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    Andrew
    @raxforge
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      A short story for all to enjoy,

      Don’t worry, it doesn’t have gore,

      And I do hope you don’t find abore.

      I do not have a friend named Chris,

      But here is the link you don’t want to miss:

       

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f2pVUjwzN521ZTd4i3oktKmzHH-2NxHUMjR8BUlEYIA/edit?usp=sharing

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      Teddy Bear
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      Ruth
      @rae
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        Tagging ppl!


        @ellette-giselle
        @jonas @whalekeeper @theshadow @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theducktator @grcr @keilah-h

        Sorry if I’m annoying you guys.

        "YOU NEED MORE FRIENDS! Ignore me, just talking to LEGOs" -Me
        #AnduthForever (hopefully💕)

        #186754
        Ellette Giselle
        @ellette-giselle
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          @raxforge

          Nice! Nice!

          I like this! You have some good humor!

          No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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          Keilah H.
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            @raxforge I love it! Sweet little story, and the way you wrote it was funny.

            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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            -GRCR-
            @grcr
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              Finally finished reading this, and boy I love it!! Very cute and funny!! 💛💛

               

              you're unique—just like everyone else.
              i've got your nose.

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              TheShadow
              @theshadow
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                @raxforge

                Sorry this is late. Your story was really good and your style of writing is really fun and engaging!

                “Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

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