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Not finished yet, but I did a vid for Alpha and Emmie after Emmie’s death. Any suggestions?
My two big questions are
- Did I put the pictures to the music okay?
- Is the repetition okay, or does it feel wrong because I’m saying the same thing too much?
Enjoy!
"You need French Toast."
That was very pretty and sad!! I really like it. đđ
I think you put the pics to the music good.
Ok, so… I wasn’t expecting the repetition at first, but then I caught onto it and it was pretty enjoyable. đ
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It was synced to the music pretty well, I think, though the repetition did start to get annoying, but maybe thatâs just me. I liked the pretty pictures <3
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That’s so cute! I love Ev <3
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333Thanks!! Heâs so much fun to write đ
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
Why did you have to make is so saddd?! đ
(Thatâs such a rhetorical question. XD)
Yeah, I think the pictures went to the music well and I didnât mind the repetition. I think the only thing that wasnât the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
But thatâs all. And where do you find all your adorable couple pics???
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
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Oh my goodness, yess, they are adorable!! Andâat least the oldest twoâlook so much like their parents!
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
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Here’s a super short short story I just wrote.
I love them as a couple, y’all đ
(sorry if y’all get tagged more than once…KP hated my editing apparently ugh)
September 1919
Bullets zinged off his helmet. His boots slid in the mud. His fingers, clammy, slipped and barely clung to his rifle.
 Men screamed.
Bullets screeched.
 Horses cried out.
Blood gushed on the ground.
 Every moment like a ticking time bomb.
Every minute like his last.
 Every second like death itself.
Hans awoke with a start, sweat perspiring off his forehead. A scream still fresh on his lips, he glanced around in a panic.
SheetsâŠblanketsâŠmattressâŠdresserâŠvanity. He was-he was at home. He wasnât on the battlefield. He wasnât-âDarling? What are you doing up?â
Hans turned to his wife, who sat up in bed beside him. She laid her hand overtop his and stared into his coal eyes with her own bright blue. âHans?â
âIt-Itâs nothing. I guess itâs time to wake up-â
âSweetheart, itâs not even five in the morning yet. It is probably three at the latest. It was another nightmare, wasnât it?â
Hans tore his gaze from his wifeâs, but her gentle fingers reached over and tucked his loose blonde strands of hair behind his ears. âHans, there was nothing you could have done differently. It was-it was a miracle you even survived.â
âA miracle? You think I survived because of a miracle? What about the men that didnât survive? What about Fineas and so many others that never got to return home to their families? Did they not deserve a miracle?â
Eleanorâs hand rubbed his back, encouraging him to continue, encouraging him to let it out.
âWhat did I do to deserve some so-called miracle? If anything saved me, it was my luck. And the ones that didnât survive even though they couldâŠthey-they-â
âYou survived, HansâŠdarling, please donât blame yourself for the ones that didnât.â
Hansâ eyes met his wifeâs.
Tears brimmed Eleanorâs bright blues, and she cupped his face in her gentle hands. ââŠI would give the world for you. And if you diedâŠif I lost you,â she lowered one hand, instead laying it on her stomach, âwe wouldnât have this little miracle on itâs way.â
âEleanor-â
âHans, my dearest darling, you were gifted this life for a purpose. It wasnât an accident that you survivedâŠfar from it. God kept you alive for a reason.â
âYou know I-â
âI know you donât believeâŠI know you want nothing to do with God, but I know that he kept you alive for some kind of purpose, and I know something elseâŠâ
Hans sighed. âWhat?â
ââŠI know I couldnât survive any of this without you.â
Hans glanced up at his wife.
Eleanor smiled and opened her mouth to speak, but her words were left unspoken, lost in a loving kiss.
Hans pressed his forehead to his wifeâs.
Eleanor smiled and leaned forward, pressing her lips to his once more. ââŠThis is our story, darling, and this baby? Heâs ours. A life from so much death.â
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Aww, so sweet!!
Write what should not be forgotten. â Isabel Allende
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Aww that was sweet!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
Sorry, I completely forgot that I didn’t reply to this đ€Š. I’m still interested, please tag me for the next part when you get to it!
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@mineralizedwritings @esther-c Thanks y’all!! <3
Eleanor is actually a super sweet woman, but I sadly haven’t written her much đ„șđ
I think the only thing that wasnât the best was the color of the words. I liked the font, but I felt like with some of pictures it was hard to read.
Yeah…I was a little worried about that. Thank you for the feedback!
But thatâs all. And where do you find all your adorable couple pics???
Uhhh…I wish I could give you some smart answer, but I basically went to startpage.com and just typed in a whole slew of different key words to search. I would use Pinterest, but it’s my mom’s account, and she’s not big into couple pics XD. It took me like half an hour to find and compile the couples pics. Over all, there probably was two hours worth of picture searching, saving, and uploading in that entire project.
Also, if you go onto a search engine and type in something like “boyfriend and girlfriend anime wallpapers” or whatever, sometimes you get better results. For whatever reason, I find sites that have wallpapers sometimes have really good pics.
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