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I’ve done 200 of my 400 words. I’m gonna go ahead and throw half my snowballs.
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A disturbingly short time ago, in a land uncomfortably close by...
Why did you two target me? Is there something you want? like, something specific for me to write about or were you like “I’m gonna hit RAE!”
Your tag is easy to remember
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lol, that is the best reason I think I’ve ever heard!
That is such an un-cool reason to hit someone.
No! it’s great, I love it!
I’m so proud of my tag!
I know what I want!!!! I want more Baron.
Or Nahim.
Okay…I guess I can do that
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)Baron scene!
Baron watched a little girl run across a meadow, flowers woven into her long silver hair. She was laughing in childish joy as a teen girl chased after her through the meadow grass. As he watched, a breeze welled around him, playing in his hair. He was like her Guardian Angel, her hero, who watched from afar to make sure she was okay. To make sure little Rya was out of the reach of the Bloodsilver. He hid beneath the shadows of the trees that lined the meadow, and he thought that Rya would miss him, but he was wrong. The little girl stopped running, turning to meet his gaze.
“Baron! Baron, hi!”
Baron almost turned to run, he had only come to watch her, to make sure she was okay, but he remained where he stood. Rya bounded over towards him, embracing him about the legs. “Hello, Baron! Have you been a hero? Have you saved tons and tons of people!?” She asked with excitement.
Baron knelt down, his eyes watering. “Yeah, yeah I’ve been a hero, Rya. And every time I help someone, I think of you.”
Rya smiled, dimples appearing in her cheeks. “Good! I missed you, Baron.” She gave him a hug, wrapping her arms around his neck. Baron hesitated, then returned the hug.
“I missed you too, Rya.”
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)I like it, but I’m confused about her age. She acts about five. Maybe eight if you want to stretch it. But I thought you said she was a teen. If she is, (why does she have such childish dialogue) and how is she hugging Baron around the legs? is he a giant?
Other then that, I really liked it! It’s a very sweet scene.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
She was being chased through the meadow by a teen girl. Sorry if that wasn’t clear.
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)now I need to write something for Nahim…
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)Ah! That makes sense!!
lol.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
I forgot about this chat.
But hey, I finally get to write the next part of my story!
John was fed up with being stuck on the island, so he decided it was time to do something about it.
“Mother, can we please depart from this snowless island?”
His mother was tying some logs together. “John, how many times must I tell you, we’ve been trying!”
“But I want to build a snowman!” John whined.
“Well why don’t you try building a sand man. There is plenty of sand around for that.”
“Fine,” John huffed and walked away.
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@raxforge 💨❄️Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
beast.
Fine. I’ll write. I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*
@liberty   (because I’m nice and you like my story. lol)Josef looked down. “It’s complicated. I didn’t choose this. I’m just… trying to survive like everyone else.
Franz shook his head bitterly. “Survive? By enforcing fear?”
Josef dropped his voice to an angry whisper. “You think I like this?” he shook his head. “I feel like there’s dark things going on, but I can’t let myself know.”
Franz let out a harsh laugh. “Oh, that must be terrible for you. Meanwhile, you walk around in that uniform. You’re on their side. The side that would—” he broke off sharply, seeming to suddenly realize he was addressing an SS.
Josef glared at him. “I’m just a man, Franz. Just a man. Same as you.” He paused. “Do you think I wanted to join them?”
Franz shrugged nervously. “I don’t know. Maybe you did.”
Josef leaned forward “No, listen. My family… they need me. I did this to stay out of Russia, because it’s not likely I’d ever come back from there. But every day, I wonder if I’m doing the right thing.”
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
I feel like I am everyone’s target. *sigh*
If it’s too much, I can withdraw you from my upcoming snowball list.
Yes! Thanks for tagging me when you post your Crimson stories! I like reading them!
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
No, it’s totally fine. I was just being dramatic.
I’m glad you enjoy the sections.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
Nahim scene (which will probably end up in my book)
275 words
“Life for me has been…dark since they died.” Nahim turned his face away.
Master Canin wrapped his arm around Nahim’s shoulders like a father, pulling him close. “I know, Nahim. The war has taken away my daughter. It’s been years since I’ve seen her.”
Nahim turned back to face Master Canin, his eyes glistening with water. “There’s something I’ve been wondering for a long time. If my mother could see me now, what do you think she would say?”
Master Canin thought for a moment before replying, “She’d be proud of you, for surviving. And for using your training. She’d like Mandin. She’d say he’s a good friend. She’d be so happy that you have conquered your fear of flying. I think she’d be proud of you.”
“Thank you, Master.”
Master Canin smiled slightly. After a bit of silence, he let go of Nahim’s shoulders. The silence continued on a few minutes until Bear found them, nuzzling Nahim gently.
“Hi, boy. I’m fine.” Nahim gently scratched behind Bear’s massive floppy ear. Master Canin reached out his hand to gently pet Bear as well, but the dog shifted away, growling quietly. Nahim’s brows knotted. “He’s never done that before. What’s with you Bear?” The dog looked up at Nahim with his usual dopy look, sticking out the slightest bit of his pink tongue. Master Canin presented his hand to Bear for the dog to sniff and Bear growled again, but Nahim told him off. Begrudgedly, the dog allowed Master Canin to pet him. “I’m sorry about that Master.”
“There is no need to apologize. Animals are often cautious, and sometimes rightfully so.”
Nahim nodded in agreement.
@grcr @highscribeofaetherium You are snowballed!STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
#AnduthForever (hopefully đź’•)
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