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July 11, 2023 at 1:09 pm #150415Anonymous
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@godlyfantasy12 Awww, so happy for him!!!!! šššš I don’t know if I could take it if he didn’t get redeemed š
Yay!!! *hugs Ridley* It’ll be okay baby…things will get better, I promise ššššā¤ļøā¤ļø
July 11, 2023 at 1:23 pm #150423July 19, 2023 at 11:15 pm #151584@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 I never got back to yāall about young man/adult Paxton š sowwy XD
BUT I AM HERE NOW!!!
And excited to discuss him!
Now I donāt have everything figured out obviously, but hereās what I do know/have brainstormed
As you probably know (but maybe not XD)
After their (first) adventure, Paxton goes home with Ara (and the rest of the gangā¦minus oneā¦) to AāGrend, and is taken in by her family, becoming basically blood family.
This makes him a prince (just as he was before) but the prince he deserves to be.
With a new family who loves him, friends who adore him and are just as close as family, a sister he adores, and a God who has the ability to transform and renew, he grows and develops through some of his trauma (of course he still struggles but itās still so much better)
In fact, just in a few years (2 or so) Paxton has grown a bit, and is a bit more confident, braver, and his speech is better (he even stands up to a transformed Grimm who has gone a bitā¦mad in the second adventure.)
As a prince, Paxton is given the choice, actually by Arabella (and the rest of the family), as she wants her brother to have the fullest of privileges and everything he deserves, to become the next āRulerā of AāGrend instead of her.
(in AāGrend, the rulers are chosen by God, not birth order, etc)
Paxton doesnāt want it though, and it is, in the end, Godās plan for Ara to become Queen.
I am thinkingā¦howeverā¦.that since he isnāt going to become king, he becomes the next Judge.
(just as Araās uncle was Judge when her father became king)
the Judge is sorta like the āpriestā figure of the kingdom. But without all the fuss and official robes and such. theyāll wear special royal outfits (not robes tho. That looks weird in my head lol) for special occasions but other then that, they mostly help with keeping things civil, watching over things, etc.
So yea.
Obviously, Paxton ends up with Luna lol.
Luna crushes first, (and is older by around 2 years, and also taller. I love the height different trope of the girl being taller than boy with these two!)
As preteens, Luna has a crush on the boy, and then Pax develops feelings so it becomes mutual.
I havenāt decided yet if it also becomes a bit of an āArranged thingā but not? As in, Luna feels a bit guilty/weighty because sheās the last of her people, meaning she carries their bloodline and lineage, and thus the thoughts of marriageā¦is difficult. She has no one of her people to marry and continue her bloodline purelyā¦
Sure sheāll have children and half-breeds, but it wonāt be pure, if that makes sense. Her peopleās bloodline will be lost.
So Iāve thought of, maybe, making Paxton half of Lunaās race? Since his dadās lineage/race is still up in the air.
ANYWAY that is still undecided XD
needless to say he and Luna end up together.
Paxton is your average shy, quiet boy, blushy and adorable and sweet. He doesnāt really know anything/much about romance, or crushes, and so he doesnāt understand when Luna has a crush on him, and when he begins developing feelings he doesnāt understand either. (Heās still a preteen during this too.)
Luna also doesnāt understand all of these things either due to her raising, and so sheās in the same boat, though not quite as shy.
The two are adorable together.
Luna and Paxton are both basically the Judge/Judges, since if the Judge is married/gets married the spouse also takes on that role. Luna is fine with this and is actually a wonderful judge (Think Deborah in the Bible) and helps alongside her husband.
As adults, they have two children-
A daughter named Lila Eiddwen Hope Fabel
And a son named Nevan (Puck) Sren Fabel
Not entirely sure what else to sayā¦.
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#ProtectSebJuly 19, 2023 at 11:33 pm #151590YUS
This was what I was looking for šš I bet he’s so cute as a young man!!! (And this is coming from the girl who never gets attracted to boys, so, yeah š)
Also, don’t feel weird about Pax being younger than Luna. At a certain age – like once you hit the full-fledged adult phase – it honestly doesn’t matter quite as much (although it still does depending on the situation) because their maturity levels will have balanced out by then. And I have an imaginary couple of my own in mind, where the boy is at least two years younger than the girl.
