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Actually… Alpha Grath is a good guy who is so blinded by the hatred of his own father and those who murdered his brothers that he does some questionable things. Grathmere is his father, and the biggest Antag I have. He’s relatable according to other people, in that he wants revenge for the unnecessary deaths of his family. Grief made him dark.
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@rae EEEE I love that! So relatable and so fitting! Yes, that is great.
Poor Alpha Grath tho😭
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@mineralizedwritings Yes, he become’s Riker’s mentor figure, thus a good guy 😊
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@everyone thank y’all for all of your kind words/thoughts!!🩷🩷
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Ofc! (:
I posted something…um…sad…in the “A place to share whatever we’re working on” if you want to read something as equally sad as what you posted, lol
Esther can vouch for the fact that it is sad…
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333Ohhh, my bad. That makes sense!
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I’m doing good
I’ve stuck with my resolutions so far, I learned that cardio is miserable, but I’ve been enjoying pilates (I’m doing one of those workout plans with the videos and stuff)
my family also got Sling for a month cause of sports, but they also have a bunch of Marvel movies on demand, I got more than halfway through Infinity War but I didn’t get to finish it (I was really close to the saddest scene in marvel history… when Wanda destroys vision!!) also I noticed something I never noticed before and it almost made me cry when they’re at the compound and Vision is trying to convince wanda to destroy him, Steve’s face is so sad like he knows what Vision is going through cause he sacrificed himself all those years ago and it’s like when he is seeing Wanda he understands what Peggy must have gone through *cries*
but I’m okay now, also tonight I get to go to youth (they weren’t doing it for a few weeks cause of the holidays) and I literally can’t wait to see some of my friends (it has felt like an eternity)
in the writing department, it’s been kind of slow so I’ve been mostly reading and drawing
How are you? how’s writing going? and are there any updates on your Grandma?
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@smiley I’m happy to hear you’re doing well. And sticking with your resolutions so far…you GO, GIRL!!!! 🎉🎉
I got more than halfway through Infinity War but I didn’t get to finish it (I was really close to the saddest scene in marvel history… when Wanda destroys vision!!) also I noticed something I never noticed before and it almost made me cry when they’re at the compound and Vision is trying to convince wanda to destroy him, Steve’s face is so sad like he knows what Vision is going through cause he sacrificed himself all those years ago and it’s like when he is seeing Wanda he understands what Peggy must have gone through *cries*
Don’t do this to me, Miley😭 I didn’t even think about that…UGHHHHHHH, noooo!!!!!
STEVE!!!!!! 😭😭🩷🩷
Aww, I’m happy for you!! Friends are the best <3
I know my friends always make me feel good, so I’m happy for you🩷
Reading and drawing are good! Sorry writing is so slow tho. *hugs*
How are you? how’s writing going? and are there any updates on your Grandma?
I’m doing well!🩷 Life is going pretty well and I just feel good, y’know?
Writing is kinda coming along. I’m restarting Broken Shackles and I think Riker’s scene is better now, hehe. 😏 Next up is Leon’s scene, lol. Anyways, it’s kinda mid. I have ideas today, but yesterday was slow, so it just depends😅
Not really, or at least not many I’ve heard. (i may just not be paying attention tho😅) I think the doctors are now looking towards/planning for surgery, but idk, they still won’t exactly tell us what’s wrong, which is really frustrating, especially when I love her so much and I already have little faith in the healthcare system, heh
idk, maybe some progress towards finding out what we’ll have to do, but otherwise, not much of anything.
thx for asking tho, it means a lot <3
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Don’t do this to me, Miley😭 I didn’t even think about that…UGHHHHHHH, noooo!!!!!
