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That is very odd. Did you let it load and scroll down? I just tried clicking on the link as a guest and it worked fine for me…..
Try again. I reloaded the page on my end,
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
It worked!
I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.
Great job!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Yay! Wonder what glitched before…. ?
Oh really? Whoops! Did you mark the spot, or do I need to go find it?
Glad the tension is building!! Have a favorite character yet?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
( @kyronthearcanin @jonas @power )
CHAPTER 4 and 5!!!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.
I don’t know… I like Don. ? And Jonathan.
also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Okay thanks.
I noticed you don’t comment. Can you not do that for some reason because of a setting I have, or do you rather tag me here?
Yes, I like Don too. ?
Hmm. I’ve seen the movie, but I never was able to get my hands on the book. I actually took a lot of inspiration from Equilibrium, and even some from Hunger Games, although that really isn’t so clear.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.
Dystopian classic. *Sighs emphatically* I remember reading one of the plot twists as a nervous little thirteen-year-old and freaking out. Really good book.
I am out of signature ideas
It’s so sad… I love 314 so much.
Also. random thought. this would make such a great manga/comic.
(Agh.. no, I’m not about to cry. totally not. not at all.)wa wawawa waaaa
I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.
I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?
Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Wait really?!! You’re gonna cry!!??
*jumps around the room cheering*
*pauses and realizes that is not the right response to someone crying*
*offers tissue*
*goes back to celebrating*
Oooo, a comic would be pretty insanely cool!!! Oh wow. What would you think of doing a few of the characters in comic form? You don’t have top if you don’t want. That would just be super cool to see sometime.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
Yes, it sure is a good one!
Oh, is that something glitchy on my end or on yours?
Equilibrium is a movie. It’s rated R for one scene at the end that we skip, and it has language but we filter it out with ClearPlay.
It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t know if it’s clean.
Also, were you able to access today’s chapters, or do I need to reload again like yesterday?
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@grcr It would be such a cool comic!
Ohhh, gotcha.
I don’t know, let me check.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Yeah, I literally felt a tear at the goodbye scene. And I don’t usually cry reading things (at least, not fiction).
Can’t wait for the next chapters…!!
It would. I don’t know. I’d have to ponder for a while. no promises. I’ve already got me hands full atm… but the temptation is great.
wa wawawa waaaa
Oh my word!! *squeal of excitement* yay!! Well, the next ones will be out tomorrow.
Oh that would be SO COOL. *Hopes and prays temptation will win.*
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.
and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.
Now… 314???????!
And Jonathan!!!!
nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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