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    Snapper
    @dragon-snapper
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      Alrighty! Thanks everyone for your wonderful critiques! I have submitted the final draft into the contest, so we’ll see what happens. I’ll know on the 26 whether I’ve won or not. Again, thank you all!

      ☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀

      #33804
      Snapper
      @dragon-snapper
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        @winter-rose @rolena-hatfield @ethryndal @perfectfifths
        Unfortunately, I did not win the contest. 🙁
        However, as a dragon, I find that it really motivates me more to get published. 😛 Thank you for all your critiques and support!

        ☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀

        #33806
        Rolena Hatfield
        @rolena-hatfield
          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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          @dragon-snapper Bummer! *muchapplauseforthehardworkofputtingastorytogether* It’s still a really good step as a writer to submit work to a contest. So well done!

          https://rolenahatfield.com/

          #33808
          Louise Fowler
          @perfectfifths
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            @dragon-snapper Awe, too bad 🙁 But great work! The story was great nonetheless! Do they give you any critiques or feedback? (probably not 😛 )

            That’s what would be great in contests – a simple reason why you didn’t win, so you know what you might need to improve on (though I realise this would mean a whole lot more work for the contest-minions 😉 )

            Currently reading Les Miserables

            #33873
            Anonymous
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              @dragon-snapper Aww. I still applaud you for all your hard work (and your cool story)! Encore, dragon, encore.

              #33879
              Ethryndal
              @ethryndal
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                @dragon-snapper *offers consolatory lembas* There’s always next time. 🙂

                INTJ ➸Your friendly neighborhood mastermind. ➸https://thesarcasticelf.wordpress.com/

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