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June 25, 2025 at 3:00 pm #204280
Evan’s story is crazy. He must sympathize with Jonathan a lot.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 25, 2025 at 5:19 pm #204286Yeah it’s pretty wild.
What makes you think he would sympathize a lot (not because your wrong, but out of curiosity)
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 26, 2025 at 9:45 am #204292@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
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June 26, 2025 at 1:46 pm #204297Good chapters!
Amber and James both have tough backstories…
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 26, 2025 at 7:35 pm #204303Yes, and yet they handle it so differently.
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June 27, 2025 at 12:02 pm #204310@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper
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June 27, 2025 at 12:55 pm #204312Yikes. Poor Jonathan.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 27, 2025 at 1:01 pm #204313I know.
But he is kind of being blind and self pitying. He does need to see that he’s not the only one who’s been hurt.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 27, 2025 at 1:07 pm #204314Exactly.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 27, 2025 at 1:11 pm #204315Now that you’ve seen a good bit of them, what do you think of the guys (and girl) on Jonathan’s team?
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June 27, 2025 at 1:13 pm #204316I like Evan, he’s probably my favorite. The other guys sort of blend together a little for me (that might just be a me thing though.) Amber is fun too.
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
June 27, 2025 at 7:39 pm #204321Haha, Evan is great.
I find it odd that the others blend. I would get that with Jason and Brian because they aren’t around as much, but I’m surprised Ron and Michael do.
Interesting.
And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music
June 28, 2025 at 6:26 pm #204325@hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power
NEW CHAPTERS
Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.
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June 29, 2025 at 3:49 pm #204333@ellette-giselle It’s okay!! I’m late to reading them anyway.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
June 29, 2025 at 5:24 pm #204334All good things, hopefully?
I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.
Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
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