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July 28, 2023 at 7:07 pm #152427July 29, 2023 at 1:07 pm #152447
Awwww that was soo sweet!!!!! š„°
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July 29, 2023 at 1:19 pm #152448July 29, 2023 at 1:21 pm #152449Yeahhh it’s being weird again, I had to go to her profile.
INTP š§” Homeschooler š§” Violinist š§” Current WIP: TCoH
July 29, 2023 at 1:22 pm #152450Lol now that I posted here it doesn’t show she was most recent… lol whoops.
INTP š§” Homeschooler š§” Violinist š§” Current WIP: TCoH
July 29, 2023 at 1:27 pm #152451Ya KP glitched. Iām gonna try to repost it later
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#ProtectSebJuly 30, 2023 at 3:55 pm #152479Awww!! I read all three parts of Nyxās story and I love it!!! š„°
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July 31, 2023 at 4:05 pm #152534Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Soooo…I wrote something for the Headache/Migraine prompt, a scene from my 5th fanfic in my 5-fanfic-series. š
Poor Madelene…š
Headache/Migraine prompt
Madelene bounced Grace in her arms as she screamed and cried. Sheād already tried feeding Graceā¦changing her diaperā¦but nothing would make her stop.
Charlotte tugged on Madeleneās jeans. āMommyā¦Mommyā¦hungryā¦ā
āJust a minute, babyā¦Mama is trying to get Grace to-ā
āMAMA! Mason broke my toy train!ā Branson yelled, running into the living room, Mason right on his heels.
āI didnāt mean it!ā
āMason, please apologize to your brother for breaking his train, and boys, please-ā
āMommyā¦I hungry!ā Charlotte screamed.
āI know, I know-ā
Charlotte laid on the floor and began pounding the living room carpet with her hands and feet, in full tantrum mode, screaming at the top of her lungs.
Madeleneās already throbbing head ached even more.
āCharlotte, you know thatās not how you get what you-Branson, what are you doing!?ā
Branson giggled, standing on the arm of one of the couches. āWatch, Mama, I can jump-Mason, stop it!!!ā Branson screamed, shoving at his twin, who was laughing and trying to push him off the couch.
āBoys, thatās enough! You know to act better than-ā
Charlotte let out an ear-piercing scream, making Grace cry louder, and making Madeleneās head hurt so much more than it already was.
Mason and Branson began wrestling.
Mason suddenly howled. āMama, he bit me!ā
āBranson-!ā
āI HUNGRY!ā
She was about to go insane.
Why did they all have to start screaming and acting crazy at once!? Couldnāt they do it one at a time!?
Grace cried louder. Madelene quickly grabbed a blanket off the couch and wrapped the six-month-old in it, humming and trying to get her to quiet down. She turned her attention back to the boys. āBranson, apologize this instant for biting your brother. You know youāre not supposed to-ā
āIām hungry, Mommy! IāM HUNGRY!ā
āCould you all just stop!?ā Madelene cried, not super loud though.
None of the kids listened though.
Grace couldnāt help itā¦she was a babyā¦but the other three? They knew better than thisā¦or at least she thought they did.
āMAMA, Mason hit me!ā
āBOYS-!āCharlotte let out another scream.
Madeleneās head pounded so much harder. Her headache was so badā¦and the kids wouldnāt stop screaming.
āCould you all just calm down!? Mama is having a very hard day today!ā
Branson kicked Mason off the couch.
Mason howled.
āBranson, apologize-!ā
Mason grabbed Bransonās arm and pulled him onto the floor with him. Wrestling resumed.
Grace screamed, almost right in Madeleneās ear. Madeleneās ear rang, and she didnāt hear much of anythingā¦except screamingā¦for a few minutes.
āWhat is going on?ā
Madelene turned to see Peggy and Steve in the living room.
āOh, I didnāt know you two were coming over! Itās nothing, just-ā
Charlotte screamed again.
Peggyās eyebrows furrowed together. āAre you sure youāre alright?ā
āOh, Iām fine, just-āGrace screamed, and Madelene grimaced.
A fierce, piercing pain in her headā¦and it felt completely awful.
āDo you need help, Madelene?ā
āPeggy, you and Steve are guests. I wouldnāt expect-Branson, Mason, could you two stop!? We have guests over!ā
āAre you sure youāre okay?ā
Charlotte and Grace both screamed, and Branson and Mason didnāt stop fighting, kicking, and biting each other.
Tears fueled by her throbbing head, crazy day, her disorganized and dirty house, her screaming kids that were stressing her out, all of the busyness of lifeā¦fell. Madeleneās vision blurred with tears. āā¦No, Iām not okay.ā
āItās okay, girl, girlā¦donāt cry, Madeleneā¦itās going to be okay,ā Peggy took Grace from Madeleneās arms and wrapped her free arm around Madelene, āand weāll get this worked out and let you have the rest of the day to rest, I promise, itās going to be okay. Steve, can youā¦?ā
Steve nodded. He pried the boys apart and gently, but firmly, pulled them out of the room and out the back door to get fresh air.
