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    Anonymous
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      @godlyfantasy12 Awww, so happy for him!!!!! šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ’– I don’t know if I could take it if he didn’t get redeemed šŸ˜­

       

      Yay!!! *hugs Ridley* It’ll be okay baby…things will get better, I promise šŸ’–šŸ’–šŸ’•šŸ’•ā¤ļøā¤ļø

      #150423
      whaley
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        @godlyfantasy12

        Sure!! šŸ˜›

        ā€œEverything is a mountainā€

        #151584
        GodlyFantasy12
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          @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 I never got back to yā€™all about young man/adult Paxton šŸ˜… sowwy XD

           

          BUT I AM HERE NOW!!!

           

          And excited to discuss him!

           

          Now I donā€™t have everything figured out obviously, but hereā€™s what I do know/have brainstormed

           

          As you probably know (but maybe not XD)

           

          After their (first) adventure, Paxton goes home with Ara (and the rest of the gangā€¦minus oneā€¦) to Aā€™Grend, and is taken in by her family, becoming basically blood family.

          This makes him a prince (just as he was before) but the prince he deserves to be.

          With a new family who loves him, friends who adore him and are just as close as family, a sister he adores, and a God who has the ability to transform and renew, he grows and develops through some of his trauma (of course he still struggles but itā€™s still so much better)

          In fact, just in a few years (2 or so) Paxton has grown a bit, and is a bit more confident, braver, and his speech is better (he even stands up to a transformed Grimm who has gone a bitā€¦mad in the second adventure.)

           

          As a prince, Paxton is given the choice, actually by Arabella (and the rest of the family), as she wants her brother to have the fullest of privileges and everything he deserves, to become the next ā€œRulerā€ of Aā€™Grend instead of her.

          (in Aā€™Grend, the rulers are chosen by God, not birth order, etc)

          Paxton doesnā€™t want it though, and it is, in the end, Godā€™s plan for Ara to become Queen.

           

          I am thinkingā€¦howeverā€¦.that since he isnā€™t going to become king, he becomes the next Judge.

          (just as Araā€™s uncle was Judge when her father became king)

           

          the Judge is sorta like the ā€œpriestā€ figure of the kingdom. But without all the fuss and official robes and such. theyā€™ll wear special royal outfits (not robes tho. That looks weird in my head lol) for special occasions but other then that, they mostly help with keeping things civil, watching over things, etc.

          So yea.

           

          Obviously, Paxton ends up with Luna lol.

           

          Luna crushes first, (and is older by around 2 years, and also taller. I love the height different trope of the girl being taller than boy with these two!)

          As preteens, Luna has a crush on the boy, and then Pax develops feelings so it becomes mutual.

           

          I havenā€™t decided yet if it also becomes a bit of an ā€œArranged thingā€ but not? As in, Luna feels a bit guilty/weighty because sheā€™s the last of her people, meaning she carries their bloodline and lineage, and thus the thoughts of marriageā€¦is difficult. She has no one of her people to marry and continue her bloodline purelyā€¦

           

          Sure sheā€™ll have children and half-breeds, but it wonā€™t be pure, if that makes sense. Her peopleā€™s bloodline will be lost.

          So Iā€™ve thought of, maybe, making Paxton half of Lunaā€™s race? Since his dadā€™s lineage/race is still up in the air.

          ANYWAY that is still undecided XD

           

          needless to say he and Luna end up together.

           

          Paxton is your average shy, quiet boy, blushy and adorable and sweet. He doesnā€™t really know anything/much about romance, or crushes, and so he doesnā€™t understand when Luna has a crush on him, and when he begins developing feelings he doesnā€™t understand either. (Heā€™s still a preteen during this too.)

          Luna also doesnā€™t understand all of these things either due to her raising, and so sheā€™s in the same boat, though not quite as shy.

           

          The two are adorable together.

           

          Luna and Paxton are both basically the Judge/Judges, since if the Judge is married/gets married the spouse also takes on that role. Luna is fine with this and is actually a wonderful judge (Think Deborah in the Bible) and helps alongside her husband.

           

          As adults, they have two children-

          A daughter named Lila Eiddwen Hope Fabel

          And a son named Nevan (Puck) Sren Fabel

           

           

          Not entirely sure what else to sayā€¦.

          #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
          #ProtectMarcel
          #ProtectSeb

          #151590
          whaley
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            @godlyfantasy12

            YUS

            This was what I was looking for šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚ I bet he’s so cute as a young man!!! (And this is coming from the girl who never gets attracted to boys, so, yeah šŸ˜‚)

            Also, don’t feel weird about Pax being younger than Luna. At a certain age – like once you hit the full-fledged adult phase – it honestly doesn’t matter quite as much (although it still does depending on the situation) because their maturity levels will have balanced out by then. And I have an imaginary couple of my own in mind, where the boy is at least two years younger than the girl.

            Judge? FanCy DiGs

            Oh, their son’s middle name sounds a bit like Sorren – although was Sorren a good influence by the end? Idk, maybe that’s just me.

