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May 26, 2023 at 12:34 pm #145249
@freedomwriter76 You’re sooo welcome girl!! ❤️❤️❤️
#HugRikerSquad
May 26, 2023 at 4:34 pm #145312@lightoverdarkness6 Yeah, they are. And yes, I rarely even redraft some of my fanfics unless something REALLY changes. Mostly, if they’re on computer, I just edit out what I don’t want.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
May 27, 2023 at 1:58 pm #145376Of course, girl!! Glad we can be there for you. 😊❤️
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
May 27, 2023 at 2:13 pm #145377Yeah, they are. And yes, I rarely even redraft some of my fanfics unless something REALLY changes. Mostly, if they’re on computer, I just edit out what I don’t want.
Yes! The beauty of using a computer XD I remember my first ever written story. I was 12. I had this stack of 7 or 8 pages of paper (like, just regular printer paper. Not lined XD) And I had scribbled down the whole story on those pages. When my mom copied it onto her computer I was so in awe by how easy it was to edit XD
#HugRikerSquad
May 27, 2023 at 4:49 pm #145385@keilah-h @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @janellebelovedpig @acancello @lightoverdarkness6
okay y’all, going to try to send a pic of the goats…
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
May 30, 2023 at 2:57 pm #145538Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley @euodia-vision (thought I’d tag you too, since you said you’d stalk it anyhow XD)
Here’s the blurb (which the WIP has now split into 2 novels….😂)
1944, and the Second World War is Raging
Leon Wagner, a Jewish young man, husband, and father, is doing his best to protect his family from the growing darkness. But it creeps inside, and he and his wife are thrown into one of the camps he thought were only rumors. Battling through abuse and starvation and facing the biggest loss of his life, Leon is plunged into hate.
Riker Schind, an SS Lieutenant, is only doing his “duty” to protect his family from suspicion and strife. The war continues to rage on, and when Riker is transferred to a nearby camp to work, his entire life is turned upside down. He has found The Holocaust. Guilt of what he’s helped do to thousands, millions, of innocent people pierces his heart, and a new mission takes place in his heart. But the guilt still haunts him, until it reminds him of the past he’s fought hard to forget.
Thrown into the darkness of The Holocaust, both Leon and Riker will have to learn much along the way. A story of grief yet healing, abandonment yet acceptance, guilt yet grace, mercy, love, hatred, and the fact that forgiveness can, like fire, spread and set captives free.
Riker is literally my baby, 😍, and Leon is also another absolute FAV of my charries, and their story has been in my head for ohhhhh….about 2-3 years now?
Leon’s biggest arc has to do with forgiving others(especially Riker 😉)/God, whilst Riker’s mainly has to do with redemption/forgiving himself for what he’s done
Feel free to ask questions. I can talk about them forever 😂😂
(AHHH, THE BOARD LOADED!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!!)
This is for book 1 👇
May 30, 2023 at 2:59 pm #145540Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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and the board didn’t work 😭 it almost did, then changed it’s mind XD
May 30, 2023 at 3:01 pm #145542@freedomwriter76
Riker reminds me so much of Anakin from my book XD I love it!!!!!!
