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Oh, lol.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
20-21!!!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.
I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.
Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*
Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….
Yes!! I love that chapter!!!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
Yes! Get Jim! Lol.
Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Haha. I wish.
Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
Ugh… poor 314.
I’m still holding on to that guess though.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
22-23!!!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer