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    Keilah H.
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      @ellette-giselle I see it!

      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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      Ellette Giselle
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        @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore

         

        NEW CHAPTERS

        And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

        #204542
        Ellette Giselle
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          @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore

           

          Another NEW CHAPTER

          And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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          Ellette Giselle
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            @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore

             

            NEW CHAPTER

             

            LAST ONE FOR TODAY. That’s 4 new ones total.

            And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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            hybridlore
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              @ellette-giselle

              Good chapters!

              Evan and Elias were hilarious. I love the team.

              *SPOILER *

              And we got to see Jim again!

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              "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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              Ellette Giselle
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                @hybridlore

                 

                I love the team too!!! Jason and Evan due is top notch, and Elias is great. XD

                 

                YESSS!!!! (not sure if that’s a good thing)

                And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                hybridlore
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  It is.

                  Though why didn’t he have many questions for Jonathan about how he got there?

                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @hybridlore

                    He was kind of stunned and things are moving too fast.

                    And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                    Ellette Giselle
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                      @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore

                       

                      NEW CHAPTERSS

                       

                      THE END!!!

                      *Throws confetti for myself*

                       

                      The book is OVER!!!

                       

                      Now I am leaving tomorrow and will be out of town until the 23rd. That should give y’all plenty of time to read the last of it. When I come back, I plan on taking the next steps into big editing. So I’ll shut down the doc when I get home.

                       

                      THANK Y’ALL SO MUCH!!!

                       

                      I can’t wait to come home and read all the comments!!!

                       

                      (Feel free to back track and make notes anywhere you like as I will read the whole thing from beginning to end when I get back)

                      And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                      Koshka
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                        @ellette-giselle

                        EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

                        That is so exciting! I can’t wait to finish it.

                        *Dumps confetti on your head*

                        Work is letting up for a bit (as in, about to be over for the Summer) so I’ll actually have the time I want to read and comment.

                         

                        A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

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                        Keilah H.
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                          @ellette-giselle wow already????

                           

                          awesome, I’ll be sure to read it!

                          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                          hybridlore
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                            @ellette-giselle

                            So exciting!! Congrats!!

                            I’ll head over there once I make some food. ?

                            "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @koshka

                              yay!!!!!


                              @hybridlore
                                @keilah-h

                              thanks!!

                              And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                              Power
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                                @ellette-giselle

                                Quick observation (And this may have already been mentioned somewhere else. If it was, sorry.)

                                When the fighter plane is stolen, it was being transported by land (Which, based on the fact that it was completely intact, and it’s a plane, would indicate it was only going a short distance) and was apparently fueled up (since it went on a flight almost immediately) . . .

                                I could be wrong, but I don’t believe it’s usually considered safe practice to transport a plane by land fully fueled. (Jet fuel isn’t as volatile as your typically car gas, but it can still go BOOM!)

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                                Power
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                                  Also, where are the rebels getting fuel for their vehicles/new plane? Or, if they are battery powered, the generators that make the electricity?

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