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January 30, 2023 at 9:19 pm #130796
@freedomwriter76
AGH NOOOO LEON!!! REVENGE IS A TERRIBLE MONSTER DON’T FUEL IT! *fights back the urge to literally shake some sense into him*
AGH RIKER NOOO!!! BUDDY, GOD’S ALWAYS THERE FOR YOU!!!
Have you ever read The Chronicles of Zion series? Some of your characters remind me of them. Then again it’s also a WWII story and the situations just might be what’s reminding me… *shrugs*
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 31, 2023 at 12:14 am #130819Hey Min!! Hope youβre doing okay :).
Better now that I have another wip! ππ€£π
Thatβs SO AWESOME that you started another WIP!! Haha, yeah, I totally get that! Yes, totally no pressure to share anything unless you want to. OH that sounds awesome!!! I wish you good luck!
Yeah! I’m super stoked!! Thanks! I’m really looking forwards to it, it’s my first dive into actually fantasy!!
Ahh that song for Lesli is so sad ππ!! Love it tho!
IKR!? π₯ it’s so perfect at the same time!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 31, 2023 at 2:16 pm #130841@freedomwriter76
Didnβt notice you posted Rikerβs part of the chapter!
POOR RIKER!! π
God loves you more than you could ever imagine!!
I just noticed that Ev and Riker have similar struggles. I think Rikerβs is more guilt-related. Ev believes the lie that he is a failure. He longs for a fatherβs love. I just recently wrote a scene where he is really struggling with that. I was just like π! Iβll share it on here sometime soon.
Write what should not be forgotten. β Isabel Allende
January 31, 2023 at 2:33 pm #130847Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Sounds like a great day! ππ I have never seen any Marvel π³
It was a great day!!! πππ Aww, that’s okay. But, like, in myΒ TOTALLYΒ unbiased opinion, if you want to ever watch any Marvel, I’d start with the first Captain America movie. πππππ
fanfics are great! I made one a long time ago, but havenβt connected with another series enough to do another one since.
They’re a lot of fun to make!!! I understand that. My old fanfics were Sonic The Hedgehog, lol. Now they’re all Marvel. π ππ
Little rough but not horrible! Did some schoolwork, cleaning/dishes, and some writing related stuff.
Glad you’re doing okay! πππ
I started another wip! Iβve pre-decided Iβm not sharing any of the plot/charries π because I find I donβt write as well when I have other peopleβs opinions in mind XD But yeah, Iβm super excited about it. Still working on the title, hereβs the jist of it though:
βIn a world where hope is a tangible item, how far would you go to obtain it?β
AWESOME!!!! Oooohhhhhh…I love the sound of it!!! ππππππ You’ll do AMAZING, girl!!! I just know it! I believe in you!!! πβ¨πβ¨π
Also, found a new song for Lesliβs playlist! Itβs called βall this timeβ by Britt Nicole, it has this part hereβ
I remember the moment, I remember the day,
I was only a girl, but I grew up that day
Like π₯ππ So many of the lyrics in the song fit her story sooo well π₯
I absolutely LOVE THAT SONG!!! It’s been a comfort for me for a long time now, and it reminds me of myself. π ππππ
What are you working on in school these days?
Learning more about Adjectives and Adjective “forms” in Grammar, doing lots of Exponents in Algebra I (UGHHHHH!!! ππ ), learning about the dynasties of Egypt in my Biblical Archaeology, learning about Genes and Chromosomes in Biology, and taking Latin American Spanish, learning how to Film a short movie, and every now and then practicing chords on my guitar, lol. π
I’ve got a lot of school to do…but it goes fast if I just sit down and do it. π π Like, I finished before 11 AM this morning bc I started earlier and just went for it today, lol. π
How about you? What are you doing in school? ππ
1. Peter Parker/ Spiderman (all 3)
2. Wanda, except in multiverse of madness. They ruined her in that movie >:[
3. TβChalla /Black Panther
Good choices. ππ
Aww Thank you!! Itβs actually in early March, but my mom has been asking me what I want to do so she can start planning ;). I wish I could invite you if I have a party πππ !
You’re very welcome!!! ππππ Aww, cool! My birthday’s not for a while…lol. π π
IKR!?!?
Yeah, Endgame is soooo good, but just so…ππ
Ugh Ikr?! And when he finally gets one π€£π€£!
So adorable. ππππ
BEST PART IN THE WHOLE MOVIE π ππ π€£π€£!
BAHAHAAHAAAA!!! YESSSS!!!! π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
Okay, cool!! Haha, Iβd love to read it!! ππ
Aww, thanks!!! πππππ Yeah, I’ll probably share it in a new Forum. ππ
Yesss!! IKR!?!?! Who couldnβt love him!? πππππ
EXACTLY!!! πππππ
Oh, and if you wanna see…here’s the Steve board I was making last night, Light!!! (Hey, that rhymed!!! ππππ)
January 31, 2023 at 2:36 pm #130848Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Didnβt notice you posted Rikerβs part of the chapter!
I forgot to tag everyone. π π
POOR RIKER!! π
God loves you more than you could ever imagine!!
AGHHH!!! IKR!?!?!?!? πππ TELL HIM, SISTER!!! ππππ
I just noticed that Ev and Riker have similar struggles. I think Rikerβs is more guilt-related. Ev believes the lie that he is a failure. He longs for a fatherβs love. I just recently wrote a scene where he is really struggling with that. I was just like π! Iβll share it on here sometime soon.
Aww, poor Ev!!! πππππ And yes, much of Riker’s is guilt related, but…it’s also from his abusive childhood too, and from his father and community that wanted nothing to do with him.