            ā€œEverything is a mountainā€

            #151597
            GodlyFantasy12
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              @whalekeeper AHHH Iā€™m glad u like it! And that I love him! (And the ship!)

               

               

              AND AHHHH YOU CAUGHT IT!!!!

               

               

              YES the middle name is from Sorren šŸ˜­ šŸ˜­

               

               

               

              Sorren was the most passive of Paxtonā€™s brothers, and had no hard feelings for the child. In fact, heā€™d often try to ā€œhelpā€ him without the rest of the family knowing. (Little things like bringing him food if he knew they werenā€™t letting him eat, or letting him out of dark spaces, giving him pain medicines after punishments, etc)

              But due to his family and how he was raised he never openly stood up for Paxton.

               

              Until Ara and her friends come and everything begins to turn even more upside down for him. He starts to wonder, is this really how things are supposed to be?

               

              (One of his songs btw is All I Ever Wanted (With Queenā€™S Reprise) from the Prince of Egypt. I imagine him singing it as heā€™s conflicted and then his mother comes in and is trying to once again manipulate him, only for him to realize what sheā€™s doing in the end.)

               

              He ends up protecting Paxton in the end, and redeeming himself for the passiveness of before.

              Andā€¦

               

               

               

               

               

              Sorren is killedā€¦.

               

               

              In front of Paxtonā€™s own eyes, the poor babyā€¦.

              while protecting him.

               

               

              Soā€¦yes, the middle name of Pax and Lunaā€™s son is representative of Sorren, because Paxton always and will always have a place for the brother who gave his life for him.

              #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
              #ProtectMarcel
              #ProtectSeb

              #151599
              HighScribe
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                @godlyfantasy12

                Waitā€¦

                did he nameā€¦

                his daughterā€¦

                after his mother??

                THAT HORRIBLE PERSON?!?!?!?!?!?!?

                Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.

                #151606
                Esther
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                  @godlyfantasy12

                  Aww, I love all of this!!

                  Write what should not be forgotten. ā€” Isabel Allende

                  #151608
                  GodlyFantasy12
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                    @highscribeofaetherium HA I DIDNā€™T EVEN NOTICE THAT HEH šŸ˜… whoops

                     

                    no, I chose that cuz I liked how it sounded XD buuuut thinking about it now I might change it lol.

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                    #151609
                    whaley
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                      @godlyfantasy12

                      I figuuuuuured Sorren would sacrifice himself for his bro


                      @highscribeofaetherium

                      That’s a good point tho… You ain’t redeeming Lilith, are you Godly?

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                      #151611
                      whaley
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                        @godlyfantasy12

                        Oki well it’s hard to keep track of names sometimes šŸ˜‚

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                        #151613
                        Anonymous
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                          @godlyfantasy12 AHH, I LOVE IT!!!!! šŸ„°šŸ„°šŸ„°šŸ˜˜šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—

                          And yeahhh….I wouldn’t worry about age gaps…my parents are 6 years apart šŸ˜‚

                          alsooo…that’d be interesting if Lila was named after Lilith…it could be a way of showing that Pax has forgiven his mother…šŸ¤”

                          (sorry…forgiveness is my favorite theme in books šŸ˜)

                          #151615
                          whaley
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                            Although I personally wouldn’t name my own kid after a murderous child abuser.. I feel like there’s a fine line between forgiveness, and accepting someone you shouldn’t be accepting. Like, if she repented? Maybe. But otherwise, no flipping way šŸ˜‚

                            Idk, it depends on the context and how Paxton would process it all (as well as Luna)

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                            #151616
                            hybridlore
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                              @godlyfantasy12

                              Oohh I really like this!!

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                                @whalekeeper I meannnn…I probably wouldn’t either šŸ˜… but then again…I’m not the best at forgiving very vile people, heh. I guess it would depend on how complete someone’s forgiveness is, y’know? idk…I meannnn…it depends on how much God has healed that person from their pain…but maybe I just have a different view on the whole forgiveness thing šŸ˜‚

                                #151621
                                whaley
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                                  @freedomwriter76

                                  I get it šŸ˜… But ya know, I don’t think you have to be necessarily completely accepting and positive of an evil person in order to forgive them. Forgiveness is essentially to act as if the person’s sin were never there in the first place, and giving them a second chance – starting off with a clean slate of mind. You no longer have a grudge against them.

                                  But to name his kid after her seems like an actively positive reaction to her. If she’s not repenting of what she’s done, I don’t think it’s good to encourage looking at her with a positive light.

                                  I almost view it as a safety thing. Like, Lilith was a dangerous influence in Paxton’s life. He should process what she did to him healthily, and forgive her, but not act as if she was a good influence. And naming your kid after someone implies a loving relationship. Would God require you to name your child after someone who hurt you in this life?

                                  Does that make any sense? Idk what I’m saying anymore šŸ˜‚

                                  We can leave it at that if you want, I don’t want to be imposing or anything

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