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July 10, 2025 at 9:49 am #204540
@ellette-giselle I see it!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 10, 2025 at 10:47 am #204541@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
NEW CHAPTERS
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 10, 2025 at 11:47 am #204542@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
Another NEW CHAPTER
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 10, 2025 at 1:03 pm #204543@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
NEW CHAPTER
LAST ONE FOR TODAY. That’s 4 new ones total.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 10, 2025 at 1:23 pm #204544Good chapters!
Evan and Elias were hilarious. I love the team.
*SPOILER *
And
we got to see Jim again!-
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hybridlore.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 10, 2025 at 2:50 pm #204546I love the team too!!! Jason and Evan due is top notch, and Elias is great. XD
YESSS!!!! (not sure if that’s a good thing)
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 10, 2025 at 3:05 pm #204547It is.
Though why didn’t he have many questions for Jonathan about how he got there?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 10, 2025 at 8:43 pm #204548He was kind of stunned and things are moving too fast.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 10, 2025 at 11:16 pm #204549@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore
NEW CHAPTERSS
THE END!!!
*Throws confetti for myself*
The book is OVER!!!
Now I am leaving tomorrow and will be out of town until the 23rd. That should give y’all plenty of time to read the last of it. When I come back, I plan on taking the next steps into big editing. So I’ll shut down the doc when I get home.
THANK Y’ALL SO MUCH!!!
I can’t wait to come home and read all the comments!!!
(Feel free to back track and make notes anywhere you like as I will read the whole thing from beginning to end when I get back)
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 10, 2025 at 11:20 pm #204550EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
That is so exciting! I can’t wait to finish it.
*Dumps confetti on your head*
Work is letting up for a bit (as in, about to be over for the Summer) so I’ll actually have the time I want to read and comment.
A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.
July 11, 2025 at 10:05 am #204551@ellette-giselle wow already????
awesome, I’ll be sure to read it!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 11, 2025 at 12:51 pm #204552So exciting!! Congrats!!
I’ll head over there once I make some food. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 11, 2025 at 6:30 pm #204553yay!!!!!
thanks!!
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 18, 2025 at 1:11 am #204608Quick observation (And this may have already been mentioned somewhere else. If it was, sorry.)
When the fighter plane is stolen, it was being transported by land (Which, based on the fact that it was completely intact, and it’s a plane, would indicate it was only going a short distance) and was apparently fueled up (since it went on a flight almost immediately) . . .
I could be wrong, but I don’t believe it’s usually considered safe practice to transport a plane by land fully fueled. (Jet fuel isn’t as volatile as your typically car gas, but it can still go BOOM!)
July 18, 2025 at 1:14 am #204609Also, where are the rebels getting fuel for their vehicles/new plane? Or, if they are battery powered, the generators that make the electricity?
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