āHere, Madeleneā¦sit down on the couchā¦there we go.ā
Madelene merely sat where her friend directed, her head still throbbing. She lost track of timeā¦but slowly, she realized that both Charlotte and Grace had quieted down.
She faced Peggy. āWhat did youā¦?ā
āTurns out Grace needed some milk, and Charlotte calmed down once she realized that screaming was getting her nowhere. Grace is in her crib, and Charlotte is at the table with a small snackā¦the boys are too.ā
Madelene let out a deep breath. āThanks, Peggyā¦means a lot.ā
Peggy smiled and squeezed her hand. āOf course,ā Peggy raised an eyebrow, ābut are there other things going on, Madelene? I know kids are stressfulā¦but you seemed even more stressed out than would be normal.ā
Madelene shrugged. āI donāt knowā¦thereās just so much going on. I watch the kidsā¦go to workā¦Bucky works too and goes to therapyā¦and thereās justā¦so much going on, Peggyā¦so much.ā
āIs there something else going on? Something moreā¦serious? I know youāre also having another childā¦is something wrong?ā
āIt doesnāt have to do with the baby, Peggyā¦noā¦it-itās not thatā¦ā Madelene bit her lip.
Peggy was a friend of hersā¦but she didnāt know if she should burden her with her own problems.
āThen what is it?ā
āMe and Bucky are having trouble in our marriage.ā
She hadnāt meant to blurt that out.
Peggy blinked a couple times. āā¦I see. I can see how all of this would be straining your marriageā¦have you two thought of counseling?ā
āCanāt afford it.ā
āWhen was the last time you two went on a date?ā
Madelene bit her lip and gave herself a minute to think.
When was their last date?
āI think I just got my answer. Okay, listenā¦itās Friday. How about me and Steve take the kids for the weekend so you and Bucky can have a weekend to yourselves?ā
āAll of them? But you two have your own kids, andā¦I meanā¦ā
āWe donāt mind. Iāll ask Steve about it just to make sure, but Iām sure he wonāt mind. You and Bucky need a weekend to yourselvesā¦and it may help take some of the strain off your marriage. Itāll be healthy for both of you to take a break, I promise.ā
āI donāt knowā¦ā
āCome on,ā Peggy squeezed her hand again and gave her a reassuring, friendly smile, āit will be good for both of you. The kids can have some fun at our house.ā
āYou havenāt even checked with Steve.ā
āLetās do that right now then, shall we?ā Peggy winked and stood. āCome on, Madelene.ā
Madelene smiled faintly and followed her friend into the kitchen.
āMason, look! I have a monkey!ā
Mason giggled and grabbed his own Animal Cracker. āStevieā¦look, I got a tiger! Itās gonna eat you!ā
Steve pulled away from Mason. āWait! I donāt want to get eatenā¦ā
Mason, Branson, and even Charlotte all giggled.
Steve chuckled, and his gaze rose, his eyes meeting his wifeās. āIs something wrong?ā
Peggy smiled. āNot at all. I was just wondering; would it be good with you if we had the kids come stay with us for the weekend so Madelene and Bucky could have a break?ā
Steve shrugged. āGood with me. Ryoās going to be at his friendās house for the weekendā¦but we can bring the kids over.ā
āGreat,ā Peggy grinned and faced Madelene, āso itās a plan. Iāll help you pack their bags.ā
Madelene faced Steve. āAre you two sure? I meanā¦they can be crazy sometimesā¦and are you sure you want all of them over the weekend?ā
Steve nodded. āWhy not? We already have our two kidsā¦besides, I think you and Bucky need a weekend to relax. Six kids all seven or younger for the whole weekendā¦what could be more fun?ā
Peggy laughed and nodded. āOf course. Weāll have lots of fun.ā
Madelene slowly nodded. āOkayā¦if youāre sure. Thank you two, so much.ā
Peggy smiled and grabbed Madeleneās hands, giving them a quick squeeze. āAnytime. Now come on, how about we go get those bags packed?ā
Madelene smiled and nodded. āLetās.ā
July 31, 2023 at 4:10 pm #152536@freedomwriter76
āStevieā¦look, I got a tiger! Itās gonna eat you!ā
Stevieā¦š¤£
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July 31, 2023 at 4:20 pm #152537Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@esther-c lol, Ryo calls him “Stevie” too. šš
July 31, 2023 at 4:32 pm #152538@freedomwriter76
Oh my XD
But look how well Peggy does in the new world
And Steve is the best
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.ā
āāIsaiahā¬ ā43ā¬:ā1ā¬July 31, 2023 at 4:35 pm #152539Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley “oh my” is right šš
yes, she does amazing XXD IKR!? Steve is just amazing š
July 31, 2023 at 4:37 pm #152540@freedomwriter76
AwwĀ I’m glad she’s getting a break
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
July 31, 2023 at 5:04 pm #152541@freedomwriter76
Aww, I love that. šš„°
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July 31, 2023 at 6:59 pm #152544@freedomwriter76
I just popped in and read your piece. Oh my goodness, you are such an amazing writer! You could clearly see the image you wrote about, felt how overwhelmed (and relived) Madelene was. Had great description and lifelike characters! Please tag me if you post more!
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