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January 22, 2025 at 10:53 am #195714January 22, 2025 at 12:00 pm #195721
Ooh, this looks interesting. I love your aesthetics!
I, for one, really like Roman numerals.
January 22, 2025 at 12:20 pm #195724That sounds interesting. I am helping out a few other people with their WIPs right now, so I don’t know how much time I will have to help you, but I wouldn’t mind hearing a little more about your characters.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
January 22, 2025 at 12:36 pm #195727Ah! I love it. Here’s a few questions:
1) what time of year does the book start/span?
2) what type of things does Peter’s father invent?
3) have you made incorrect quotes for these charies yet? I mean, I’d love to hear real dialogue snippets, but I know that’s not always easy to share.
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Koshka.
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Fork the GorkJanuary 22, 2025 at 12:57 pm #195730You’ve read dust? I read about three chapters, but I haven’t been able to get my hands on the full thing. How is it?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
January 22, 2025 at 1:31 pm #195741Oooh, I love the sound of this!!!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 22, 2025 at 2:27 pm #195752I’ve read both the books, but it’s been a while. I think I borrowed them using interlibrary loans or whatever. They were pretty good. Probably worth rereading at some point soon. If you can borrow them anywhere, you should.
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
January 22, 2025 at 3:13 pm #195775I love the sound of this!
*likes and subscribes*
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
January 22, 2025 at 3:54 pm #195791@godlyfantasy12 This sounds amazing, can’t wait to see more!
@koshka I have literally TONS of incorrect quotes for my fanfic’s 10 major characters (well, technically only 9 show up in the quotes cause one can’t talk) lolllllGlad to see someone else likes making them!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 22, 2025 at 10:14 pm #195811@hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD
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#ProtectSebJanuary 22, 2025 at 10:20 pm #195812@koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)
The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…
The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of Course it’s a series XD) Â 2 years or less.
And as for Peter’s father, not sure I ever got that far. I think I’d made him work along side the children’s Godfather (he grew up as an apprentice to the man, who was basically his adopted father) in His toy-shop. The man built all sorts of mechanical toys, think brass toys with gears and with mechanics.
He’s basically a prodigy of engineering however, and has been offered jobs in various positions from the time he grew to be an adult (from wealthy men and women, to government, etc) but he turned them down, preferring the family life and minor tinkering.
However…that changes when a ruthless dictator takes over everything.
#IfMarcelDiesIRiot
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#ProtectSebJanuary 22, 2025 at 10:23 pm #195813@koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)
I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little disturbing? I know it had an underlying theme/message I’m sure but overall it was just weird and I didn’t like it. Idk if I even finished it XD
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#ProtectSebJanuary 23, 2025 at 1:29 pm #195849@godlyfantasy12 ooooooh
I’m liking this more and more.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
January 23, 2025 at 3:16 pm #195851@godlyfantasy12 I like the idea so far! I’m not a huge fan of retellings (tho I am enjoying my Robin Hood-esq Marvel AU😂), but this one sounds very interesting!
It’s always good to step back from a main WIP and work on something new and/or old, and you having fun with it is what matters most🥰😉
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