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@freedomwriter76
Ok, just wow. SO TRUE. I LOVE IT! I could rant for a while about stuff in America but I won’t… Like it’s confusing but I’m proud to be free but not at the same time. Originally we were free to be Christ-like but now we’re free to be whatever. And that whatever is NOT what God or the founding fathers wanted America to be like. *sighs* I don’t even keep up with politics cause they’re confusing but yeah. lolYou can never get a cup of tea large enough or a book long enough to suit me.
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@lrose5. Thank you. Yes, so sad, but it’s so true. *sigh* Well…this poem probably came from a place about rant about what’s going on and politics, honestly. I could rant on and on about it all too. I get what you’re saying! (there’s very good reasons our parents decided to homeschool years ago, that’s all I can say.) My mom keeps up with a lot of politics, so I mostly know what I do from her. But I get what you’re saying, girl! 😉
@freedomwriter76
Yes… Same!! I think. lol We’re homeschooled for manyy reasons. Well, I like being homeschooled bc of those reasons-politics, peer pressure, teenagers nowdays… lol Yeah, I hear from my parents too cause articles are confusing. lolYou can never get a cup of tea large enough or a book long enough to suit me.
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@lrose5. Yes. All of those reasons, plus what they teach in schools nowadays!? Articles are confusing, lol. XD
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@freedomwriter76 GIRL THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! I got chills! Thank you for sharing! 😀
Ach, I uh, got something in my eye 🤧
@freedomwriter76 That was wonderful!! It feels very urgent and remorseful (in a good way, of course)
I love how it reads like a prayer, it’s really beautiful!
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@gracie-j. Awwww, thank you so much! I seem to give you chills a lot, don’t I? XD You’re Welcome! Thank you! 😀
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@freedomwriter76 You’re so welcome!! Haha, you certainly do!!!
@freedomwriter76 Wow, that’s really amazing!! So well-written and beautiful!
As for critique, maybe change “She’s run” to “she has run.”
Writing is a journey . . . journey for the Lord.
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@lorelei-writer. Aww, thank you girl! 😀
Thank you for the critique! 😉
@freedomwriter76
BEAUTIFUL!!!! I love it, and it’s so true.
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@lydia-s. Aww, girl, thank you!!!! 💖💖💖 Y’all are so sweet! 🥰 And yes, sadly true. 🥺
@freedomwriter76
Just read this…
SO TRUE!!! Such a good poem. It carries so much truth. I agree with what @lrose5 said,
I could rant for a while about stuff in America but I won’t… Like it’s confusing but I’m proud to be free but not at the same time. Originally we were free to be Christ-like but now we’re free to be whatever. And that whatever is NOT what God or the founding fathers wanted America to be like. *sighs*
Thanks for sharing!! <3
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
Interesting and Nice Poem
[quote quote=114362] @freedomwriter76 Ok, just wow. SO TRUE. I LOVE IT! I could rant for a while about stuff in America but I won’t… Like it’s confusing but I’m proud to be free but not at the same time. Originally we were free to be Christ-like but now we’re free to be whatever. And that whatever is NOT what God or the founding fathers wanted America to be like. *sighs* I don’t even keep up with politics cause they’re confusing but yeah. lol[/quote]
I love Politics!!! 😁
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