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February 8, 2023 at 12:23 pm #132224Anonymous
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2nd MC
His knees bounced. He chewed the tip of the pencil in his hands.Β
He closed his eyes, trying to fight the pain.
But closing his eyes didn’t stop the war…closing his eyes didn’t bring Daddy back.
And closing his eyes certainly didn’t make the guilt leave. Yes, he was fighting…fighting for freedom…but something inside of him felt wrong…what if everyone had been right?
What if he was nothing but a murderer?
February 8, 2023 at 12:26 pm #132225Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Finally!!!
3rd MC
They were alone…stuck behind enemy lines…abandoned.
He had to fight…he had to be brave…he had to come home to his sister and bring Albert home with him.Β
He couldn’t give up…he wouldn’t give up.
Daddy always used to say that God was good and would carry them through.
Elias just knew God would…deep in his heart…he knew.Β
He walked over to Albert and grabbed his arms, slightly shaking him, making Albert jolt awake. “Come on, Abe…we can’t give up now.”
February 8, 2023 at 1:12 pm #132230@freedomwriter76 NOT LEONβS BABIES π
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 1:15 pm #132231@freedomwriter76 Awwww, you just love torturing your poor charries!!!
I just wanna give them all a hug now……
I’d honestly use that picture of Isabel as a reference for Feather. Except Feather has a scar from an animal’s attack on the right side of her nose and right cheek.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 8, 2023 at 1:17 pm #132234@freedomwriter76
Ikr? The sweetest charries get the most pain, it isn’t fair but we do it anyways XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
February 8, 2023 at 1:18 pm #132235@FREEDOMWRITER76
WAAIT THESE ARE LEONS BABIES? AND HE’S DIED? WHAT? NOOOOOO
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GIRL YOU’RE GONNA KILL ME!!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
February 8, 2023 at 1:22 pm #132240Also a lot of those quotes for Albert would work for Grimm π
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebFebruary 8, 2023 at 3:39 pm #132271Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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NOT LEONβS BABIES π
YESSS, LEON’S BABIES!!!! πππππ
Also a lot of those quotes for Albert would work for Grimm π
*hugs Grimm and Albert tight* ππ
Awwww, you just love torturing your poor charries!!!
Well…yeah…but don’t we all??? π π π
I just wanna give them all a hug nowβ¦β¦
Go ahead!!! πππ Though Albert may not like it the best…π
Except Feather has a scar from an animalβs attack on the right side of her nose and right cheek.
Aww, Feather!!! πππ
WAAIT THESE ARE LEONS BABIES? AND HEβS DIED? WHAT? NOOOOOO
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GIRL YOUβRE GONNA KILL ME!!
YESSS, THEY AREEE!!!!! πππππππ
February 8, 2023 at 3:54 pm #132277@freedomwriter76 Ehh, I’ll go hug them anyway.
*does it*
*voice of Albert:* Help me, author.
lol…….
Yep, Feather’s scar is not a huge one but it’s there. I don’t exactly remember how she got it.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 8, 2023 at 7:25 pm #132326Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h. Lol. π€£
*rescues Albert from the group hug* “There you go buddy…”
Hmm…I wonder where she got her scar…? ππ€π
February 9, 2023 at 11:44 am #132383@freedomwriter76
OH MY GOODNESS THAT SCENE!!!! RIKER!!!! LOUSIA!!! ππππππ
And OMG Isabel!!! Albert!! Elias!!! Ahh they’re all grown up ππππππ
And Leon!! NOOO!!!! πππππ
#HugRikerSquad
February 9, 2023 at 3:09 pm #132409@freedomwriter76
That scene is so sad!! And so sweet all at the same time!! πβ€οΈ
That story sounds so cool!! *gasp* Leon dies?! π
Anyway, his kids sound epic!!
Write what should not be forgotten. β Isabel Allende
February 9, 2023 at 8:33 pm #132483Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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OH MY GOODNESS THAT SCENE!!!! RIKER!!!! LOUSIA!!! ππππππ
AGHHH, IKR!? π
And OMG Isabel!!! Albert!! Elias!!! Ahh theyβre all grown up ππππππ
They grew up too fast!!! ππππ
And Leon!! NOOO!!!! πππππ
YESSS!!!!! ππππππ
Thanks for reading! πππ
That scene is so sad!! And so sweet all at the same time!! πβ€οΈ
IKR!? ππ Thanks for reading tho!!! πππ
That story sounds so cool!!
Thanks!!! ππ
*gasp* Leon dies?! π
*sniffs* Yeah… *cries* πππππ
Anyway, his kids sound epic!!
Thanks!!! Yeah, they are. πππ
February 9, 2023 at 8:53 pm #132488@freedomwriter76
…I don’t know how you do it, but I’m already invested in these characters.
*eagerly awaits learning more about them whenever you share more information*
What’s their last name, by the way?
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19February 9, 2023 at 8:57 pm #132489@freedomwriter76
AGHHH, IKR!? π
YESSS!!! ππππππ
They grew up too fast!!! ππππ
I know!!! ππΒ And they’re so good looking now π π€£!!
YESSS!!!!! ππππππ
Thanks for reading! πππ
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You’re so welcome!!! You’re such a good writer ππ
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