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    Liberty
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      @power

      Congratulations!!!! Yes, I agree with everything Ellette said about your story! It was very touching!

       

      @shadow

      Great work on your story, as well! From what Ellette said, I’ll have to go back to read it again!

      "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

      #190702
      Liberty
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        @theshadow

        Sorry, I forgot to put the “the” in my post above!

        Great work on your story, as well! From what Ellette said, I’ll have to go back to read it again!

        "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

        #190703
        Liberty
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          @power

          I’m looking forward to your prompt!

          "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

          #190705
          whaley
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            @power

            YOU ASKED FOR IT.

            *Tips hat* All power to you, my dear sir.

            #ProtectAdolinKholin

            #190710
            TheShadow
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              @ellette-giselle

              Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked it!!


              @power

              Congratulations, your story was amazing!!! Everything was so well put together!!


              @liberty

              Thank you, your story was really good too!

              "No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"

              #190713
              Elishavet Elroi
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                @power

                Yay! Congratulations and a cup of cold cider! That was really good. The Black Mongoose struck again. Struck our heartstrings, that is.


                @ellette-giselle

                I’m glad you went ahead and judged it. I meant to step out last night. My second story was not coming. Besides, these stories were all really good.

                You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                #190748
                Power
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                  You will love what you spend time with.

                  #190749
                  Power
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                    @whalekeeper @theshadow @ellette-giselle @liberty @everyonewhohassaidnicestuffs

                    Thanks!

                    You will love what you spend time with.

                    #190754
                    Liberty
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                      @power

                       

                      I like the prompt! What a great idea to use a Bible verse!

                      "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

                      #190755
                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @liberty

                        Can you copy and paste the prompt for me? His scan code isn’t working.

                        Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                        #190765
                        Liberty
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                          @ellette-giselle

                          I have to know, did you write that song? If not, what is it called because I must hear it!!

                          I wrote the song. What you said, though, gave me an idea.

                          I originally wrote those lines just for the story, but now I plan on making it into a real song. I had a tune for the lines I wrote, but I sat at the piano last night and composed the whole song.

                          Since the tune is longer than the two verses I created, I’m planning on writing more lyrics. I thought I would complete the entire song, and then record myself singing it while playing the tune on the piano.

                          If you would like to hear it, I can post it here when it’s done.

                          "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

                          #190766
                          Liberty
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                            @ellette-giselle

                             

                            Sure!

                            Proverbs 17:9

                            He who covers a transgression seeks love,
                            But he who repeats a matter separates friends.

                             

                            It’s in the NKJV, so you can switch it to whatever version you want…if that’s what you want.

                            "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

                            #190767
                            Liberty
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                              @power

                              When is the deadline?

                              "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

                              #190780
                              Power
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                                @liberty

                                Deadline?!?

                                ALL I DID WAS SUBMIT A LITTLE STORY AND NOW THEY THINK I KNOW WHAT IM DOING!

                                AAAAA!!!

                                NEXT THEY’LL BE INFORMIMG ME THAT I’M SUPPOSED TO JUDGE ONE OF THESE THINGAMAGIGGERS!!! 😭😭😭

                                *Blows nose loudly*

                                (Did you know I’m known for my nose blowing skills? Well now you know! And probably wished you didn’t. 🐽)

                                Welp, if I have to choose a deadline day, let’s choose National Monkey Day!!! 🐒 (Which is December 14th for all you’ll folks who don’t have National Monkey Day marked on your calenders. 🙊)

                                It also haps to be the day that Mary Stuart became Queen of Scots. . . At the age of 6 days old. 👑👶

                                p.s. Man, maybe I shouldn’t post these thingaroos past midnight. 🤔

                                Proverbs 17:28 KJV — Even a fool, when he holdeth his peace, is counted wise: and he that shutteth his lips is esteemed a man of understanding.

                                . . . 🙄😁

                                 

                                You will love what you spend time with.

                                #190782
                                Liberty
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                                  @power

                                   

                                  Proverbs 17:28 KJV — Even a fool, when he holdeth his peace, is counted wise: and he that shutteth his lips is esteemed a man of understanding.

                                  . . . 🙄😁

                                  Uh…no…Did I get the wrong scripture???!!

                                   

                                  NEXT THEY’LL BE INFORMIMG ME THAT I’M SUPPOSED TO JUDGE ONE OF THESE THINGAMAGIGGERS!!! 😭😭😭

                                  Well, you were submitting…and there was a big chance of you winning!

                                   

                                  Welp, if I have to choose a deadline day, let’s choose National Monkey Day!!! 🐒 (Which is December 14th for all you’ll folks who don’t have National Monkey Day marked on your calenders. 🙊)

                                  Thank you.

                                  "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."~ Jim Elliot

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