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    Koshka
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      @ellette-giselle

      Ooooooooo…

      *Reads quotes*

      *Stares at pictures*

      *Nods to self*

      Another poor kid, though this one has a serious attitude. Probably a rebel of some sort. Nice.

      A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

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      Ellette Giselle
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        @koshka

         

        Read the chapters and you’ll know who he is.

         

        Glad you like!! ?

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        Ellette Giselle
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          @koshka

           

          Serious attitude as in he seriously has an attitude, or he is a serious character?

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          Ellette Giselle
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            @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

             

            Leaving for my friend’s wedding in a few minutes. Won’t be back until late this night. I’m running some of the behind the scenes.

            Plus, I don’t see any edits so I’m assuming only a few people got yesterday’s chapters read. So, I’ll skip today.

             

            Thanks so much for all the help you’ve given so far!

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            Koshka
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              @ellette-giselle

              Seriously got an attitude that might cover some seriousness.

              Ohh, have fun!

              I’ll probably not get to the chapters till Sunday, as today is a “clean half the campus” day between camps.

              A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

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              hybridlore
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                @ellette-giselle

                Okay, have fun!

                "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                Ellette Giselle
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                  @koshka

                  Haha! Okay then.

                   

                  Sounds good! Looking forward to it!

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

                     

                    ( @kyronthearcanin       @jonas      @power )

                     

                    CHAPTER 7 and 8!!!!

                     

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                    hybridlore
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      I like Jim more and more…

                      Good chapters! I really like this book.

                      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @hybridlore

                        Do you!!? I like him too. ?

                         

                        I’m so glad you like it. I’m actually also starting to like it as well.

                         

                        Any thoughts about the new situation Jonathan is in? Also, out of curiosity, what makes you like Jim? (I like him, but i know his whole arc. I’m interested to see what you like. )

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                        hybridlore
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                          @ellette-giselle

                          You didn’t like it before? Lol.

                          So how much of this have you written?

                          It’ll be interesting to see what happens with Viper.

                          He’s a tough guy who takes in a little kid. Plus, he doesn’t seem to want to be there any more than Jonathan does.

                           

                          "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                          Ellette Giselle
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                            @hybridlore

                            This is draft number…… 7. I think.

                            I wrote this when I was 13 and have done rewrites almost every year since. This time I scrapped the draft and started over completely since I know the story inside and out. I feel like I can breathe again and it’s going much better.

                             

                             

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                            hybridlore
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                              @ellette-giselle

                              Wow. That’s a lot of drafts.

                              How far through this draft are you? Finished?

                              "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                              Ellette Giselle
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                                @hybridlore

                                I do two chapters each day and then post them. I may jump the gun today so that I have some fallback though.

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                                hybridlore
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  Oh wow. So you wrote those two this morning?

                                  Darn. This means I can’t ask for bonus chapters. ? XD

                                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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