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    whaley
    @whalekeeper
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      @savannah_grace2009

      Lol you’re good XD

      #ProtectAdolinKholin

      #182763
      RAE
      @rae
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        @savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @whalekeeper

        exactly. If I am portraying it wrong, I need to change it. I just don’t want to change it yet because something has changed inside of Chase, and I need to figure out what it is first. That was what I was trying to say.

        "You need French Toast."
        #AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)

        #182769
        Sara
        @savannah_grace2009
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          @rae

          In my opinion, just don’t think of him as a “hero” when he sacrifices himself. You can still keep him the same, just don’t think of him the same way.

          Idk if this is making sense…

          I tried lol

          Lukas&Livia
          #Lalbert
          Sef&Chase
          #HOTTOLINE
          LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

          #182771
          Loopy
          @loopylin
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            @rae

            I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

            Sorry!

            … but I’m also glad I got you thinking 😉

            Soo if Chase’s sacrifice for Jenny felt more light and joyful, maybe you could show how he’s grown from the way he acted with Marcel? I’m not sure how exactly, but you could probably keep all the same plot points and still make it work. Though, I would recommend removing the blindness or mobility thing since, like Whaley said, the double disability feels kinda redundant.

            Hmm I had more ideas but they kinda disappeared while I started typing.

            Also, like Whaley said again, you can totally rip apart any writing I post in the future as revenge :]

            🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻

            #182772
            Sara
            @savannah_grace2009
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              @rae

              And you can rip apart my writing too XD XD

              Lukas&Livia
              #Lalbert
              Sef&Chase
              #HOTTOLINE
              LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

              #182785
              freedom
              @freed_and_redeemed
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                It’s getting more and more real, y’all….

                Rn I am making a post for Instagram that I will post once everything is finalized…

                …that announces the official release date for Freedom’s Fire

                It’s becoming so real I think I may cry💖😭

                #182786
                freedom
                @freed_and_redeemed
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                  Because y’all, if all goes well, Freedom’s Fire will be released before July is over😭😭

                  #182787
                  -GRCR-
                  @grcr
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                    @ellette-giselle

                    🫢

                    ….

                    Gah… that’s not how it ends… right? RIGHT?! 😶😶

                    _________

                    I like how you wrote this part:

                    For some reason, though he knew what was going to happen, the whole situation didn’t seem real. In fact, after the initial horrified shock, Jonathan no longer felt the stabbing fear. He was numb physically and mentally. The more he thought about it, the more Jonathan’s mind refused to wrap around the idea that he was about to die.

                    I like how it’s crazy to him that he is actually going to die… and nearly unbelievable. I think that was good. 😊

                    INTP.

                    #182791
                    Sara
                    @savannah_grace2009
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                      @freed_and_redeemed

                      FREEDOMMMM

                      I’m so happy for you, that’s so cool!!!!!!!!!

                      Lukas&Livia
                      #Lalbert
                      Sef&Chase
                      #HOTTOLINE
                      LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                      #182794
                      freedom
                      @freed_and_redeemed
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                        @grcr @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

                        I made a couple new aesthetics for Leon and Riker🥰

                        (and I absolutely adore Pinterest and Canva now y’all😂😂 so helpful)

                        Andddddd y’all get to help me decide which character to make an aesthetic for next👀👀

                        I’m doing characters from Freedom’s Fire, and rn there are 3 options:

                        1. Erich Braun

                        2. Fin Müller

                        3. Hans Baumann

                         

                        But first, Leon’s new aesthetic💙

                        #182795
                        freedom
                        @freed_and_redeemed
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                          And….Riker’s aesthetic 🤍

                          #182797
                          Sara
                          @savannah_grace2009
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                            @freed_and_redeemed

                            YESSS girl Pinterest and Canva are the BEST!

                            Hey, do you want to follow me on pinterest? You can’t search up my account cuz it’s private, but here’s the link to follow me if you want!!!!!!

                            https://pin.it/6IwrARipo

                            Lukas&Livia
                            #Lalbert
                            Sef&Chase
                            #HOTTOLINE
                            LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                            #182798
                            freedom
                            @freed_and_redeemed
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                              @savannah_grace2009 SARAAAAAA

                              TY SO MUCHHHHHHHH 💖💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😭😭

                              #182800
                              Sara
                              @savannah_grace2009
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                                @freed_and_redeemed

                                Of course girl!!! I’m literally sooo proud of you and so lucky to know you (even if it’s just on KP, girl you’re amazing!!!)

                                And I love you’re aesthetics, very aesthetic-y <3  XD XD

                                Lukas&Livia
                                #Lalbert
                                Sef&Chase
                                #HOTTOLINE
                                LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333

                                #182801
                                freedom
                                @freed_and_redeemed
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                                  @savannah_grace2009 Following you nowwwwwww 💖💖💖💖

                                  and oh my goodness, girlllll, you have Riker Protection Squad in your pinterest profile???😭🥰🥹

                                  I feel so special!!! 💖🥹🥹

                                  Ty!!!!

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