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Thank you so much, Elizabeth!!!!! <33333 I started smiling sooooo big when I read that!!! I’m super happy you were hooked (and thanks for taking the time to read it; I know my chapters are quite lengthy)!!! Oh, you’re not the only one *cries on the inside and wishes I could have an owl*
Thank you so much! I try to put in extra effort for descriptions because I want the reader to flawlessly see everything (and Nordan is a beautiful city, so I went wild with descriptions).
Ha! What a coincidence, because I got a “pink” feeling, too! O_O Yeah, of course!! I’m so glad you liked it!! For a first-time writer, I’m very appreciative of all the feedback!! 🙂