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    Light
    @lightoverdarkness6
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      @acancello

      Oh nooo poor Orion!! šŸ˜…šŸ˜­šŸ˜­

      #HugRikerSquad

      #152447
      hybridlore
      @hybridlore
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        @godlyfantasy12

        Awwww that was soo sweet!!!!! šŸ„°

        INTP šŸ§” Homeschooler šŸ§” Violinist šŸ§” Current WIP: TCoH

        #152448
        whaley
        @whalekeeper
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          @hybridlore

          Can you see Godly’s post? It’s not showing up on my end šŸ™

          #ProtectAdolinKholin

          #152449
          hybridlore
          @hybridlore
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            @whalekeeper

            Yeahhh it’s being weird again, I had to go to her profile.

            INTP šŸ§” Homeschooler šŸ§” Violinist šŸ§” Current WIP: TCoH

            #152450
            hybridlore
            @hybridlore
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              Lol now that I posted here it doesn’t show she was most recent… lol whoops.

              INTP šŸ§” Homeschooler šŸ§” Violinist šŸ§” Current WIP: TCoH

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              GodlyFantasy12
              @godlyfantasy12
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                Ya KP glitched. Iā€™m gonna try to repost it later

                #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
                #ProtectMarcel
                #ProtectSeb

                #152479
                Esther
                @esther-c
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                  @godlyfantasy12

                  Awww!! I read all three parts of Nyxā€™s story and I love it!!! šŸ„°

                  Write what should not be forgotten. ā€” Isabel Allende

                  #152534
                  Anonymous
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                    @esther-c @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @euodia-vision @smiley @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

                    Soooo…I wrote something for the Headache/Migraine prompt, a scene from my 5th fanfic in my 5-fanfic-series. šŸ˜‰

                    Poor Madelene…šŸ˜…

                    Headache/Migraine prompt

                     

                    Madelene bounced Grace in her arms as she screamed and cried. Sheā€™d already tried feeding Graceā€¦changing her diaperā€¦but nothing would make her stop.

                    Charlotte tugged on Madeleneā€™s jeans. ā€œMommyā€¦Mommyā€¦hungryā€¦ā€

                    ā€œJust a minute, babyā€¦Mama is trying to get Grace to-ā€œ

                    ā€œMAMA! Mason broke my toy train!ā€ Branson yelled, running into the living room, Mason right on his heels.

                    ā€œI didnā€™t mean it!ā€

                    ā€œMason, please apologize to your brother for breaking his train, and boys, please-ā€œ

                    ā€œMommyā€¦I hungry!ā€ Charlotte screamed.

                    ā€œI know, I know-ā€œ

                    Charlotte laid on the floor and began pounding the living room carpet with her hands and feet, in full tantrum mode, screaming at the top of her lungs.

                    Madeleneā€™s already throbbing head ached even more.

                    ā€œCharlotte, you know thatā€™s not how you get what you-Branson, what are you doing!?ā€

                    Branson giggled, standing on the arm of one of the couches. ā€œWatch, Mama, I can jump-Mason, stop it!!!ā€ Branson screamed, shoving at his twin, who was laughing and trying to push him off the couch.

                    ā€œBoys, thatā€™s enough! You know to act better than-ā€œ

                    Charlotte let out an ear-piercing scream, making Grace cry louder, and making Madeleneā€™s head hurt so much more than it already was.

                    Mason and Branson began wrestling.

                    Mason suddenly howled. ā€œMama, he bit me!ā€

                    ā€œBranson-!ā€

                    ā€œI HUNGRY!ā€

                    She was about to go insane.

                    Why did they all have to start screaming and acting crazy at once!? Couldnā€™t they do it one at a time!?

                    Grace cried louder. Madelene quickly grabbed a blanket off the couch and wrapped the six-month-old in it, humming and trying to get her to quiet down. She turned her attention back to the boys. ā€œBranson, apologize this instant for biting your brother. You know youā€™re not supposed to-ā€œ

                    ā€œIā€™m hungry, Mommy! Iā€™M HUNGRY!ā€

                    ā€œCould you all just stop!?ā€ Madelene cried, not super loud though.

                    None of the kids listened though.

                    Grace couldnā€™t help itā€¦she was a babyā€¦but the other three? They knew better than thisā€¦or at least she thought they did.

                    ā€œMAMA, Mason hit me!ā€
                    ā€œBOYS-!ā€

                    Charlotte let out another scream.

