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June 5, 2025 at 12:04 pm #203851
Okay. Sounds good.
I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!
Did you expect that to happen, or did it take you blindsided?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 5, 2025 at 12:05 pm #203852I was not expecting it at all!! ??
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 5, 2025 at 12:18 pm #203853Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
Yep
It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.
I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I had no qualms, and neither did the Atticus-reminiscient owner of the book. He told me there were certain books every person should read, and this book was on the list for the influence it had on dystopia.
I don’t remember any raw details. But if there was anything inappropriate, it was probably meaningful for the story and didn’t bother me.
I am out of signature ideas
June 6, 2025 at 12:10 pm #203866@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
( @kyronthearcanin @jonas @power )
CHAPTER 6 and 7!!!!
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June 6, 2025 at 12:53 pm #203867Poor Jonathan… ???
The chapters were really good.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 6, 2025 at 12:56 pm #203868I know!!!!
Really? Thanks so much!
What do you think of Jim?
Also, did you expect his parents to die?
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June 6, 2025 at 1:01 pm #203869KP just ate my post and went really weird…
I like Jim a lot.
I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.
Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 6, 2025 at 1:05 pm #203870Beast. *sigh* almost as bad as Smaug the laptop.
Good. I like Jim too! ☺️
Want me to make a moodboard for him?!
Poor kiddo.
Hmm, I guess you’ll have to keep reading to find out.
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June 6, 2025 at 1:08 pm #203871Hah, yes!
Sure! By the way, I liked the moodboards you already posted. Amber’s was really pretty. *is now remembering that name, and wonders when she is coming into the story*
I see similarities between Joseph’s story and this one. It feels like we’re going to time jump (also, you said that this story is about a young man… I think…) so that’s my guess.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 6, 2025 at 1:12 pm #203872Thanks!! I really like these moodboards too. I love the feel.
Aw thanks! I love Amber.
Hmm. We’ll have to see.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 6, 2025 at 1:14 pm #203873@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
If anyone is interested, I would have to call this the theme song of the book.
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June 6, 2025 at 1:54 pm #203874I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 6, 2025 at 2:55 pm #203875and anyone else interested….. @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper

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June 6, 2025 at 2:57 pm #203876All I know is one of us is right…
Lolol!
Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 6, 2025 at 2:58 pm #203877Thank you!!! Yes, he’s great.
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