πππ’πππ₯π
January 31, 2023 at 2:38 pm #130849Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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AGH NOOOO LEON!!! REVENGE IS A TERRIBLE MONSTER DONβT FUEL IT! *fights back the urge to literally shake some sense into him*
AGH RIKER NOOO!!! BUDDY, GODβS ALWAYS THERE FOR YOU!!!
TELL ‘EM, SISTER!!!! They need to hear it!!!ππππ
Have you ever read The Chronicles of Zion series? Some of your characters remind me of them. Then again itβs also a WWII story and the situations just might be whatβs reminding meβ¦ *shrugs*
I have not, but SO MANY people here on KP have recommended it to me and say my books remind them of The Chronicles of Zion…I hope they’re not too similar…π ππ
January 31, 2023 at 2:51 pm #130853@freedomwriter76 LEEEON!! RIKERRRR!! ADOLPHUS!!!! LEEEOOO!!!!! π
I need more about Adolphus and Wolfgang and leooooo
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebJanuary 31, 2023 at 3:01 pm #130862Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12. AGHHH, IRK!?!?!?!? The poor babies!!!πππππ
January 31, 2023 at 3:03 pm #130863@freedomwriter76
That moodboard looks awesome!!!
Some of those quotes remind me of Ev!! (As you can see, Iβve just wrote a chapter from his POV. Lol)
Write what should not be forgotten. β Isabel Allende
January 31, 2023 at 3:12 pm #130869Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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That moodboard looks awesome!!!
Aww, thank you so much!!! ππππ
Some of those quotes remind me of Ev!! (As you can see, Iβve just wrote a chapter from his POV. Lol)
Ooh, cool!!! (Haha, yeah, I can tell, but I don’t mind. ππ)
January 31, 2023 at 3:18 pm #130871@freedomwriter76
AWESOME!!!! Oooohhhhhhβ¦I love the sound of it!!! ππππππ Youβll do AMAZING, girl!!! I just know it! I believe in you!!! πβ¨πβ¨π
Thanks!! πππ π
Learning more about Adjectives and Adjective βformsβ in Grammar, doing lots of Exponents in Algebra I (UGHHHHH!!! ππ ), learning about the dynasties of Egypt in my Biblical Archaeology, learning about Genes and Chromosomes in Biology, and taking Latin American Spanish, learning how to Film a short movie, and every now and then practicing chords on my guitar, lol. π
Latin American Spanish? Cool! Genes and chromosomes are so cool!
What do you film om? A phone? (have you seen those super cool phone tripods?!)
I’m actually going to attempt to learn guitar by myself, any wisdom? π€£
Iβve got a lot of school to doβ¦but it goes fast if I just sit down and do it. π π Like, I finished before 11 AM this morning bc I started earlier and just went for it today, lol. π
IKR? That’s what I always tell myself,Β it really goes fast when you make yourself do it.
How about you? What are you doing in school? ππ
Lot’s of history reading atm, our book is giant and my professor has presentations for us to watch too. What I really don’t like about it is that the information is spread over different places, so notes don’t turn out as organized as I’d like. It’s interesting though!
Asl probably takes up the second most time, there is sooo much vocab to remember XD
And I very much despise my algebra two class, I suppose you would understand because of your algebra one.
I’m researching how dictatorships start for my english project, and I can’t seem to find enough articles… little concerned I need to pick a new topic before its too late. I found a great article but the link is broken now π₯π₯ and I need like 10 sources anyways π
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
January 31, 2023 at 4:37 pm #130894@freedomwriter76
Ooo, that moodboard for Steve looks really good!!
I have not, but SO MANY people here on KP have recommended it to me and say my books remind them of The Chronicles of Zionβ¦I hope theyβre not too similarβ¦π ππ
Oh girl, don’t worry about it! XD Honestly, it’s a compliment, those characters are really well developed and the books show a lot of the history from a lot of different perspectives. That’s why they remind me of yours. Having read both (or at least parts of both), they’re definitely not too similar. Chronicles of Zion also focuses on that, but they follow a lot of Jewish history, then get into the happenings out in Palenstine, and ALL the different places that the Nazis took over. Your story seems to be more focused inΒ Germany, and how all the characters in your story were affected.
XD I don’t know how to explain it, except that it reminds me of your story but it’s definitely not the same. Both are amazing!!!
"...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
(Part of) Isaiah 45:19January 31, 2023 at 4:49 pm #130900@freedomwriter76
Youβre very welcome!!! ππππ Aww, cool! My birthdayβs not for a whileβ¦lol. π π
When is it? If you don’t mind sharing ππ. I’ve been thinking of how to make a birthday present that can be enjoyed online ππ!! Haha
Yeah, Endgame is soooo good, but just soβ¦ππ
I know!!!!
So adorable. ππππ
Yesss!!! “…I do! I understood that reference!” XDXDXD
BAHAHAAHAAAA!!! YESSSS!!!! π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
Yess!!! π€£π€£π€£π€£
Aww, thanks!!! πππππ Yeah, Iβll probably share it in a new Forum. ππ
Okay!!
EXACTLY!!! πππππ
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Oh, and if you wanna seeβ¦hereβs the Steve board I was making last night, Light!!! (Hey, that rhymed!!! ππππ)
Oh it does!! Haha ππππ
And I love that mood board!! It’s so perfect ππππ
#HugRikerSquad
January 31, 2023 at 7:07 pm #130937@freedomwriter76 That moodboard. Ha! I love it. Why don’t I just make one for all my favorite characters…..
How do you do that, anyway?
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
January 31, 2023 at 7:25 pm #130941@anyone and everyone
So did @booksandbeakers leave? Her tag doesn’t work no more!
He must increase, but I must decrease.
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