                    Madeleneā€™s head pounded so much harder. Her headache was so badā€¦and the kids wouldnā€™t stop screaming.

                    ā€œCould you all just calm down!? Mama is having a very hard day today!ā€

                    Branson kicked Mason off the couch.

                    Mason howled.

                    ā€œBranson, apologize-!ā€

                    Mason grabbed Bransonā€™s arm and pulled him onto the floor with him. Wrestling resumed.

                    Grace screamed, almost right in Madeleneā€™s ear. Madeleneā€™s ear rang, and she didnā€™t hear much of anythingā€¦except screamingā€¦for a few minutes.

                    ā€œWhat is going on?ā€

                    Madelene turned to see Peggy and Steve in the living room.

                    ā€œOh, I didnā€™t know you two were coming over! Itā€™s nothing, just-ā€œ

                    Charlotte screamed again.

                    Peggyā€™s eyebrows furrowed together. ā€œAre you sure youā€™re alright?ā€
                    ā€œOh, Iā€™m fine, just-ā€œ

                    Grace screamed, and Madelene grimaced.

                    A fierce, piercing pain in her headā€¦and it felt completely awful.

                    ā€œDo you need help, Madelene?ā€

                    ā€œPeggy, you and Steve are guests. I wouldnā€™t expect-Branson, Mason, could you two stop!? We have guests over!ā€

                    ā€œAre you sure youā€™re okay?ā€

                    Charlotte and Grace both screamed, and Branson and Mason didnā€™t stop fighting, kicking, and biting each other.

                    Tears fueled by her throbbing head, crazy day, her disorganized and dirty house, her screaming kids that were stressing her out, all of the busyness of lifeā€¦fell. Madeleneā€™s vision blurred with tears. ā€œā€¦No, Iā€™m not okay.ā€

                    ā€œItā€™s okay, girl, girlā€¦donā€™t cry, Madeleneā€¦itā€™s going to be okay,ā€ Peggy took Grace from Madeleneā€™s arms and wrapped her free arm around Madelene, ā€œand weā€™ll get this worked out and let you have the rest of the day to rest, I promise, itā€™s going to be okay. Steve, can youā€¦?ā€

                    Steve nodded. He pried the boys apart and gently, but firmly, pulled them out of the room and out the back door to get fresh air.

                    ā€œHere, Madeleneā€¦sit down on the couchā€¦there we go.ā€

                    Madelene merely sat where her friend directed, her head still throbbing. She lost track of timeā€¦but slowly, she realized that both Charlotte and Grace had quieted down.

                    She faced Peggy. ā€œWhat did youā€¦?ā€

                    ā€œTurns out Grace needed some milk, and Charlotte calmed down once she realized that screaming was getting her nowhere. Grace is in her crib, and Charlotte is at the table with a small snackā€¦the boys are too.ā€

                    Madelene let out a deep breath. ā€œThanks, Peggyā€¦means a lot.ā€

                    Peggy smiled and squeezed her hand. ā€œOf course,ā€ Peggy raised an eyebrow, ā€œbut are there other things going on, Madelene? I know kids are stressfulā€¦but you seemed even more stressed out than would be normal.ā€

                    Madelene shrugged. ā€œI donā€™t knowā€¦thereā€™s just so much going on. I watch the kidsā€¦go to workā€¦Bucky works too and goes to therapyā€¦and thereā€™s justā€¦so much going on, Peggyā€¦so much.ā€

                    ā€œIs there something else going on? Something moreā€¦serious? I know youā€™re also having another childā€¦is something wrong?ā€

                    ā€œIt doesnā€™t have to do with the baby, Peggyā€¦noā€¦it-itā€™s not thatā€¦ā€ Madelene bit her lip.

                    Peggy was a friend of hersā€¦but she didnā€™t know if she should burden her with her own problems.

                    ā€œThen what is it?ā€

                    ā€œMe and Bucky are having trouble in our marriage.ā€

                    She hadnā€™t meant to blurt that out.

                    Peggy blinked a couple times. ā€œā€¦I see. I can see how all of this would be straining your marriageā€¦have you two thought of counseling?ā€

                    ā€œCanā€™t afford it.ā€

                    ā€œWhen was the last time you two went on a date?ā€

                    Madelene bit her lip and gave herself a minute to think.

                    When was their last date?

