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July 23, 2025 at 12:17 pm #204705
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
for everyone who was asking, I finally designed an Insignia. What do y’all think?

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July 23, 2025 at 12:29 pm #204706It looks awesome! Is that for the series covers, or an illustration, or what?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 23, 2025 at 12:34 pm #204707Thank you!!
People wanted to know what the insignia on the uniforms was, and it took a bit to design it, but I think I pulled it off.
Glad you like it!!
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July 23, 2025 at 1:21 pm #204708@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
Here is the cover of the book. I’m gonna leave this link up for a bit and then take it down.
Any thoughts?
h ttps://www.canva.com/design/DAGuAVE7PaQ/4KIWD55hnQgjjGPiF3wgPQ/view?utm_content=DAGuAVE7PaQ&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=uniquelinks&utlId=h5f88a665a1
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July 23, 2025 at 1:30 pm #204709@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!
I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.
It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 23, 2025 at 1:31 pm #204710I already found a typo.
And something wonky is up with his outline…..
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 23, 2025 at 1:34 pm #204711Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.
- You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
- “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want it to. It’s more negotiable.
- You wrote “beneath the mask he wares.” Should be “wears.”
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 23, 2025 at 1:34 pm #204712Oh, never mind, you found the typo.
Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 23, 2025 at 1:44 pm #204713Possibly, or it could be a different insignia altogether depending on the Sector. I;’m not sure yet. What do you think?
Thank you for the cover suggestions!!!!!
Yes, I found a few typos! Whoops, you found one I didn’t.
Good thing you looked. XD
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July 23, 2025 at 1:45 pm #204714Lovely! It looks like a book my brother would pick up at Mardel.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
July 23, 2025 at 1:46 pm #204715@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 23, 2025 at 1:47 pm #204717Aw thanks!!!
Would you agree, @power ?
Any suggestions. (besides the odd shapes near his neckline…. which was a reminder for me to clean it up with a brush but I forgot until just now.) and the couple typos already mentioned?
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July 24, 2025 at 8:47 am #204727I was just listening to Ron’s theme song and I thought you and Sniper would enjoy it. XD
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July 24, 2025 at 9:58 am #204728@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll
Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol
Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ron, and I can totally see it fitting Sniper and Crosshair too. If I could I’d make an animation music video of the song starring them. (Animation music videos typically aren’t animated from scratch, they edit existing clips together, often to the beat of the music.)
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 24, 2025 at 10:09 am #204729Lol, my characters are pretty real to me, and I guessed yours were to you. lololol.
You should totally try that!
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