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    hybridlore
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      @ellette-giselle

      Evan’s story is crazy. He must sympathize with Jonathan a lot.

      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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      Ellette Giselle
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        @hybridlore

        Yeah it’s pretty wild.

        What makes you think he would sympathize a lot (not because your wrong, but out of curiosity)

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        Ellette Giselle
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          hybridlore
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            @ellette-giselle

            Good chapters!

            Amber and James both have tough backstories…

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            Ellette Giselle
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              @hybridlore

               

              Yes, and yet they handle it so differently.

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              Ellette Giselle
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                hybridlore
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                  @ellette-giselle

                  Yikes. Poor Jonathan.

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                  Ellette Giselle
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                    @hybridlore

                    I know.

                     

                    But he is kind of being blind and self pitying. He does need to see that he’s not the only one who’s been hurt.

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                    hybridlore
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                      @ellette-giselle

                      Exactly.

                      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                      Ellette Giselle
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                        Now that you’ve seen a good bit of them, what do you think of the guys (and girl) on Jonathan’s team?

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                        hybridlore
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                          @ellette-giselle

                          I like Evan, he’s probably my favorite. The other guys sort of blend together a little for me (that might just be a me thing though.) Amber is fun too.

                          "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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                          Ellette Giselle
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                            @hybridlore

                            Haha, Evan is great.

                            I find it odd that the others blend. I would get that with Jason and Brian because they aren’t around as much, but I’m surprised Ron and Michael do.

                            Interesting.

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                            Ellette Giselle
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                              Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.

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                              Keilah H.
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                                @ellette-giselle It’s okay!! I’m late to reading them anyway.

                                "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                                hybridlore
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                                  @ellette-giselle

                                  All good things, hopefully?

                                  I liked these two chapters. Amber handled Jonathan very well, and I’m excited to see him have the conversation with Michael. I also want to know how their mission goes.

                                  Why do I feel like this is the part where you might kill someone off?

                                  "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.

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