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    Keilah H.
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      @rae @everyone else yeah I’ll get to this today, but it won’t be for a while lol. I had a story concept in mind, but never finished it so I’m just gonna redraft one I already had and was gonna share earlier but didn’t get around to it…..lol

      Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

      #189518
      Elishavet Elroi
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        @liberty

        Oh, I liked your story. The worldbuilding and premise was so unique! And the frame story layout was a good touch. Does it belong to a larger story?

        You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

        #189519
        Elishavet Elroi
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          @ellette-giselle

          Exactly! =)

          You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

          #189520
          Koshka
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            @ellette-giselle

            Yes…

            I may have to check that book out. =)

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            #189521
            Liberty
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              @elishavet-pidyon

               

              Yes, it does…though it’s currently all my head still!

              My place beside you, My blood for yours, Till the Green Ember rises, Or the end of the world!

              #189522
              Elishavet Elroi
              @elishavet-pidyon
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                @liberty

                *Squeals*

                Yay! Like I said, it’s such an intricately pieced world.

                Yeah, most of mine are in my head too.

                You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                #189523
                Liberty
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                  @elishavet-pidyon

                  Are you planning to put it on paper?

                  My place beside you, My blood for yours, Till the Green Ember rises, Or the end of the world!

                  #189524
                  Elishavet Elroi
                  @elishavet-pidyon
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                    @liberty

                    My stories? Yes. This short story is a stand alone, but I have three WIPs. Currently, my goal is to finish a novela by Easter. It’s one I haven’t shared much about, but is pretty close to my heart. Plus it’s a better springboard than a 3 volume epic or a 5 book series. XD

                    You?

                    You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                    #189525
                    Liberty
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                      @ellette-giselle

                       

                      WOWWW! I love your story!! The sacrifice of Tauren is so touching. It reminds me so much of “The Day Boy and the Night Girl”. Have you read it?

                       


                      @elishavet-pidyon

                      So sweet and sad! Beautiful writing! Is this part of a larger story?

                      My place beside you, My blood for yours, Till the Green Ember rises, Or the end of the world!

                      #189526
                      Liberty
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                        @elishavet-pidyon

                         

                        Oh, silly me. I forgot to read your answer above.

                        My place beside you, My blood for yours, Till the Green Ember rises, Or the end of the world!

                        #189527
                        Liberty
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                          @elishavet-pidyon

                           

                          Woaha, 3 WIPs??

                          Yes, I’m planning on doing so as well. The Guards story is actually a sub-series from my WIP: Buddy Brindle. I’ll tell you more later…I’ve got to go to a planning meeting with my family first.

                          My place beside you, My blood for yours, Till the Green Ember rises, Or the end of the world!

                          #189528
                          Elishavet Elroi
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                            @liberty

                            I’m so glad you liked it!

                            Yeah, it’s standalone right now, but who knows? 😉 I haven’t gotten to work seriously in much of my WIPs, so they’re more like Works Waiting For Progress or something like that.

                            A sub-series is a good idea! I shall await your return. =D And maybe get some of my homework done. XD

                            You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                            #189529
                            whaley
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                              @rae I am not submitting anything today. 😖 I really thought I could give you something, but I’m struggling with mental exhaustion/health issues and this thing just isn’t going to happen. I finished a sufficient chunk of the story and couldn’t bring myself to push the submit button. I enjoyed reading y’all’s stories and I hope you have fun!

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                              #189533
                              calyhuge
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                                Still working on mine @rae

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                                #189534
                                Elishavet Elroi
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                                  @whalekeeper

                                  Oof, that’s ok. 🙂 Hope you feel better soon!

                                  You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

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