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June 6, 2023 at 10:40 am #146549
GIRL THAT WAS SO SWEEEEETTTT!!!!!
@freedomwriter76
YOUR’S WAS TOOOOO!!!!!
I defiantly didn’t tear up reading both of y’all’s stories. š
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 6, 2023 at 10:44 am #146550@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @zemira
Oh my word all of these were so gooooooddd!!! š
Write what should not be forgotten. ā Isabel Allende
June 6, 2023 at 10:54 am #146555Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Day 3!!!!
Day 3: Feeling Their Pulse
MCs: Madelene & Bucky
SCs (Side Characters): Steve, Tony
She ran.
Out of breath, hair whipping around her, shirt sleeves torn in multiple places, tears and mascara coursing down her cheeks, she ran.
She wouldnāt stop running; couldnāt stop running.
He had to be okay.
He had to be.
And then she saw him. Lying on the ground, eyes closed, blood on his cheeks, on his sleeves, even on his metal arm.
Madelene ran faster.
She fell beside him, tears and hair blurring her vision. āPlease, oh please Bucky, please be okay. Please.ā
She brushed hair off his forehead, out of his eyes. āBucky! Please, donāt leave me.ā
A sob escaped her throat.
Sheād already lost so many.
Her mother.
Her father.
Even her brother, though he was alive, wasnāt around.
And Buckyā¦sheā¦she loved him.
Even if she was afraid to admit it.
People she loved had a tendency of leaving.
People she loved had a tendency of dying.
People she loved had a tendency of justā¦disappearing from her life.
Her breaths came in sobbing gasps. āBuckyā¦pleaseā¦ā
She cradled his head in her lap. āDonāt leave meā¦ā
Madelene closed her eyesā¦more tears fell. āBuckyā¦I still need youā¦ā
She didnāt want to let him go.
She knew she wasnāt that strong.
She just wanted him to be okay.
She just wanted to hear his voice and his laugh.
She just wanted to see his smile.
She just wanted to look into his baby blue eyes.
She just wanted to hug him.
She just wanted to be able to kiss him, even if it was only one last time.
Footsteps pounded behind her.
Madelene turned, tears in her eyes, mascara making her cheeks dark; black.
āHowās it look?ā Tony asked, quiet, soft, concern in his dark brown eyes. Concern for her; even concern for Bucky.
Madelene slowly shook her head, unable to conjure any words, unable to even try to speak.
Steve swayed and stumbled. Tony caught him and helped him lean back against an intact wall, helping him sink to the floor.
Madelene looked down at Bucky, whose head laid in her lap. āBuckyā¦pleaseā¦justā¦stay with me, pleaseā¦ā She brought her finger to the spot on the right side of his neck, just beneath his jaw.
And she gasped.
ā¦A heartbeat.
She turned, too overcome with grateful sobs to speak any louder than she had already been speaking before. āThereās a heartbeatā¦ā
June 6, 2023 at 10:56 am #146557Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision @esther-c Thx so much y’all!!!! š„°
These prompts are so helpful and fun!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
and idk if most of the tags worked for the above post XD
@smiley @godlyfantasy12 @zemira @euodia-vision @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @acancello @sarafini @anyone-else-lol-XDPosted my scene for Day 3 up above!! āļøāļø
June 6, 2023 at 11:05 am #146562@freedomwriter76
AWWWWWWWWWW I loved that!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
June 6, 2023 at 11:12 am #146565Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@euodia-vision Awww, tysm!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Truth be told, this is really helping me write Bucky & Madelene scenes XD
June 6, 2023 at 11:25 am #146567@freedomwriter76 *highfive for also doing an angsty one for day 2 XD*
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#ProtectSebJune 6, 2023 at 11:27 am #146568Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@godlyfantasy12 *highfive* š
June 6, 2023 at 11:43 am #146572@freedomwriter76
Awwww I love them!!!!!!!! they’re sad but sweet
Do me a favorā¦. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJune 6, 2023 at 11:45 am #146573Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley Tysm!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
June 6, 2023 at 12:05 pm #146585@freedomwriter76 Aww, thank you! I love my Seren&Nev!! They are the love of life!! Inside electronic devices anyway lol.
