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June 16, 2025 at 2:19 pm #204017
Oh, lol.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 17, 2025 at 12:17 pm #204027@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
20-21!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 17, 2025 at 12:37 pm #204029Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.
I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.
Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 17, 2025 at 12:39 pm #204030Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*
Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….
Yes!! I love that chapter!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 17, 2025 at 12:41 pm #204031Yes! Get Jim! Lol.
Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 17, 2025 at 1:02 pm #204032Haha. I wish.
Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.
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June 17, 2025 at 1:25 pm #204036Ugh… poor 314.
I’m still holding on to that guess though.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 18, 2025 at 11:45 am #204066@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
22-23!!!
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June 18, 2025 at 4:50 pm #204077What in the world!?
I can’t believe you.
Well, I guess I can, but still.
*pouts*
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 18, 2025 at 5:10 pm #204078what are you mad about now?
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June 18, 2025 at 5:11 pm #204079The cliffhanger!!!!!
I didn’t expect Jonathan to go chasing after the boy. I thought he meant like, I have to do something… long term. Not immediately. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 18, 2025 at 5:14 pm #204080Oh that. hehe.
Yeah, well he was a little bit over the edge.
Did you expect the boy to fight him, or to try and run away with him?
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June 18, 2025 at 5:20 pm #204081True.
I don’t know what I expected, but I wasn’t very surprised that the boy fought him. 314 must have been the exception.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 18, 2025 at 5:22 pm #204082hmm. yeah, I suppose.
Did you see what Abby said at the end of the last chapter? Cracks me up every time I read the comment.
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June 18, 2025 at 6:04 pm #204084Lolol.
See, I told you, people throw books across the room. If you had ended it there, definitely a book throwing moment.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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