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August 5, 2025 at 12:36 pm #204962
I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for comments. Also I’m too engaged by the story and characters to stop and comment on it, so take that as a good sign. Looking forward to seeing where this story will go!
Also preparing for my own vacations starting tomorrow, so I probably won’t leave many comments for a bit, but I will continue reading through it, and if I see anything noteworthy, will leave a note.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 5, 2025 at 12:40 pm #204964Thanks! No problem.
Also I’m too engaged by the story and characters to stop and comment on it, so take that as a good sign. Looking forward to seeing where this story will go!
Wow!! Cool!
As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?
And Jim too?
Also preparing for my own vacations starting tomorrow, so I probably won’t leave many comments for a bit, but I will continue reading through it, and if I see anything noteworthy, will leave a note.
Sounds good!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 5, 2025 at 12:47 pm #204966As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?
And Jim too?

…but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I haven’t dug through all the pages yet. Hopeing he will find redemption, and not just Jonathan.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 5, 2025 at 12:49 pm #204967@linus-smallprint why is that so funny lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 5, 2025 at 12:51 pm #204968*dies laughing*
Okay, that’s really funny.
Oh, I just hadn’t finished it yet at the time…. let me find it really quick and upload it for you. You saw all the others, right? Or should I re-post those?
I love Jim! He’s such a great character. And yes, I think I did like him better than Jonathan at this point.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 5, 2025 at 12:52 pm #204969
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 5, 2025 at 12:53 pm #204970I found Jim’s. I also have seen Jonathan, 314, and two people I have yet to meet: Amber and Michael.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 5, 2025 at 12:56 pm #204971Oh, I just re-posted Jim’s. lol.
Okay, Jonathan, 314, Michael and Amber…. that should be it for that book.
Yep, that’s it.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 5, 2025 at 12:58 pm #204972@ellette-giselle awww man no Ron and Jason? (Jason was the engineer right? The one who kept wanting to dismantle the plane?)
actually speaking of plane do you have an Evan one, too? Might make @theducktator happy.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
August 5, 2025 at 1:01 pm #204973Hmm, I could possibly put some together for them…..
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 5, 2025 at 1:01 pm #204974Alrighty!
Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 5, 2025 at 1:03 pm #204975Oh!! Thank you very much!
Sorry I’m so incapable when it comes to tech. XD
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
August 5, 2025 at 1:04 pm #204976
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 5, 2025 at 1:04 pm #204977You’re welcome!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
August 5, 2025 at 1:06 pm #204978@ellette-giselle yes, do it
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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