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December 17, 2023 at 3:10 pm #170015
This is a cool idea!! (hey, you’re almost to 2,000 posts!)
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December 17, 2023 at 3:11 pm #170016You tagged RAE twice…
I think that’s a really cool idea. I also like stuff like that. I don’t know any stories off the top of my head like that.
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December 17, 2023 at 3:11 pm #170017Messed up your tag.
Thanks! (Yeah, @rae somehow passed me! But no one else ever has!)
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 3:12 pm #170018It’s so short I must not have seen that I already typed it.
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 3:13 pm #170019(I passed you once but then you passed me again lol) (at least I think that happened at one time…idk)This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.
December 17, 2023 at 3:14 pm #170020Okay yes, it did happen, but then it unhappened, so it doesn’t count! When you joined, you immediately jumped into a lot of things. I’ve been gradually getting more active. I’m like a freight train that starts out slow, gains momentum and becomes unstoppable! Mwa ha ha ha ha!
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 3:15 pm #170021Great analogy XD
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
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December 17, 2023 at 3:21 pm #170022I don’t know if you could use this in your story at all, but I had a dream one time about some of the characters in a book I was reading, and in my dream, the main enemy somehow was slowly dying of a deadly disease but didn’t tell anyone about it, to make the protagonists think he was still perfectly healthy when he was not. I think my dream ended before anything major happened, but in this scenario, the main enemy could die unbeknownst to the protagonists, and the enemy’s henchmen would be thrown into chaos trying to figure out how to keep their control without the protagonists realizing what’s going on.
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December 17, 2023 at 3:24 pm #170025Interesting… If I had the Dark Lord die, I would probably want to have that happen at the very beginning of the story, with the idea of throwing everything into chaos. If he dies in the middle of the story, then that’s basically just a free win for the protagonists…unless something bad unexpectedly comes from it, like a new even worse Dark Lord! I’ll have to think about it, thanks for the idea!
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 3:25 pm #170026You’re not going to makeΒ anotherΒ planet for this, are you?!?
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
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December 17, 2023 at 3:25 pm #170027You can use one of the eight or so you already have?
If I had ever learnt, I should have been a great proficient.
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December 17, 2023 at 3:26 pm #170028Idk, this is a very rough concept, so I have no idea where or when I’m going to put it. Most of the time when I make a new planet, it’s for a new magic system.
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π Appreciator of BooksDecember 17, 2023 at 3:43 pm #170031Itβs so short I must not have seen that I already typed it.
Is that a compliment or a complaint?
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#AnduthForever (π)December 17, 2023 at 3:45 pm #170033A compliment if anything. I have complained about @highscribeofaetherium’s excessively long tag in the past.
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