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June 12, 2025 at 12:58 pm #203972
No problem.
I’m guessing that means you just read the chapters? Or did you not get to it yet?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 12, 2025 at 12:59 pm #203973@ellette-giselle I’m just reading them now.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
June 12, 2025 at 1:00 pm #203974perfect!
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June 12, 2025 at 2:47 pm #203975Good chapters! Nice to see Jonathan getting to see more of what the gang does. It seems like he’s becoming a full member.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 13, 2025 at 7:45 am #203980The question is…. is that good or bad? ?
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June 13, 2025 at 10:04 am #203981@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
PART 2
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June 13, 2025 at 10:22 am #203982I don’t know yet. ? Probably not great, but I mean at least the others are accepting him.
Okay!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 13, 2025 at 10:36 am #203983Hah! so there was a time jump!
Called it ?
So the memories are coming back for Jonathan…
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 13, 2025 at 10:56 am #203984…. and then he got pushed off a building.
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June 13, 2025 at 10:57 am #203985Lol.
I’m very curious to see what the rest of the book is like.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 16, 2025 at 10:40 am #204010@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
NEXT CHAPTERS!!!
18-19
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June 16, 2025 at 12:47 pm #204012Augh! Really??
Rick is not a nice guy. ? And poor Jim!!
I love the dynamics you have going.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 16, 2025 at 12:48 pm #204013What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!
*stares at you with total deadpan face*
Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?
Thanks so much!
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June 16, 2025 at 2:10 pm #204014Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *
His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 16, 2025 at 2:12 pm #204015Oh. Duh.
I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.
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