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July 15, 2024 at 9:51 am #182759July 15, 2024 at 11:08 am #182763
@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @whalekeeper
exactly. If I am portraying it wrong, I need to change it. I just don’t want to change it yet because something has changed inside of Chase, and I need to figure out what it is first. That was what I was trying to say.
"You need French Toast."
#AnduthForever (hopefully 💕)July 15, 2024 at 11:31 am #182769In my opinion, just don’t think of him as a “hero” when he sacrifices himself. You can still keep him the same, just don’t think of him the same way.
Idk if this is making sense…
I tried lol
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 15, 2024 at 11:52 am #182771I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.
Sorry!
… but I’m also glad I got you thinking 😉
Soo if Chase’s sacrifice for Jenny felt more light and joyful, maybe you could show how he’s grown from the way he acted with Marcel? I’m not sure how exactly, but you could probably keep all the same plot points and still make it work. Though, I would recommend removing the blindness or mobility thing since, like Whaley said, the double disability feels kinda redundant.
Hmm I had more ideas but they kinda disappeared while I started typing.
Also, like Whaley said again, you can totally rip apart any writing I post in the future as revenge :]
🎵It takes a long time to wait 🌻
July 15, 2024 at 11:57 am #182772And you can rip apart my writing too XD XD
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 15, 2024 at 2:41 pm #182785It’s getting more and more real, y’all….
Rn I am making a post for Instagram that I will post once everything is finalized…
…that announces the official release date for Freedom’s Fire
It’s becoming so real I think I may cry💖😭
July 15, 2024 at 2:42 pm #182786Because y’all, if all goes well, Freedom’s Fire will be released before July is over😭😭
July 15, 2024 at 2:49 pm #182787🫢
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Gah… that’s not how it ends… right? RIGHT?! 😶😶
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I like how you wrote this part:
For some reason, though he knew what was going to happen, the whole situation didn’t seem real. In fact, after the initial horrified shock, Jonathan no longer felt the stabbing fear. He was numb physically and mentally. The more he thought about it, the more Jonathan’s mind refused to wrap around the idea that he was about to die.
I like how it’s crazy to him that he is actually going to die… and nearly unbelievable. I think that was good. 😊
INTP.
July 15, 2024 at 3:27 pm #182791FREEDOMMMM
I’m so happy for you, that’s so cool!!!!!!!!!
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 15, 2024 at 3:33 pm #182794@grcr @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @smiley @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
I made a couple new aesthetics for Leon and Riker🥰
(and I absolutely adore Pinterest and Canva now y’all😂😂 so helpful)
Andddddd y’all get to help me decide which character to make an aesthetic for next👀👀
I’m doing characters from Freedom’s Fire, and rn there are 3 options:
1. Erich Braun
2. Fin Müller
3. Hans Baumann
But first, Leon’s new aesthetic💙
July 15, 2024 at 3:34 pm #182795And….Riker’s aesthetic 🤍
July 15, 2024 at 3:35 pm #182797YESSS girl Pinterest and Canva are the BEST!
Hey, do you want to follow me on pinterest? You can’t search up my account cuz it’s private, but here’s the link to follow me if you want!!!!!!
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 15, 2024 at 3:36 pm #182798@savannah_grace2009 SARAAAAAA
TY SO MUCHHHHHHHH 💖💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😭😭
July 15, 2024 at 3:37 pm #182800Of course girl!!! I’m literally sooo proud of you and so lucky to know you (even if it’s just on KP, girl you’re amazing!!!)
And I love you’re aesthetics, very aesthetic-y <3 XD XD
Lukas&Livia
#Lalbert
Sef&Chase
#HOTTOLINE
LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333July 15, 2024 at 3:38 pm #182801@savannah_grace2009 Following you nowwwwwww 💖💖💖💖
and oh my goodness, girlllll, you have Riker Protection Squad in your pinterest profile???😭🥰🥹
I feel so special!!! 💖🥹🥹
Ty!!!!
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