Your story for day 3 made me cry! No joke!!! Oh my word!!! I LOVE THEM!!!
hurt people, hurt others
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get saved, save someone else...you never knowJune 6, 2023 at 12:11 pm #146587Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@zemira You’re so welcome!!!!! ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø Haha, I get that! XD
AWWWWWW, i’m so glad you like them!!! š„°š„°š„°š„°
(Bucky’s not technically mine, but he is my Bucky Boi!!! š) Certainly one of my fav couples, and most certainly my fav from my fanfics, lol
June 6, 2023 at 1:41 pm #146606@smiley @godlyfantasy12Ā @euodia-vision @esther-cĀ @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @acancello @sarafini @freedomwriter76
Day 6: love at first sight
Seren ran through the forest, wielding an imaginary sword-stick. He jumped up onto a log, chasing back the play-pretend monsters that surfaced from the dark borders of the shadows.
āTake that! And this! And that too!ā Seren jabbed, parried, and blocked each of the blows that his āopponentsā threw at him. Finally, Seren leaped up, grabbing a limb that was hanging low off a tree and pulled himself up into the protective needles of a fir tree. They canāt get me here. Seren placed his sword-stick in his belt loop and hand over hand began to climb up the branches. This was his favorite pastime; traveling through the woods, fighting off creatures, exploring the unknown.
Suddenly, a cry broke from the silence, flushing a murder of crows from the pines. Serenās head snapped in the direction of the scream. A damsel in distress! Now this is a real adventure! Sliding down the trunk of the tree, Seren hopped down, rolling twice before brushing his trousers off and running towards the danger.
He stopped when coming to a secluded part of the forest, where the wind blew and beat against a small shack in a clearing. The damaged building looked as if it might fall at any moment. Seren gulped. That looksā¦dangerous. Seren huffed, making himself look tall. No, you have to help!
Inside, it was so dark that it took several moments for Serenās eyes to adjust to the shadows. But what reached him right away was the sound of crying. Hoarse, screaming cries. And the smell. It was overpowering. The fetid odor of vomit and urine. The moth-eaten curtains fell still as the breeze stopped, the atmosphere in the room suddenly becoming dreary. Once comfortable and beautiful furniture had faded and become shabby with age and time. The floorboard of the desolate house creaked under his feet as he explored the rooms.
The wailing continued, echoing in the small building. Seren carefully tracked it down, looking behind the curtains, under the couch, in the kitchen cabinetsā¦then, he heard a shaking of a door. He turned to see a small, hidden door in the darkness. Rushing over to it, Seren gripped his sword-stick tightly in one hand, the other slowly turning the door handle.
What he saw terrified him more than the monsters he dreamed.
A child.
A girl.
Seren gagged, too horrified to say anything at first, but he reached out and touched the childās forehead. It was burning hot, vomit stuck to her ragged shirt which was so baggy; her arms had hardly any skin and far too much bone. She was sick, and had been left alone in this dark closet to get better or not.
He wanted to spit words of fury from his mouth. But he kept silent, knowing it would only trouble the girl more.
Kneeling, Seren gently grabbed the girl and put his arms around her, brushing her hair from her face. She must have been not much younger than himselfā¦yet, this feeling he had for her, it was more than pity. It wasā¦love.
Love at first sight.
Seren had heard of it from fairy tales but at the time he thought it had only been for princesses. Yet, here was a crying childā¦a beautiful girlā¦stuck and alone and needing love to be alive; he knew that she was a princess in disguise, underneath all that grime and puke. And he was her prince.
Seren caressed the girlās body, holding her tight to his chest so that she could hear her steady heartbeat. Leaning down, he whispered in her ear, āI will always be here for you. Forever and Always. I will love you to the moon and back. You are safe. With me.ā
The girl sobbed, choking on her tears. Seren just held her tighter.
āI wonāt let you go. I promise.āSo this was love at first sight.
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get saved, save someone else...you never knowJune 6, 2023 at 1:45 pm #146609That was probably the hardest thing I have ever written; I found myself torn and legit crying through sentences…
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