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    Linus Smallprint
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      @ellette-giselle

      I have made it up to the end of Chapter 21. Sorry for the lack of comments. I’ve been quite busy with a lot of work. Currently working two part-time jobs and have to cover for my coworkers while they are on vacation. I have time to read at work, but I am offline and don’t have much data, so I don’t really want to use it up for comments. Also I’m too engaged by the story and characters to stop and comment on it, so take that as a good sign. Looking forward to seeing where this story will go!

      Also preparing for my own vacations starting tomorrow, so I probably won’t leave many comments for a bit, but I will continue reading through it, and if I see anything noteworthy, will leave a note.

      Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

      #204964
      Ellette Giselle
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        @linus-smallprint

         

        Thanks! No problem.

         

        Also I’m too engaged by the story and characters to stop and comment on it, so take that as a good sign. Looking forward to seeing where this story will go!

        Wow!! Cool!

         

        As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?

        And Jim too?

         

        Also preparing for my own vacations starting tomorrow, so I probably won’t leave many comments for a bit, but I will continue reading through it, and if I see anything noteworthy, will leave a note.

        Sounds good!

         

         

         

        And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

        #204966
        Linus Smallprint
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          @ellette-giselle

          As of now, what do you think of Jonathan?

          And Jim too?

          …but also interesting and likeable in their odd sort of way. I think I like Jim better of the two, he seems slightly less stoobid. I’m afraid he is going to disappear into the background, because you didn’t make a moodboard for him on page one of this forum. Though I haven’t dug through all the pages yet. Hopeing he will find redemption, and not just Jonathan.

          Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

          #204967
          Keilah H.
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            @linus-smallprint why is that so funny lol

            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

            #204968
            Ellette Giselle
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              @linus-smallprint

              *dies laughing*

              Okay, that’s really funny.

               

              Oh, I just hadn’t finished it yet at the time…. let me find it really quick and upload it for you. You saw all the others, right? Or should I re-post those?

              I love Jim! He’s such a great character. And yes, I think I did like him better than Jonathan at this point.

               

              And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

              #204969
              Ellette Giselle
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                @linus-smallprint

                And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

                #204970
                Linus Smallprint
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  I found Jim’s. I also have seen Jonathan, 314, and two people I have yet to meet: Amber and Michael.

                  Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                  #204971
                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @linus-smallprint

                    Oh, I just re-posted Jim’s. lol.

                     

                    Okay, Jonathan, 314, Michael and Amber…. that should be it for that book.

                     

                    Yep, that’s it.

                    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

                    #204972
                    Keilah H.
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                      @ellette-giselle awww man no Ron and Jason? (Jason was the engineer right? The one who kept wanting to dismantle the plane?)

                       

                      actually speaking of plane do you have an Evan one, too? Might make @theducktator happy.

                      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                      #204973
                      Ellette Giselle
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                        @keilah-h

                        Hmm, I could possibly put some together for them…..

                        And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

                        #204974
                        Linus Smallprint
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                          @ellette-giselle

                          Alrighty!

                          Also, I took the liberty of converting all your chapter titles into Headings. Now, navigating the book is super easy, barely an inconvenience!

                          Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                          #204975
                          Ellette Giselle
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                            @linus-smallprint

                            Oh!! Thank you very much!

                             

                            Sorry I’m so incapable when it comes to tech. XD

                            And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

                            #204976
                            Linus Smallprint
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                              Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                              #204977
                              Linus Smallprint
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                                @ellette-giselle

                                You’re welcome!

                                Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                                #204978
                                Keilah H.
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                                  @ellette-giselle yes, do it

                                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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