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@scripter-of-kingdoms You’re honestly spot-on tho XD The ones I don’t care for as much go through waaay less trauma and heartache than the ones I absolutely adore. Weird how that worksssss XD
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres Well, thank you!! Yeah, it’s true, I think when there’s more emotion and, like, experience in a poem I like it more!
staring at the fields
if nothing's really real
i'll make the winter now my home@scripter-of-kingdoms Yess, same XD np!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
A haiku about my new piglet, Saucy!
Piglet on my lap-
I look to your eyes;
Intelligent, brown.
staring at the fields
if nothing's really real
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Beautiful! I love it! Really inspiring.
@abigail-m Oooohh that is sooo good. Like Joy said, it’s really inspiring!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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@abigail-m I love that!!
@abigail-m absolutely!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
So I just finished this poem today that I’ve been working on for a while. The first line came to me a while back and I wrote it down, buuut then I forgot about it XD I came across it again the other day so I worked on it.
The Snow Queen
Mama laughed when she heard
the words that were carried
by the ol’ mockingbird.
Put down your rollin’ pins,
set ’em aside.
winter’s a’comin’
and you better hide.
Paw’d kept his ol’ stride
through many a day
an’ through many a night,
workin’ so hard
to keep out our fright,
’til he’d worked himself silly,
that cold, fateful night.
I still remember,
though a young thing I was,
that evenin’ he came home,
dressed white in snow fuzz.
His face was pale as the moon,
and Mama said she thought he’d swoon.
If he’d’ve agreed, then we’d’ve felt better,
but the answer that came, Mama said, was the weather.
“The snow queen’s out t’night,
so pack yer things, Bonny,
an’ we’ll move out now, ‘right?”
See, I was young,
and I didn’t know better.
So I packed up my bags
and ran out to greet her.
There she was, tall as a tree.
and I yelped as the cold
went past cloth to me.
I heard the ol’ bird, though ’twas just a memory.
Put down your rollin’ pins,
set ’em aside.
winter’s a’comin’
and you better hide.
Well winter had come, and we were all payin’–
That ol’ little house, with the snow all arrayin’.
The Queen hovered high,
up and up, touchin’ the sky.
Her face stared down,
with a question in her eye.
Said she, “My, my,” And placed an icy hand on mine.
“Come with me, Darlin’, and we’ll go to the sky.”
See, I was young,
and didn’t know better.
So I sat down my bags
and went with her.
The snow began to swirl,
and I stared in wide wonder
as the stars took us upward,
far inside the blue thunder.
They found me there the next mornin’,
wrapped in a blanket of snow.
How I got there, no one claimed to know.
Mama’d laughed when she heard
the words that were carried
by the ol’ mockingbird.
Put down your rollin’ pins,
set ’em aside.
winter’s a’comin’
and you better hide.
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
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@daisy-torres WHOA. that was AMAZING! I love the imagery and the Southern accent!
@gracie-j Thank you so much!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
Oh my goodness, girl I LOOOVE THIS!!!!!!! You’ve got some serious talent for sure!!!! AWESOME!!! THANK YOU for sharing! <33
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