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Hello, KeePers!!
I just recently finished the first draft of The Art of Deception, which is a clean sci-fi. No bad words, fairly mild violence.
That being said, I’m looking for readers who are willing to read through a messy first draft and pinpoint spelling errors, plot holes, things that don’t make sense, etc. Any feedback/thoughts are needed before I begin my second draft! And don’t worry about upsetting me or anything like that lol. Like I said, I need any thoughts I can get XD
If you’re interested, please comment below with your email and I’ll send you my draft! Thank you so, SO much if you decide to accept! (If you’re not wanting your email put out for everyone, we can ask KingdomPen if you want to send it to privately!)
I’m just tagging some people, but totally feel free to decline!
@joy-caroline @gracie-j @nanisnook @abigail-m @devastate-lasting @nova21 @e-k-seaver @anyone-else-who-likes-to-read-and-critique
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
Here’s my book trailer for more detail!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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@daisy-torres AAAAHHHH DAISYYYYY!!!! I would LOVE to read it but I have so much school right now that I know I couldn’t give it to time and focus I want to. *sighs* Thank you so much for tagging me, though! I’ll tag a few others who might be interested!
@writerlexi1216 @scripter-of-kingdoms @mkfairygirl @issawriter7 @lydia-s @godlyfantasy12I’d LOVE to!! The title is amazing, (plus I actually have time XD) and the book trailer made me very curious!!!!!! =)
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OOooOooo, this sounds exiting! I’m not sure if I’ll be a able to commit if it’s too long tho, could you give me an estimate of the word count?
@gracie-j Awww!! Thank you soooo muchhh!!!! Sorry you’re so busy! If you ever find you have time, let me know!! I’d love to have you on the team XD
@nova21 Girlll, thank youuu!!! That would be amazing!!! (And thanks!! I’m glad it did!!)
@jodi-maile That’s perfectly fine!! I don’t have any specific date on anything right now. I’m actually a bit burnt out rn, so I won’t be starting the second draft for a bit yet :::)
@anatra23 Sure thing! It’s right over 90,000 words. The actual book would probably be about 2-3 inches thick. Thank you for your interest!!"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@nova21 My email is authordaisytorres.1@gmail.com Just send me an email and I’ll send you my draft in a google doc!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres Oh cool! (I totally get the burnout haha, I’m a bit burned out on my own writing right now). I’d love to read it–count me in! Should I just send you an email, then?
@jodi-maile Yay!!! Thank you SO much!! This means a lot to me!!! My email is authordaisytorres.1@gmail.com Send me an email and I’ll send you my novel in a google doc!! Again, thank you SO much!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres Yay! And of course! I’ve really enjoyed your writing before so I’m looking forward to reading your latest work! 🙂
@jodi-maile Aww, that makes me so happy to hear!! I really hope you enjoy this one, too!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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@daisy-torres You’re so welcome! Thank YOU! If I do, I will certainly let you know! 😀
@graci-j Yay!!! And dude, absolutely!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
Agh, CONGRATS!!!!! Unfortunately, since the school year started, I don’t think I’d have time to read it. I wish I could, though! Hopefully, I’ll someday be able to read the published copy. 🙂 Again, CONGRATS!!!!!! *throws confetti and chocolate*
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