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April 4, 2023 at 8:26 pm #139318
@freedomwriter76
Lol maybe I will have to watch the movies sometime… if I ever watch any amount of Marvel that will probably the Captain America movies, thanks to you XD
He does look very cool though.
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 4, 2023 at 11:10 pm #139322I just killed a charrie, and now feel guilty. But also strangely satisfied.
I mean, it does fulfill their arc.
But at the same time.
This is a FUN charrie, dudes.
I think, if this story actually ended up being good (which is a slim possibility), the readers would be thundering into my house with torches and pitchforks – it’s that bad.
“Everything is a mountain”
April 5, 2023 at 1:56 am #139328@whalekeeper I don’t want to know. I honestly don’t wanna know who it was. Truthfully. I DO NOT WANT TO BE SAD. No hints. Nothing. XD
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
#ProtectMarcel
#ProtectSebApril 5, 2023 at 6:17 pm #139380Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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April 5, 2023 at 6:23 pm #139382Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Lol maybe I will have to watch the movies sometime… if I ever watch any amount of Marvel that will probably the Captain America movies, thanks to you XD
*bows* Glad I could be of service 😂
He does look very cool though.
IKR!? XD
I still can’t decide if him or Bucky is my fav, lol XD It’s just so hard…….😂Okay…it’s not the reason I watch the movies…XD
Lol, I just think the movies are fun, but Steve&Bucky are wonderful bonuses….🤣
April 5, 2023 at 6:30 pm #139383Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@otherworldlyhistorian Thanks! I’m so glad you like my stories! And yes, Ezekiel is one of my favorite side characters; glad you like him! 😁
April 5, 2023 at 7:09 pm #139389Anonymous- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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@freedomwriter76
Tagging you because I know you love Russell & Eliza news, haha, but this is for anyone who’s interested!
You’re one of the first to hear this (I haven’t announced it on any of my platforms yet or anything), but I’m planning to write a novelette from Russell’s perspective. I’m not fully decided but I think I’ll probably set it as WFR’s prequel. It was a very spur-of-the-moment thing, but the story has fully captured my heart and I know I must write it. I haven’t started it yet (I hope to do so tonight), but the scenes I’ve imagined for it and the blurb I wrote have made me already love it and so eager to pen (or type XD) it!
It’s called Heart of a Father. I’ll pop the blurb right here:
September 1975
Russell Campbell’s little daughter, Eliza, is the love of his life. A fiercely devoted father, the only One he loves more than Eliza is his Savior. The Lord is his hiding place, and his prayer is to teach his daughter of the love of another Father—a love even greater and tenderer than his own.
But the demons of shame, guilt, and grief haunt him, and poverty and cancer have brought him to his knees. He is constantly so sick that he can hardly stand, and he’s terrified of one day being unable to fill his near-empty pantry. Even worse, he sees in his daughter’s eyes that she is losing her faith in the Lord Jesus.
How can he, a weak man and an unworthy sinner, ever be the father Eliza deserves? How can he show her that even through illness and pain, their heavenly Father still surrounds them with a love unimaginable?
April 5, 2023 at 7:14 pm #139390Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@joy-calle JOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT, AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
That sounds so fantabulous and wonderful and just…🤩😍🥰😭
I even felt TEARS when I read the blurb!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!! 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
April 5, 2023 at 7:25 pm #139395Anonymous- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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@freedomwriter76
Awwwwwww thank you! I’m so glad you love it!!!!! <333
April 5, 2023 at 7:34 pm #139402Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@joy-calle You are sooooo welcome!!!! 💕💕💕 Of course, it sounds AMAZING!!!!!!
April 5, 2023 at 7:44 pm #139406Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings btw, how’ve you been Min??? Been thinking about you 🥰
April 5, 2023 at 7:45 pm #139407@freedomwriter76
XD
And another new pfp? Who this time?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 5, 2023 at 7:51 pm #139410Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@mineralizedwritings It’s Sam from Marvel (the guy with the wings, remember? XD) but from the Disney+ show Falcon and The Winter Soldier 😉
That show was also just…👌
April 5, 2023 at 10:40 pm #139423@freedomwriter76
Cool!
Wait… you changed it again! Is that Thor? Ack, I hope I got that right lol!
Aww thanks for asking! I’m doing kinda sorta ok XD
I just started that in person class yesterday (was sick the first day) it’s alright. We were making animated Gifs in photoshop which I finished early because I’ve done some animation and have used photoshop before, so that was nice. It’s weird being in a class with so many people older than me (Duuuuude the guys are huge XD) It’s really quiet for the most part, a lot of the students don’t seem very enthused and tbh are probably just completing a requirement by taking the class. I tried to talk to a really shy girl in our class and but she was having a hard time holding up the other end of the conversation… I felt really bad for her, I’ve been there.
I’m really glad I’m getting exposure to different types of people again, because it’s really stressful for me for some reason and I need to get used to it for when I get a job. So yeah, it feels super overwhelming and I keep on worrying about all the things that could possibly go wrong.
Did meet somebody pretty nice and we sit together sometimes though.
As far as other stuffs, I’m writing a lot! Here’s a quick rundown of my book 2 characters, what do you think? (It’s chock full of spiolers XD)
Layson:
A newly fledged releasor under Clement Bardot’s guidance, Layson hopes to change the ways releasing works. He wants to release for the people, giving good prices instead of trying to rip off the bunkers in need. He and Clement agree on this model, but during their time apart, they grow in different ways. Layson decides to adopt Maylee during their time apart and starts his travels home to where Lesli Tauren and Jonathan are settled. He meets with Clement and tells him he is done releasing and is going to try to start a family. Clement is (likely jealous too) upset and tells him that he has been thinking and is turning back to his old ways. They leave against each other. Layson makes a silly mistake and gets pinned under a log or other structure and has to ask Clement for help. Clement see’s it as a opportunity and makes a really bad deal with him, showing off his newfound ethics. He tells him he must travel north to release the freedom bunker coalition, and he will have to give most all of the money to Clement. Layson agree’s in fear of being left alone to die with Maylee, and begins the journey north.
Clement Bardot: After breaking from a long line of the most crued and greedy releasors, Clement decides to take Layson under his wing. They attempt to change the ways of releasing to be a system that profits the people just as much as the realesor. On a trip back home, Clement is reminded of the lifestyle and money he has lost, and is sucked back into it by his family. He returns to meet up with Layson with new and greedy ethics. After splitting ways with him, Layson gets caught under a large structure. Pinned, he must ask Clement for help. Clement decides to employ his new ways right away, and makes a trade with him. If he helps him out, Layson must release the freedom bunker coalition for him and give most all of the money over. Clement knows his ways are wrong, and because of this is ruthless in the way he criticizes Layson. He says things like, “So this is where kindness gets you.” And other things, using Layson’s own innocent hopeful words of earlier times against him now that he is poor and desperate.
Maylee: Layson’s daughter, adopted in one of the bunkers before he breaks paths with clement.
And just so you know, I think the name freedom bunker coalition came from your name XD
And I’m getting to use our old moniter attached to my laptop for digital art, the colors are more accurate than my laptop. Honestly God has just givin me everything I need for the perfect art setup, it just kinda happened sometime after I prayed.
How are you doing? Is school and writing going well?
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
April 6, 2023 at 3:28 pm #139472@joy-calle Wow! That’ll make for one interesting story! I don’t know too much about your characters, unlike some of the others, but I can see all the thought you’ve put into this father and daughter. And I like their names!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
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