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    Ellette Giselle
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      @hybridlore

      Yes. I did.

       

      Well, you could….. I’d just have to write it……

      And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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      hybridlore
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        @ellette-giselle

        True, true. ?

         

        "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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        hybridlore
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          I will be sure to remember that on the next cliffhanger.

          "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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          Ellette Giselle
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            @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

             

            NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

            And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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            hybridlore
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              @ellette-giselle

              Aww. That was sweet.

              Jim seemed nicer to Jonathan before these chapters, but I guess Jonathan was hidden and Jim didn’t have to worry about the others watching.

              Did the gang have something to do with Jonathan’s parents dying?

              "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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              Ellette Giselle
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                @hybridlore

                what was sweet?

                 

                Yeah, Jim has got to look out for himself, and to him that means making sure no one thinks he’s going soft. He still is nice to Jonathan… just not in front of other people.

                 

                No, the gang was not involved in that one. They were killed because they hid Jonathan.

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                hybridlore
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  Jim giving Jonathan shoes. It was a sweet ending.

                  Ohh, right. But other people, maybe.

                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @hybridlore

                    Oh, I forgot that chapter ended there. ?

                     

                    Yeah, they’ve turned in plenty of people. For Jonathan’s parents it was more Agent retaliation. We’re here to pick up the kid. You don’t have the kid? Fine, you pay for it. That sort of thing.

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                    hybridlore
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      Got it.

                      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                      Ellette Giselle
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                        Theme song for Jonathan in current stage of arc and somewhat forward.

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                        Ellette Giselle
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                          Chapters 12-13!!!!

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                          hybridlore
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                            @ellette-giselle

                            Aw, poor Jim. I liked this section.

                            "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @hybridlore

                              I know! Poor guy!

                              And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                              Ellette Giselle
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                                @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

                                 

                                CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!

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                                Keilah H.
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                                  @ellette-giselle I was gonna sign in to comment and not just be a guest user, but turns out this computer would probably send the comments to my mom instead of me, which is probably a bad idea lol

                                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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