My New/Old WIP!

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  • #195714
    whaley
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      @ellette-giselle

      😈

      There has been no news for Silksong for today...

      #195721
      The Most Esteemed Feathered One
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        @godlyfantasy12

        Ooh, this looks interesting. I love your aesthetics!

        I, for one, really like Roman numerals.

        #195724
        Linus Smallprint
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          @godlyfantasy12

          That sounds interesting. I am helping out a few other people with their WIPs right now, so I don’t know how much time I will have to help you, but I wouldn’t mind hearing a little more about your characters.

          Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

          #195727
          Koshka
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            @godlyfantasy12

            Ah! I love it. Here’s a few questions:

            1) what time of year does the book start/span?

            2) what type of things does Peter’s father invent?

            3) have you made incorrect quotes for these charies yet? I mean, I’d love to hear real dialogue snippets, but I know that’s not always easy to share.

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            #195730
            Ellette Giselle
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              @hybridlore

              You’ve read dust? I read about three chapters, but I haven’t been able to get my hands on the full thing. How is it?

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              #195741
              Esther
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                @godlyfantasy12

                Oooh, I love the sound of this!!!

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                #195752
                hybridlore
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  I’ve read both the books, but it’s been a while. I think I borrowed them using interlibrary loans or whatever. They were pretty good. Probably worth rereading at some point soon. If you can borrow them anywhere, you should.

                  'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'

                  #195775
                  Stepheroni and Cheese
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                    @godlyfantasy12

                    I love the sound of this!

                    *likes and subscribes*

                    Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.

                    #195791
                    Keilah H.
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                      @godlyfantasy12 This sounds amazing, can’t wait to see more!

                       


                      @koshka
                      I have literally TONS of incorrect quotes for my fanfic’s 10 major characters (well, technically only 9 show up in the quotes cause one can’t talk) lolllll

                      Glad to see someone else likes making them!

                      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                      #195811
                      GodlyFantasy12
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                        @hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD

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                        #195812
                        GodlyFantasy12
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                          @koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)

                          The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…

                          The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of Course it’s a series XD)  2 years or less.

                          And as for Peter’s father, not sure I ever got that far. I think I’d made him work along side the children’s Godfather (he grew up as an apprentice to the man, who was basically his adopted father) in His toy-shop. The man built all sorts of mechanical toys, think brass toys with gears and with mechanics.

                          He’s basically a prodigy of engineering however, and has been offered jobs in various positions from the time he grew to be an adult (from wealthy men and women, to government, etc) but he turned them down, preferring the family life and minor tinkering.

                          However…that changes when a ruthless dictator takes over everything.

                           

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                          #195813
                          GodlyFantasy12
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                            @koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)

                            I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little disturbing? I know it had an underlying theme/message I’m sure but overall it was just weird and I didn’t like it. Idk if I even finished it XD

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                            #195849
                            Keilah H.
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                              @godlyfantasy12 ooooooh

                               

                              I’m liking this more and more.

                              "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                              #195851
                              freedom
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                                @godlyfantasy12 I like the idea so far! I’m not a huge fan of retellings (tho I am enjoying my Robin Hood-esq Marvel AU😂), but this one sounds very interesting!

                                 

                                It’s always good to step back from a main WIP and work on something new and/or old, and you having fun with it is what matters most🥰😉

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