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    Ellette Giselle
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      @hybridlore

      Okay. Sounds good.

       

      I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!

       

      Did you expect that to happen, or did it take you blindsided?

      And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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      hybridlore
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        @ellette-giselle

        I was not expecting it at all!! ??

        "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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        whaley
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          @hybridlore

          Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

          Yep


          @ellette-giselle

          It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.

          I read most of it at a getaway house by the ocean (one of my favorite recent memories), and it was a fun read. I didn’t finish it but at the time I had no qualms, and neither did the Atticus-reminiscient owner of the book. He told me there were certain books every person should read, and this book was on the list for the influence it had on dystopia.

          I don’t remember any raw details. But if there was anything inappropriate, it was probably meaningful for the story and didn’t bother me.

          I am out of signature ideas

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          Ellette Giselle
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            CHAPTER 6 and 7!!!!

             

             

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            hybridlore
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              @ellette-giselle

              Poor Jonathan… ???

              The chapters were really good.

              "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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              Ellette Giselle
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                @hybridlore

                I know!!!!

                 

                Really? Thanks so much!

                What do you think of Jim?

                Also, did you expect his parents to die?

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                hybridlore
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  KP just ate my post and went really weird…

                  I like Jim a lot.

                  I knew his parents were going to die once they hid Jonathan, but before that, no.

                  Does the story time jump after this, or does the whole book happen when Jonathan is nine?

                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @hybridlore

                    Beast. *sigh* almost as bad as Smaug the laptop.

                     

                    Good. I like Jim too! ☺️

                    Want me to make a moodboard for him?!

                     

                    Poor kiddo.

                     

                    Hmm, I guess you’ll have to keep reading to find out.

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                    hybridlore
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      Hah, yes!

                      Sure! By the way, I liked the moodboards you already posted. Amber’s was really pretty. *is now remembering that name, and wonders when she is coming into the story*

                      I see similarities between Joseph’s story and this one. It feels like we’re going to time jump (also, you said that this story is about a young man… I think…) so that’s my guess.

                      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @hybridlore

                        Thanks!! I really like these moodboards too. I love the feel.

                         

                        Aw thanks! I love Amber.

                         

                         

                        Hmm. We’ll have to see.

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                        Ellette Giselle
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                          If anyone is interested, I would have to call this the theme song of the book.

                           

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                          hybridlore
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                            @ellette-giselle

                            I’ll have to listen to it later with my headphones!

                            "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @hybridlore

                               

                              and anyone else interested….. @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

                               

                               

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                              hybridlore
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                                @ellette-giselle

                                All I know is one of us is right…

                                Lolol!

                                Great quotes. He seems to have a lot of personality. XD

                                "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                                Ellette Giselle
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                                  @hybridlore

                                   

                                  Thank you!!!  Yes, he’s great.

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