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    Ellette Giselle
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      @freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint  (not sure if I’m supposed to tag you or not. Let me know)

       

      Hello all. This is going to be a wild ride. A few of y’all have agreed to help, and I’m going to tag others as well. Let me know if you’d like to back off the team and I’ll stop tagging.

       

      (I could use some impute from guys, especially if I loose Linus.   @jonas    @power   if either of you would be willing to assist, that would be great. I think there are a few other guys on here…. but I’m not sure)

       

      TO ANYONE ELSE WILLING TO HELP:

      Your mission, should you chose to accept it, is to analyze, read, tear into, and help me figure out these books. If I could also have some grammar Nazis nailing this, that would be wonderful, because then I could skip a few of the editing levels. I am trying to have these out by Christmas so that I can give them to my brothers who have been begging for them. I’m on the 5th set of rewrites and have hit a wall. I know they aren’t good enough to publish, but I’ve tried every trick in the book and I can’t see where I’m going wrong. I removed the book 2 MC and replaced him with the original book 2 Ally, and I’m just about completely rewriting that book, but book 1 I like pretty well. I just need help. As always, should you or any member of your team be caught or killed, the secretary will disavow any knowledge of your actions. This message will self district in five seconds.

       

       

      And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

      #203676
      Ellette Giselle
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        Thinking of a few others……

         


        @kyronthearcanin
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        #203677
        Ellette Giselle
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          @freed_and_redeemed     @hybridlore      @koshka     @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon      @linus-smallprint

           

          BOOK AESTHETIC!!!

          (characters to follow.)

           

          And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

          #203678
          Ellette Giselle
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            Jonathan

             

             

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            #203679
            Ellette Giselle
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              #203680
              Ellette Giselle
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                Amber

                 

                And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

                #203681
                Ellette Giselle
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                  Michael

                   

                  And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                  freedom
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                    @ellette-giselle I am insanely busy working with other authors and their project(s) right now? (as well as finalizing details for the re-release/2nd edition of Freedom’s Fire…shhh?)

                    I wish I could help, but I don’t want to be too swamped? it looks super cool though, and I hope you get the help you need!!

                    "…but we are safe, truly and wonderfully safe, when we keep walking with Him.”

                    #203683
                    Ellette Giselle
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                      @freed_and_redeemed

                      No problem!

                       

                      oooo! I can’t wait to read it!

                      And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

                      #203684
                      freedom
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                        @ellette-giselle it’s not much different, haha, mostly just fixing the formatting issues and some grammar and things since a friend offered to be my editor this time?

                        oh and probably a new cover that matches with Broken Shackles more?

                        "…but we are safe, truly and wonderfully safe, when we keep walking with Him.”

                        #203689
                        Ellette Giselle
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                          @freed_and_redeemed

                          Yay!! That’s so cool that you have someone editing for you.

                          I’d also be available any time for that sort of thing.

                          And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                          -GRCR-
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                            @ellette-giselle

                            Oh wait is this the book you had started sharing in the Chat Chat a while back? That I was reading?

                            I’ll try to help where I can… I’m not the greatest at editing… or giving feedback… but I’ll do what I can, whenever I have a moment.

                             

                            • This reply was modified 9 months ago by -GRCR-. Reason: wrote something wrong

                            wa wawawa waaaa

                            #203694
                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @grcr

                              Yes, that was the 3rd rewrite.

                              And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who couldn't hear the music

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                              The Ducktator
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                                @ellette-giselle

                                I’ll be your grammer Nazi!

                                ?For our Blessed Lady's sake, bring us in good ale!?

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                                Keilah H.
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                                  @ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!

                                   

                                  Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.

                                   

                                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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