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      @jonas

      This is a cool idea!! (hey, you’re almost to 2,000 posts!)

       

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      #170016
      HighScribe
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        @jonas

        You tagged RAE twice…

        I think that’s a really cool idea. I also like stuff like that. I don’t know any stories off the top of my head like that.

        If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.

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        #170017
        Cloaked Mystery
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          @highscribeofaetherium

          Messed up your tag.


          @savannah_grace2009

          Thanks! (Yeah, @rae somehow passed me! But no one else ever has!)

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            @highscribeofaetherium

            It’s so short I must not have seen that I already typed it.

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            #170019
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              @jonas

              (I passed you once but then you passed me again lol) (at least I think that happened at one time…idk)

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              #170020
              Cloaked Mystery
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                @savannah_grace2009

                Okay yes, it did happen, but then it unhappened, so it doesn’t count! When you joined, you immediately jumped into a lot of things. I’ve been gradually getting more active. I’m like a freight train that starts out slow, gains momentum and becomes unstoppable! Mwa ha ha ha ha!

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                  @jonas

                  Great analogy XD

                  If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.

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                  #170022
                  Trailblazer
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                    @jonas

                    I don’t know if you could use this in your story at all, but I had a dream one time about some of the characters in a book I was reading, and in my dream, the main enemy somehow was slowly dying of a deadly disease but didn’t tell anyone about it, to make the protagonists think he was still perfectly healthy when he was not. I think my dream ended before anything major happened, but in this scenario, the main enemy could die unbeknownst to the protagonists, and the enemy’s henchmen would be thrown into chaos trying to figure out how to keep their control without the protagonists realizing what’s going on.

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                    Cloaked Mystery
                    @jonas
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                      @trailblazer

                      Interesting… If I had the Dark Lord die, I would probably want to have that happen at the very beginning of the story, with the idea of throwing everything into chaos. If he dies in the middle of the story, then that’s basically just a free win for the protagonists…unless something bad unexpectedly comes from it, like a new even worse Dark Lord! I’ll have to think about it, thanks for the idea!

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                        @jonas

                        You’re not going to makeΒ anotherΒ planet for this, are you?!?

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                          You can use one of the eight or so you already have?

                          If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.

                          #wewantourhatback

                          #170028
                          Cloaked Mystery
                          @jonas
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                            @highscribeofaetherium

                            Idk, this is a very rough concept, so I have no idea where or when I’m going to put it. Most of the time when I make a new planet, it’s for a new magic system.

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                              @jonas

                              It’s so short I must not have seen that I already typed it.

                              Is that a compliment or a complaint?

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                                @rae

                                A compliment if anything. I have complained about @highscribeofaetherium’s excessively long tag in the past.

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                                  @jonas

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                                  If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.

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