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July 1, 2025 at 12:48 pm #204393
Hmmm. *grins* I guess we shall just have to see. But it can be nothing good.
I mean, I love these characters.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 1, 2025 at 12:52 pm #204395I mean, I love these characters.
So they must suffer, right? ? Lol.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 1, 2025 at 12:53 pm #204396Ha. Ha.
Very funny.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 2, 2025 at 8:21 am #204427@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sits back and smiles*
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 3, 2025 at 12:22 pm #204449@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
New chapters should be out today, but I noticed no one but Hybridlore has read the ones I posted yesterday, (45-46)
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 3, 2025 at 1:18 pm #204451I have read them. 🙂 I’ve just been gone at a friend’s for the past couple days and haven’t given myself time to respond.
I am out of signature ideas
July 3, 2025 at 1:26 pm #204452@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(47)
Only 1. I ran out of time to get the other done and I haven’t found a solid chunk of time to sit down. Barely got this one done.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 3, 2025 at 1:51 pm #204455I love Michael. His explanation was believable and so sweet. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 3, 2025 at 1:51 pm #204456So does everyone else at the base know… you know.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 3, 2025 at 2:20 pm #204457Aw good!! It was believable then?
You may have to email me for that other question. Not exactly sure what you’re asking.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 3, 2025 at 4:01 pm #204458Yes, I sympathized with him. Poor guy.
Yeah, I emailed you. ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 5, 2025 at 1:44 pm #204493New chapters?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
July 5, 2025 at 1:46 pm #204494hopefully.
working on it.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 5, 2025 at 4:00 pm #204496@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(48)
Again, only 1. Barely got this one done. no time to sit down and write and had to do it in little bits.
Next week I hope to really get a good flow.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
July 5, 2025 at 4:36 pm #204497Really? You’re going to leave us with that?
I feel so bad for them right now.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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