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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CYzWmClXlg_1aBN5BMwzylGrv0MZUlR2GKWl-7ndUqA/edit?usp=drivesdk
@devastate-lasting @gracie-j @nova21 @abigail-m
Next chapter is ready to be critiqued! This one needs a lot of work because I’m trying to make sure my explanations all make sense lol. Thank you in advance!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres Cool I’ll try to get to it soon!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into days
@daisy-torres Aight I left some comments! Thanks for sharing!
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
If hours don't turn into days
OOO, YAY!! let me read it real quick and I’ll give you some feedback…
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000
Girl, that was great!! Super fun to read, as always! 😉
what we do in life echoes in eternity
-gladiator, 2000
Thank y’all so much, @nova21 @devastate-lasting!! If y’all ever need the favor returned, just let me know <3
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres I can’t wait to read it–I’ll get to it soon!
@gracie-j Yay!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."