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  • #52995
    EpicAddie2
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      @shannon I actually have a character named Hazel 🙂

      INFJ ~ 4w5
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      #52996
      Anonymous
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        @epicaddie2 That’s cool! *sighs* I love that name, especially when it’s associated with green eyes for some reason.

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        EpicAddie2
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          @shannon I think my Hazel has brown eyes… *shrugs* I should probably know this.

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          #52999
          Anonymous
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            @epicaddie XD Glad you at least remember her name ; )

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            EpicAddie2
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              @shannon 😉

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              #53113
              Ingrid
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                @shannon  Hmmm…for some reason the link isn’t working for me.  Could you try posting it again?

                A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                #53127
                Anonymous
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                  Sure, here it is https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vTdt5s2PG2F-PmcisOdHk19OxfFQ9TMa8PwY4VOvIpA/edit?usp=sharing

                  #53486
                  Ingrid
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                    @shannon Just wanted to let you know that I read and critiqued your story this morning.  Hopefully I wasn’t too harsh… 🙂

                    You did a fantastic job!  Let me know if you have any questions about my critiques.  😉

                    A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

                    #53489
                    Anonymous
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                      @ingridrd Awesome!

                      I got an email about your comments. Thank you so much for doing this for me! I read over them in the email, and (although I haven’t looked at them in context) I can already tell that you definitely weren’t to harsh. Trust me, not much bothers me. Thanks again!!! I’ll let you know if I have any questions 😊

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