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I agree with Esther! Maybe just flesh out a little more of what’s happening with the characters’ emotions and minds. That will help to feel like we’re really in the scene and it’s going to little slower. I’m excited to see where this goes!!
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@highscribeofaetherium Hello hello, nice to meet you! I’m glad you like my manuscript so far! Ahaha yesss it’s such a struggle, keeping all these ideas separate and RESTRAINED while you work on one at a time 🤦🏽♀️😂 Well I’ll see you around, and I look forward to seeing some of your writing! 👀
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Glad I could help!!
(I should honestly take some of my own advice for pacing sometimes. XD)
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@starshiness Love it!!!! 💖💖 (finally got around to reading Chapter 2…took me long enough 🤦♀️)
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