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July 5, 2025 at 4:53 pm #204498
sorry!!!! I tried!!
next week. I’ll try for 3 on Monday.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 5, 2025 at 5:34 pm #204500Alright!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 7, 2025 at 8:01 pm #204513@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3 of them!!!!
*throws a handful of confetti on my head*
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July 7, 2025 at 10:58 pm #204514I was reading Hitler Youth: Growing Up in Hitler’s Shadow by Susan Campbell Bartoletti this afternoon and I thought that you might get some interesing ideas out of it in correlation to your book.
July 8, 2025 at 7:13 am #204516Thanks! I’ve studied Hitler Youth a lot. I’ve read parts of that book, I should get it and read the whole thing.
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July 8, 2025 at 1:20 pm #204519I guessed they were going to be intercepted by the rebels! Yess.
Please, please don’t kill off Michael… ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 8, 2025 at 2:02 pm #204520Well, I put them through the wringer first.
Why not? He’s the perfect character to kill.
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July 9, 2025 at 11:16 am #204531@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS
2 of them!
(52 and 53)
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July 9, 2025 at 12:55 pm #204532@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
MORE NEW CHAPTERS
(this one is fun because it develops a few of the side characters a little more.)
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July 9, 2025 at 2:42 pm #204533@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
MORE NEW CHAPTER
Chapter 55,
Okay, now I’m done.
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July 9, 2025 at 7:11 pm #204534Jonathan

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July 9, 2025 at 7:12 pm #204535Michael

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July 9, 2025 at 8:09 pm #204536@ellette-giselle the image of Michael on the top left looks like the main character from Tron Legacy lol
For some reason, I kept imagining him with slightly darker skin, and I think the reason for that is because I have a very faint memory of someone possibly named Michael who had a dark tan kinda skin tone. But I don’t know who he was, or where I knew him from, or even if he was a man or a young boy. Weird.
now if you’d shortened it to Mike, you would’ve made me think of my dad’s friend, who looks nothing like what’s on the moodboard, and if you’d shortened it to Mick, then I would’ve thought Sniper, who also looks nothing like him.
all that to say I really like the boards, they’re cool lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 9, 2025 at 8:10 pm #204537Also somehow I got Jonathan’s look perfectly in my mental image. Huh.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
July 9, 2025 at 9:57 pm #204539That’s funny. If you look at Michael in the top left and Jonathan in the top left you can see the similar face shape.
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