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  • #194419
    Elishavet Elroi
    @elishavet-pidyon
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      @theducktator

      Glad our story could be useful that way. XD

      Poor Dwogin. Good thing Randal is there. XD Travenor hasn’t gotten over seeing her strange house. (And maybe having his favorite tea declared by a stranger. Tea is important stuff, you know.)


      @ellette-giselle

      Sure! And if I finish Travenor’s drawing today, you’ll also get some visuals of the gang.

      Aenwest = misplaced author

      Travenor = Ranger, Dúnedain (Protagonist)

      Randal = Lorekeeper (Mentor)

      Onnendel = Elf (Side Character)

      Dwogin = Dwarf (Side Character)


      @the_lost-journal

      This is a serial story Koshka and I are writing, dedicated to Kingdom Pen and the shenanigans we writers get into.

      When a young writer finds herself trapped a in her fanfiction, she soon realizes things are not as they seemed in the first draft. Plot holes fix themselves with unexpected results, and danger lurks nearer than she expected. After all, it’s a risky thing to take your hand off the pen and be a character yourself. Could it be worth it in the end?

      You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

      #194420
      Elishavet Elroi
      @elishavet-pidyon
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        @hybridlore

        They are! I winced a lot while reading up on them for this. *shudder*

        You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

        #194432
        Keilah H.
        @keilah-h
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          @elishavet-pidyon Wow! That was fun.

           

           

           

          funny side note, when you mentioned “reaching the Dell” I was like “someone else knows that word????” cause I never see it in anyone else’s writing these days, but I have a charrie named Dell so I see it often in my own writing. LOL

          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

          #194458
          Elishavet Elroi
          @elishavet-pidyon
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            @keilah-h

            It’s a good word! Although I did have to go look up the difference between Dell, Vale, and Glade before writing this. XD

            You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

            #194468
            Kefa
            @the_lost-journal
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              @elishavet-pidyon

              What?

              "MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"

              #194514
              Koshka
              @koshka
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                @the_lost-journal

                What what?

                As in, to what does your what refer?

                (If it is to the story, well, like with every good tale, I’d say go read from the beginning. You might find it amusing)

                • This reply was modified 1 month, 1 week ago by Koshka. Reason: You have a most... interestingly punctuated tag

                First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
                Fork the Gork

                #194524
                The Most Esteemed Feathered One
                @theducktator
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  It was soooo good! The ending was so sad. Sydney was my favorite character.😢

                  I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

                  #194531
                  Ellette Giselle
                  @ellette-giselle
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                    @theducktator

                    BUT HIS REDEMPTION!!!!

                    Oh it was so, so good!

                    Have you seen the movie? (there are several but the 3 1/2ish one is the most accurate. It’s free on youtube if you want me to send you a link.)

                    Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                    #194532
                    Ellette Giselle
                    @ellette-giselle
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                      @elishavet-pidyon

                      Thank you so much!!!

                      Oh yes! I would love to see the picture!

                      Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

                      #194736
                      Keilah H.
                      @keilah-h
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                        @elishavet-pidyon lol I barely know the difference between those so….

                        I just used it cause it was the name of a character I liked and I wanted to jokingly reference that in my own work and say that a version of him went on to found a whole race of creatures.

                        "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                        #195111
                        Elishavet Elroi
                        @elishavet-pidyon
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                          @ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator

                          Ok everyone! Last night I tried to share the character concept art, but apparently it didn’t go through. I’m going to try sharing them again now.

                          You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                          #195113
                          Elishavet Elroi
                          @elishavet-pidyon
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                            You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                            #195114
                            Elishavet Elroi
                            @elishavet-pidyon
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                              You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                              #195115
                              Elishavet Elroi
                              @elishavet-pidyon
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                                Well, I obviously took those with artificial light. XD At least they finally came through. Any thoughts? 😁

                                You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

                                #195130
                                Ellette Giselle
                                @ellette-giselle
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                                  @elishavet-pidyon

                                  💯 amazing!!!! 🤩

                                  I love, love them!! So good! You are an insanely good artist!

                                  Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

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