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@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint (not sure if I’m supposed to tag you or not. Let me know)
Hello all. This is going to be a wild ride. A few of y’all have agreed to help, and I’m going to tag others as well. Let me know if you’d like to back off the team and I’ll stop tagging.
(I could use some impute from guys, especially if I loose Linus. @jonas @power if either of you would be willing to assist, that would be great. I think there are a few other guys on here…. but I’m not sure)
TO ANYONE ELSE WILLING TO HELP:
Your mission, should you chose to accept it, is to analyze, read, tear into, and help me figure out these books. If I could also have some grammar Nazis nailing this, that would be wonderful, because then I could skip a few of the editing levels. I am trying to have these out by Christmas so that I can give them to my brothers who have been begging for them. I’m on the 5th set of rewrites and have hit a wall. I know they aren’t good enough to publish, but I’ve tried every trick in the book and I can’t see where I’m going wrong. I removed the book 2 MC and replaced him with the original book 2 Ally, and I’m just about completely rewriting that book, but book 1 I like pretty well. I just need help. As always, should you or any member of your team be caught or killed, the secretary will disavow any knowledge of your actions. This message will self district in five seconds.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
Thinking of a few others……
@kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @theducktator @grcrFires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
BOOK AESTHETIC!!!
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Jonathan
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Amber
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Michael
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
@ellette-giselle I am insanely busy working with other authors and their project(s) right now😭 (as well as finalizing details for the re-release/2nd edition of Freedom’s Fire…shhh🫢)
I wish I could help, but I don’t want to be too swamped😅 it looks super cool though, and I hope you get the help you need!!
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No problem!
oooo! I can’t wait to read it!
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
@ellette-giselle it’s not much different, haha, mostly just fixing the formatting issues and some grammar and things since a friend offered to be my editor this time🥳
oh and probably a new cover that matches with Broken Shackles more🤭
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Yay!! That’s so cool that you have someone editing for you.
I’d also be available any time for that sort of thing.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
Oh wait is this the book you had started sharing in the Chat Chat a while back? That I was reading?
I’ll try to help where I can… I’m not the greatest at editing… or giving feedback… but I’ll do what I can, whenever I have a moment.
*sadly eats another scoop of ice cream*
Yes, that was the 3rd rewrite.
Fires will rise to testify that 2+2=4. Swords will be drawn to prove that leaves are green in summer
@ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!
Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
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