STEVE!!!!!! 😭😭🩷🩷
I know my heart broke for a second
Aww, I’m happy for you!! Friends are the best <3
I know my friends always make me feel good, so I’m happy for you🩷
Yeah I love my friends, the funny thing is I have as many guy friends as girl friends lol but then again I feel like there are a lot of girls like that, honestly guys are just easier XD
I think tonight is all-campus worship night (Which I haven’t ever been to yet but I’m excited)
Reading and drawing are good! Sorry writing is so slow tho. *hugs*
*Hugs back* thanks, I’m getting through it, and I have an idea for one of my fanfics so I’m working on that right now and I’m still figuring out how I’m going to plan my novel (I had a name idea and then I was like no, I’ll save that for a later book in the series)
I also read a lot of contemporary to figure out what I like and don’t like
Writing is kinda coming along. I’m restarting Broken Shackles and I think Riker’s scene is better now, hehe. 😏 Next up is Leon’s scene, lol. Anyways, it’s kinda mid. I have ideas today, but yesterday was slow, so it just depends😅
When you say Riker’s scene is better, do you mean more tragic?!
yeah, I feel that, but you can never go wrong with Leon!
Not really, or at least not many I’ve heard. (i may just not be paying attention tho😅) I think the doctors are now looking towards/planning for surgery, but idk, they still won’t exactly tell us what’s wrong, which is really frustrating, especially when I love her so much and I already have little faith in the healthcare system
Doctors can be so frustrating!! it took a good few years before they finally diagnosed what was wrong with my Grandma
I already have little faith in the healthcare system
I get that, just remember to have high faith in God (after all Jesus healed quite a few people cause of their stong faith)
I’ll be praying
also kind of off and on that topic, I saw this thing on Pinterest and now I really want to make one, It’s a prayer bulletin board
although mine I want to be a faith bulletin board, so basically anything Jesus lol
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-Thornethx for asking tho, it means a lot <3
ofc!! I’m always here if you need to talk
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Soooo I’m listening to Matthew West’s song, “Unplanned”, and started thinking about a book I read, and that led to me thinking about my own stories…and I have a story to share with y’all…
…and y’all, idk if/how I can make it into a book, but I love it so much❤️
Anywho, here’s the story.
In the wake of the Great War (what we would call World War 1), a young couple in the war-destroyed Germany struggled together. The man with what one would now classify as PTSD, the wife just with dealing with a husband that wasn’t who he was before the war. Slowly but surely, God brought healing to them both, and they both came to learn in Yeshua, Jesus the Messiah.
But their story didn’t end there.
The couple, soon after becoming Christians, learned that they were going to have a child. Josef and Henrietta were ecstatic…they’d always wanted to be parents. But only 2 months into her pregnancy, Henrietta heard news no future mother would want to hear…she was told by a doctor that she would not survive pregnancy due to her own health issues.
The man offered to terminate the pregnancy, “for her sake”.
But Josef and Henrietta, together, made the choice to take the risk…and on Christmas Day, 1919…their son was born. Henrietta proved the doctor wrong. She survived the pregnancy, but it didn’t come without it’s complications…and when their son was only 5 years old, Henrietta tragically perished.
But even though Josef is a widow…even though Henrietta is in heaven…neither one of them would ever regret their decision.
They would never regret their decision to give their son life.
Even though it took Henrietta from Josef’s arms, he would never regret what he and his wife chose to do…he would never regret giving his son, his precious Christmas gift, his Leon, life.
😭😭❤️❤️😭😭🩷🩷😭😭
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@rae pssstttttt, girlllllll, I need some thoughts.
I’ve been kinda brainstorming a WIP of mine, “Fallen Dreams”, which is my WW1 WIP with Felix and *cries* Hans.
and i’ve been thinking…and thinking…and thinking some more about an old idea I had.
…do you think it would make Hans better (and probably more sad/tragic😭) if his birth mother was someone other than the mother his father is currently married to? Like, if his birth mother perished and his father remarried or something else along those lines?
I think it would add to his conflict with his father/add other things to him as a character
but idk, it may be a little much
but i thought i’d ask you since you’re my #1 Hans fan ❤️😂❤️
anywho, what are your thoughts?
*GASP*
OR WHAT IF HANS IS ADOPTED AND DOESN’T EVEN KNOW IT!? Like, he’s not the blood child of his mother OR father…girlll
anywaysssss, what are your thoughts on either idea? 😅
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and maybe Felix knows he’s adopted and reveals it at some point by accident
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and then Hans “understands” why no one “ever wanted him”
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@freedomwriter76 awww that first one is sweet!
and the second two ideas?
Hey, I’d try it out, might be interesting!
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let’s see how tragic I can make Hans😂
jkjk, but seriously, I gotta stop….
…I’m making myself love the villain😭🩷
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