhhnjZdtq-YfK1jhjBkHf&si=74ol2wO_LynN0oA8
h ttps://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLouEzfegRVfQNNyUZSZfmA2q6DE-GU7EU&si=KtnJjHe22q5RXnBr
Listening to these gives me story ideas, lol.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 20, 2024 at 9:01 am #186102I tried listening to it, and it was good, but not really my style. This is what I’ve had on repeat while cleaning up the currant draft of LTBL
It’s so good!
h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zTXfTX00oJg&list=OLAK5uy_nOjcTiFZU4zbnTj7BTU7YDWRN_tuKF9LE&index=1
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
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