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    hybridlore
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      @ellette-giselle

      Oh, lol.

      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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      Ellette Giselle
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        @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

         

        NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

        20-21!!!

        And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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        hybridlore
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          @ellette-giselle

          Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

          I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

          Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.

          "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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          Ellette Giselle
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            @hybridlore

             

            Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*

             

            Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….

             

            Yes!! I love that chapter!!!

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            hybridlore
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              @ellette-giselle

              Yes! Get Jim! Lol.

              Just a guess. Can’t remember if we talked about this before, but I distrust characters’ “deaths” unless I get 100% proof that they’re dead because of all the “resurrections” in books, lol.

              "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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              Ellette Giselle
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                @hybridlore

                 

                Haha. I wish.

                 

                Oh, so you want a body, do you? I can go dig it up. Maybe. Government probably burned it through.

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                hybridlore
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  Ugh… poor 314.

                  I’m still holding on to that guess though.

                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

                     

                    NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

                    22-23!!!

                    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                    hybridlore
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      What in the world!?

                      I can’t believe you.

                      Well, I guess I can, but still.

                      *pouts*

                      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @hybridlore

                        what are you mad about now?

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                        hybridlore
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                          @ellette-giselle

                          The cliffhanger!!!!!

                          I didn’t expect Jonathan to go chasing after the boy. I thought he meant like, I have to do something… long term. Not immediately. ?

                          "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                          Ellette Giselle
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                            @hybridlore

                            Oh that. hehe.

                             

                            Yeah, well he was a little bit over the edge.

                            Did you expect the boy to fight him, or to try and run away with him?

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                            hybridlore
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                              @ellette-giselle

                              True.

                              I don’t know what I expected, but I wasn’t very surprised that the boy fought him. 314 must have been the exception.

                              "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                              Ellette Giselle
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                                @hybridlore

                                hmm. yeah, I suppose.

                                Did you see what Abby said at the end of the last chapter? Cracks me up every time I read the comment.

                                 

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                                hybridlore
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  Lolol.

                                  See, I told you, people throw books across the room. If you had ended it there, definitely a book throwing moment.

                                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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