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I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off
Same. 🙁
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
Sounds good.
Eh…. it was a wild week. One I’m glad to have over. ?
Thanks, glad you like them! Yes, Amber did do a good job with him, but she’s a peacemaker type.
You think I’m gonna kill someone! *is offended* XD
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
Hey, I was right.
Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! ? I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Yes, but not anyone that we know.
yetJonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! ? I liked the way you did that,
So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
Okay, nice!
Yes, lolol. He did apologize. For real this time.
How about Michael? Thoughts on what he said?
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
I’m going to be in Chicago from Wednesday till Sunday, and we aren’t bringing the laptops, so I’m going to disappear for a few days. I’ll catch up when I return.
?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?
NOOOOO! My grammar Nazi!! *sobs*
lolololololol. Sounds good. I’ll be gone an entire week in July, coming up pretty soon, so that should give you all the time you need. (Though I hope to have this book finished by then)
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS!!!
*evil grin*
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
Michael seems sweet, lol. I liked him.
evil grin*
Oh, no…
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
What are you doing to them?!
No, this is actually really interesting… I wonder what the Agents want with them. Probably nothing good.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
What are you doing to them?!
Haha!!! Badness. ?
Any predictions?!?!
Glad it’s interesting.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
I still feel like Jonathan’s brother might not be dead, but I know you tried to quench that.
Jonathan was pretty smart, and the Agents wanted him before, so they might try to get him to work for them. Or something. Maybe use Michael as leverage. Or they want them to help them defeat the rebels by taking information… ?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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