                    ā€œI think I just got my answer. Okay, listenā€¦itā€™s Friday. How about me and Steve take the kids for the weekend so you and Bucky can have a weekend to yourselves?ā€

                    ā€œAll of them? But you two have your own kids, andā€¦I meanā€¦ā€

                    ā€œWe donā€™t mind. Iā€™ll ask Steve about it just to make sure, but Iā€™m sure he wonā€™t mind. You and Bucky need a weekend to yourselvesā€¦and it may help take some of the strain off your marriage. Itā€™ll be healthy for both of you to take a break, I promise.ā€

                    ā€œI donā€™t knowā€¦ā€

                    ā€œCome on,ā€ Peggy squeezed her hand again and gave her a reassuring, friendly smile, ā€œit will be good for both of you. The kids can have some fun at our house.ā€

                    ā€œYou havenā€™t even checked with Steve.ā€

                    ā€œLetā€™s do that right now then, shall we?ā€ Peggy winked and stood. ā€œCome on, Madelene.ā€

                    Madelene smiled faintly and followed her friend into the kitchen.

                    ā€œMason, look! I have a monkey!ā€

                    Mason giggled and grabbed his own Animal Cracker. ā€œStevieā€¦look, I got a tiger! Itā€™s gonna eat you!ā€

                    Steve pulled away from Mason. ā€œWait! I donā€™t want to get eatenā€¦ā€

                    Mason, Branson, and even Charlotte all giggled.

                    Steve chuckled, and his gaze rose, his eyes meeting his wifeā€™s. ā€œIs something wrong?ā€

                    Peggy smiled. ā€œNot at all. I was just wondering; would it be good with you if we had the kids come stay with us for the weekend so Madelene and Bucky could have a break?ā€

                    Steve shrugged. ā€œGood with me. Ryoā€™s going to be at his friendā€™s house for the weekendā€¦but we can bring the kids over.ā€

                    ā€œGreat,ā€ Peggy grinned and faced Madelene, ā€œso itā€™s a plan. Iā€™ll help you pack their bags.ā€

                    Madelene faced Steve. ā€œAre you two sure? I meanā€¦they can be crazy sometimesā€¦and are you sure you want all of them over the weekend?ā€

                    Steve nodded. ā€œWhy not? We already have our two kidsā€¦besides, I think you and Bucky need a weekend to relax. Six kids all seven or younger for the whole weekendā€¦what could be more fun?ā€

                    Peggy laughed and nodded. ā€œOf course. Weā€™ll have lots of fun.ā€

                    Madelene slowly nodded. ā€œOkayā€¦if youā€™re sure. Thank you two, so much.ā€

                    Peggy smiled and grabbed Madeleneā€™s hands, giving them a quick squeeze. ā€œAnytime. Now come on, how about we go get those bags packed?ā€

                    Madelene smiled and nodded. ā€œLetā€™s.ā€

                    #152536
                    Esther
                    @esther-c
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                      @freedomwriter76

                      ā€œStevieā€¦look, I got a tiger! Itā€™s gonna eat you!ā€

                      Stevieā€¦šŸ¤£

                      Write what should not be forgotten. ā€” Isabel Allende

                      #152537
                      Anonymous
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                        @esther-c lol, Ryo calls him “Stevie” too. šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

                        #152538
                        Smiley
                        @smiley
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                          @freedomwriter76

                          Oh my XD

                          But look how well Peggy does in the new world

                          And Steve is the best

                          I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.ā€
                          ā€­ā€­Isaiahā€¬ ā€­43ā€¬:ā€­1ā€¬

                          #152539
                          Anonymous
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                            @smiley “oh my” is right šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

                            yes, she does amazing XXD IKR!? Steve is just amazing šŸ˜

                            #152540
                            MineralizedWritings
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                              @freedomwriter76

                              AwwĀ  I’m glad she’s getting a break

                              "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

                              #152541
                              Esther
                              @esther-c
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                                @freedomwriter76

                                Aww, I love that. šŸ˜‚šŸ„°

                                Write what should not be forgotten. ā€” Isabel Allende

                                #152544
                                Allison
                                @acancello
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                                  @freedomwriter76

                                  I just popped in and read your piece. Oh my goodness, you are such an amazing writer! You could clearly see the image you wrote about, felt how overwhelmed (and relived) Madelene was. Had great description and lifelike characters! Please tag me if you post more!

                                  "Would you kindly...?"

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