Judge? FanCy DiGs
Oh, their son’s middle name sounds a bit like Sorren – although was Sorren a good influence by the end? Idk, maybe that’s just me.
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July 20, 2023 at 1:06 am #151597@whalekeeper AHHH Iām glad u like it! And that I love him! (And the ship!)
AND AHHHH YOU CAUGHT IT!!!!
YES the middle name is from Sorren š š
Sorren was the most passive of Paxtonās brothers, and had no hard feelings for the child. In fact, heād often try to āhelpā him without the rest of the family knowing. (Little things like bringing him food if he knew they werenāt letting him eat, or letting him out of dark spaces, giving him pain medicines after punishments, etc)
But due to his family and how he was raised he never openly stood up for Paxton.
Until Ara and her friends come and everything begins to turn even more upside down for him. He starts to wonder, is this really how things are supposed to be?
(One of his songs btw is All I Ever Wanted (With QueenāS Reprise) from the Prince of Egypt. I imagine him singing it as heās conflicted and then his mother comes in and is trying to once again manipulate him, only for him to realize what sheās doing in the end.)
He ends up protecting Paxton in the end, and redeeming himself for the passiveness of before.
Andā¦
Sorren is killedā¦.
In front of Paxtonās own eyes, the poor babyā¦.
while protecting him.
Soā¦yes, the middle name of Pax and Lunaās son is representative of Sorren, because Paxton always and will always have a place for the brother who gave his life for him.
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#ProtectSebJuly 20, 2023 at 9:15 am #151599Waitā¦
did he nameā¦
his daughterā¦
after his mother??
THAT HORRIBLE PERSON?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Any noun can become a verb if you don't care enough.
July 20, 2023 at 10:11 am #151606July 20, 2023 at 11:04 am #151608@highscribeofaetherium HA I DIDNāT EVEN NOTICE THAT HEH š whoops
no, I chose that cuz I liked how it sounded XD buuuut thinking about it now I might change it lol.
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#ProtectSebJuly 20, 2023 at 11:06 am #151609I figuuuuuured Sorren would sacrifice himself for his bro
That’s a good point tho… You ain’t redeeming Lilith, are you Godly?
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July 20, 2023 at 11:07 am #151611Oki well it’s hard to keep track of names sometimes š
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July 20, 2023 at 11:21 am #151613Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 AHH, I LOVE IT!!!!! š„°š„°š„°šššš
And yeahhh….I wouldn’t worry about age gaps…my parents are 6 years apart š
alsooo…that’d be interesting if Lila was named after Lilith…it could be a way of showing that Pax has forgiven his mother…š¤
(sorry…forgiveness is my favorite theme in books š)
July 20, 2023 at 11:29 am #151615@freedomwriter76
Although I personally wouldn’t name my own kid after a murderous child abuser.. I feel like there’s a fine line between forgiveness, and accepting someone you shouldn’t be accepting. Like, if she repented? Maybe. But otherwise, no flipping way š
Idk, it depends on the context and how Paxton would process it all (as well as Luna)
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July 20, 2023 at 11:32 am #151616Oohh I really like this!!
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July 20, 2023 at 11:36 am #151618Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper I meannnn…I probably wouldn’t either š but then again…I’m not the best at forgiving very vile people, heh. I guess it would depend on how complete someone’s forgiveness is, y’know? idk…I meannnn…it depends on how much God has healed that person from their pain…but maybe I just have a different view on the whole forgiveness thing š
July 20, 2023 at 11:50 am #151621@freedomwriter76
I get it š But ya know, I don’t think you have to be necessarily completely accepting and positive of an evil person in order to forgive them. Forgiveness is essentially to act as if the person’s sin were never there in the first place, and giving them a second chance – starting off with a clean slate of mind. You no longer have a grudge against them.
But to name his kid after her seems like an actively positive reaction to her. If she’s not repenting of what she’s done, I don’t think it’s good to encourage looking at her with a positive light.
I almost view it as a safety thing. Like, Lilith was a dangerous influence in Paxton’s life. He should process what she did to him healthily, and forgive her, but not act as if she was a good influence. And naming your kid after someone implies a loving relationship. Would God require you to name your child after someone who hurt you in this life?
Does that make any sense? Idk what I’m saying anymore š
We can leave it at that if you want, I don’t want to be imposing or anything
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