and poor Leon ):
Also, have you read “the boys who challenged Hitler” It’s a really good true story and it’s very interesting
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-ThorneMay 30, 2023 at 3:08 pm #145546Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley ahhh, i’m so glad!!!! ❤️❤️❤️ that means so much to me for you to say that!!!! 💖💖
Yesss, the poor baby 😭
I don’t believe I have!!! May need to look into that!!! 😀
Anything else you wanna know? 😂🥰
May 30, 2023 at 3:10 pm #145548@freedomwriter76
No I think I should be good XD I think the pieces are all making sense now XD It helps when you know what the story actually is XD
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-ThorneMay 30, 2023 at 3:12 pm #145551Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley alrighty! Yep, always helps to have the pieces fit together XD
Of course, this is only 1 of my many WIPs, lol…😂😂
May 30, 2023 at 10:37 pm #145615@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
How are you guys doing?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 31, 2023 at 10:13 am #145629Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
I’m doing really well, Min, thanks for asking!!! ❤️❤️ The chicken run is finally over with 🥳XD Now our chickens can be outside!!!! 🎉🎉🎉
But yes, I’m doing really well. Finally on Summer Break (tho i’ll be doing a bit of English and Math every other day or so to keep my mind fresh 😉) so yay!!!! I’m feeling a lot less lonely these days. Getting better about talking to people and having Youth Group at our church again has really helped out with that. 🙂 It also helps that one of my friends from church talks to me just about every time he sees me, always checking in on how I’m doing, so that helps 🥰
haha, ngl y’all, he literally texted me at 8 something PM one Sunday night because he wanted to say Hi and talk because he didn’t get a chance to at Church. He’s so sweet y’all XD
But anywhoooooooo 😂
I hope both of y’all are doing FANTABULOUS!!!! And if you’re not, feel free to tell me. I’m here for both of y’all anytime you need me ❤️❤️
May 31, 2023 at 11:06 am #145632@freedomwriter76
I’m doing really well, Min, thanks for asking!!! ❤️❤️ The chicken run is finally over with 🥳XD Now our chickens can be outside!!!! 🎉🎉🎉
Yay!! Yw! <3
But yes, I’m doing really well. Finally on Summer Break (tho i’ll be doing a bit of English and Math every other day or so to keep my mind fresh 😉) so yay!!!! I’m feeling a lot less lonely these days. Getting better about talking to people and having Youth Group at our church again has really helped out with that. 🙂 It also helps that one of my friends from church talks to me just about every time he sees me, always checking in on how I’m doing, so that helps 🥰
Lol that just reminds me of when I was a freshman starting in youth group… dude I had the awkwardest moments trying to talk to people… but I learned eventually 😅🤣 so I guess that’s good. Youth group sadly never worked that well for me but I’m almost old enough for my new churchs’ college and career group!
haha, ngl y’all, he literally texted me at 8 something PM one Sunday night because he wanted to say Hi and talk because he didn’t get a chance to at Church. He’s so sweet y’all XD
Awwww what a guy XD
But anywhoooooooo 😂
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I hope both of y’all are doing FANTABULOUS!!!! And if you’re not, feel free to tell me. I’m here for both of y’all anytime you need me ❤️❤️
Awww thanks! I’m doing ok, just tryin to finish all my schoolwork before the quarter/semester ends. I’ve been doing some college looking around with my mom lately… (Scary!) but it’s not too bad because almost all of them HAVE CLIMBING WALLSS!! So yeah even if college seems scary I want the free climbing wall 🤣. But yeah I might have to start applying to colleges this coming fall 😬
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
May 31, 2023 at 11:14 am #145633Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Yay!! Yw! <3
So glad it’s done and over with 😆
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Lol that just reminds me of when I was a freshman starting in youth group… dude I had the awkwardest moments trying to talk to people… but I learned eventually 😅🤣 so I guess that’s good. Youth group sadly never worked that well for me but I’m almost old enough for my new churchs’ college and career group!
Yep, it’s a learning process! 😀 Ooh, that sounds exciting!!! I hope you have fun with that once you’re old enough, sounds like a lot of fun!! 💖
Awwww what a guy XD
For sure XD
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Awww thanks! I’m doing ok, just tryin to finish all my schoolwork before the quarter/semester ends. I’ve been doing some college looking around with my mom lately… (Scary!) but it’s not too bad because almost all of them HAVE CLIMBING WALLSS!! So yeah even if college seems scary I want the free climbing wall 🤣. But yeah I might have to start applying to colleges this coming fall 😬
Yw!!! ❤️❤️ I’m glad you’re doing alright 💖 Ahh, I’m sure that’s scary, but it’s exciting too! I can’t wait to see where God takes you, because it will be amazing ❤️❤️ And ooh, climbing walls, what fun!!! Ack, that sounds a little nerve-wracking 😅 But you’ve got this, girl!!!! 🎉🎉🎉
How’s writing going?
I’ve mostly been working on Marvel stuff, 😂😂😂, but I’ve been working on Freedom’s Fire quite a bit today…….
….creeping up on the 2nd character death of the novel 😭😭
but i’ll be ok.
maybe XD jkjk, I’ll be fine 😂
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