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September 10, 2023 at 4:15 pm #155972
I’m looking at your blog right now! π great ideas! I commented a couple times
I was dizzy yesterday too, but not bad. I’m glad I don’t have stairs in my house π€£
Yeah I turn 14!
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 10, 2023 at 4:22 pm #155974September 10, 2023 at 4:29 pm #155976No, I don’t blog, but I might try it someday!
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 10, 2023 at 4:32 pm #155978You should! If you ever have any questions, feel free to tag me! π
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September 10, 2023 at 4:37 pm #155980I will let you know if I ever decide to try it!
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333September 10, 2023 at 4:48 pm #155988Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @smiley @lightoverdarkness6
Thx for the input everyone!! ππ
@min
Yes, he has nightmares too, the baby π
Wellll, I don’t really have a premise written, but basically, it’s something like thisπ
WWII has ended, and Leon Wagner and Riker Schind are men lost in the chaos of Post-War Germany.
Leon, struggling with grief, doubt, anger, hatred, and addiction, is falling into a pit only God will be able to pull him out of after Leon has lost everything.
Riker, struggling with shame, guilt, PTSD, and struggling with the idea that he truly is nothing, is running down a path that can only be brightened by the light and grace of God.
Both going on paths that can only lead to death without God’s intervention, Leon and Riker have to wrestle with their inner demons and learn the truth that only one name can save them.
Basically, Riker’s PTSD from the war plays into his battle with guilt/shame, bc his PTSD keeps reminded him of everything he’s done…and as for being resolved…well…that has to come with only loving, powerful intervention. <3
September 10, 2023 at 4:58 pm #155995Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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I know right?! I mean why havenβt they asked us to write them scripts, Iβd be happy to do it
honestly though Screenwriting is fun and Iβve done it beforeβ¦ Marvel if youβre reading thisβ¦ *winks* You know where to find me XD
ikr? Lemme helpppp, Marvel!!! ππ
Girl!! I saw this post on Pinterest where someone cropped Yelena into a scene from FATWS and now I canβt stop thinking about what it would be like if she was in it
Honestly, sheβs just a hilarious and chaotic character that I feel could pair well with almost any
Ahh, I love that xD
Ikr!? She’s just sooo funny………and yes, very chaotic
Ughhh, that’s just so sad tho ππ Poor Wanda…Marvel did her wrong ππ
September 10, 2023 at 5:59 pm #156000@freedomwriter76
Aww poor Riker!
Man, he’s really going through it rn.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 10, 2023 at 6:00 pm #156001Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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September 10, 2023 at 6:02 pm #156002Yeah π€£ they are cute
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"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
September 11, 2023 at 11:51 am #156052Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings Hmmmmm…you’re really giving me something to think about XD
The Bois’ father does have his moments of love, showing the old him that kinda faded after his first wife left, and it is POSSIBLE that he may have at least a semi-redemption arc in a later book bc of that. (now Frida…idk, she’s kinda always been that way…but idk, maybe that’ll change with some more development, idk tho)
Riker’s father, sadly, is also drunk much of the time, which also makes him not think clearly…and he’s also doing what his father before him did, and idk…Franz has always (sadly) treated Riker as nothing more than a mistake…although I may have a small explanation for that…hehe…something that was based on an old idea that I actually just recently thought of changing up, if you wanted to hear about it.
either way, you’ve given me a lot to think about! thx, discussions like these always inspire me to work harder at my writing!!
September 11, 2023 at 12:05 pm #156055@freedomwriter76
HEY GIRL! I know I am very late but…
I’M SO EXCITED FOR YOUUUU! THIS IS SUCH A HUGE ACCOMPLISMENT!!!! I can’t wait to someday read our book whenever you share it. Though I haven’t been on the whole journey with you it’s been SO fun watching you write this book. I’ve loved reading your snippets and hearing your rants about this story. I love it so much! SO CONGRATS!!!!πππ
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 11, 2023 at 12:09 pm #156056Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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AHHH, TYSM!!!!! ππππππππ EVERYONE’S SUPPORT HAS MEANT SO MUCH TO ME, SO TYSM!!!! ππππππππ
September 11, 2023 at 12:18 pm #156058@freedomwriter76
YOU ARE SO WELCOME!!!!!! β€β€β€β€ WE ALL LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!
(phew, just finished reading this chat, so much chaos happened, but that’s what happens when you leave for a week XD. I love all the marvel talk, on our way to our vaca we watched the first avenger then I went home early but on everyone else’s way home they had the NERVE to watch Civil War without meeeeee. They got home and had an hour left so at least I got to seeΒ someΒ of it. But I was so saaaad.π welp there was my rant for the day, have to go and reply to all gazillion other chats XD)
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 11, 2023 at 12:27 pm #156060Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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